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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:23 pm

Starfighter123 wrote:((Here we go again.Whoo Hoo!))
Satisfaction ((continued))

We couldnt beleive our eyes, there was little John up in that tree...dead.We ghasped in horror, I looked in the corner of my eye. Mike was crying, I felt bad for him and I bet Cleo did too. But that sad moment only lasted about 3 seconds because before we could blink again the Arogth was on top of us. Our faces went from shocked, to horrified in one second. The Argoth was growling at us, druel dripping from his mouth, nearly missing our heads. We just stared at eachother, eye to eye. Then he did something I thought he couldnt do, he talked. "So, you thought you could get away from me. You imbusils." That was a common line for a bad guy. Though I didnt know that he could talk like that, all smart. Usulally you would hear from a monster like that is, "You bad, me eat you now." He was smarter than I thought. Then, he stood up on his hind legs, and Cleo did the unthinkable. She made a ran for it, that move was dumber than someone on thoose shows on truTV or SPIKE. But we couldnt beleive what she was doing.
"Cleo!" Mike and I yelled at the same time. "What the heck are you doing!?" I yell at her. She looked back but kept running away.
"I'm getting out of here, thats what I'm doing!" She yelled back. Then the Argoth got mad and bolted after her, she was no match. Mike and I closed out eyes and we heard a terrifying scream in pain. And then it suddenly stopped. We open our eyes, still on the ground and see what has happened to her. There was her bloody remains and her body got literally ripped in two. Blood was dripping from the Argoth's hands, we couldnt beleive our eyes. There was the harsh remains of our best friend, Cleo. Her face was still in the screaming position. I couldnt cry, neither could Mike, we were in shock. Then the Argoth turned around, a small bit of blood was dripping from his mouth. We stood up staring at the Argoth. Then he bolted in our direction.

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Oh no! Cleo :c Still great though. This Argoth isn't afraid to do anything.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:27 pm

I know, I guess its just how I made him.*Shrugs*, he's that type of monster you wouldnt want to mess with.(*Tilts head up* "Oh, Cleo.)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:31 pm

I'm just a bit sad because I really liked Cleo. It's a horror story though, and characters must die, so I'll get over it XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:35 pm

i cant believe cleo is now dead, lets hope the argoth is almost satisfied, hes killed so many people and he is still hungry, must be big, he came from the woods and it looks like it will all end in the woods, i wonder how the argoth came to be, freak accident, government experiment, or maybe a prehistoric creature that has evolved over millions of years and turned into this monstrous creature that speaks advanced english, or maybe he just learned to read, and started reading advanced english for dummies lol

cant wait for the next bit of the series
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:41 pm

@ *Madame Lotus*- I liked her too, but I had a little survey with my friends and they voted her. Sorry.

@Li Syaoran- Im not exactly sure where he came from, my dad read it and he got the interpretation that the laptop was a portal and he escaped. But I think he might be just some random thing that comes up, in most horror stories. I only thought about how he came to be for a little. But I'll think some more.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:45 pm

DragonFlight© wrote:The story I'm about to tell, happened to me last May, 2004. Everyone I've told does not believe me, even my boyfriend who was there at the time still to this day believes I was still asleep. But I swear to god I was still awake!
One week me and my boyfriend had taken a trip to Michigan to visit his friends and family. We drove for like a day and a half to get back home to Texas. We had made it home at about 3am, and we both had to wake up for work at 7am that morning, and we were both dead tired. Well we had fallen asleep and I started having this crazy nightmare. We were at a house party with a bunch of friends and they had asked me to run to the car to get something. The car was parked on the other side of the street. So I started jogging through the yard and was about to go between 2 cars when I saw this man running the opposite direction in the street. I kept jogging and right when i got inbetween the 2 cars I heard him yell, "HEY!!!!" I stopped and turned around and he was right in my face, so I fell back. Now in my dream I was lying there, I couldn't move or scream or anything. He just knelt down over me and put his face right in my face. He was a blur, so I couldn't see his face. He just kept moving his head back and forth, and it scared me so much that I woke up almost screaming! I sat there for a minute scared out of my mind. (Usually a nightmare like that wouldn't scare me like it did.) Well I fell back asleep and was having a GREAT dream about me and my boyfriend making love. He was on top of me, kissing me and then he put his head down and started kissing my neck. Now at this point I was getting into it. Then when he lifted his head back up, IT WAS THE SAME GUY!!!! I didn't see his face, just a blurry face. Then this time he started to strangle me. I was trying to fight and kick, but I could barely move. I felt like I couldn't breathe, then I woke up. At this point I was scared to death! I turned to my left to wake my boyfriend up because I was SOOOO scared! I leaned over and something from his side of the bed came up and grabbed my face and pushed me back down on the bed. It was holding me there, trying to suffocate me. I tried to yell, but i couldn't, I tried to move, but i couldn't. I finally sat up and was able to move. It was like something was sitting on my chest making me unable to move. I couldn't go back to sleep the rest of the day. I was afraid to stay in that room again. I've heard this happened to other people too, but they say they think it was a demon.
Mawhaha this one is scary
There was this girl and she was with
her friend. They were looking through peoples MySpace sites.

The girl slowly came upon this one
myspace. It had creatures in the background and the man
looked like a psycho. She started
laughing with her friend commenting on how ugly he was. Right
then, an instant message came up. It said:

SatanStalker: So how do you like my
MySpace?

XxLoVemExX: What?

XxLoVemExX: Who is this anyway?

SatanStalker: Well, you should know;
you're looking at my MySpace right now.

XxLoVemExX: How do you know?

SatanStalker: I know. I know when people look at my MySpace.

XxLoVemExX: What? That doesn't make
any sense, how?

SatanStalker: I just do.

SatanStalker: Especially when pretty girls like you visit.

SatanStalker: With very nice legs I might
add.

At the time the girl was wearing high
shorts. She started to pull them down a little bit to cover whatever she could. She and her friend started to get worried now.

XxLoVemExX: Ok whatever man you're
starting to scare the living sh*t out of me.

SatanStalker: You should be afraid.

SatanStalker: You wouldn't want an ugly
guy like me touching your legs, right? I mean that's what you just said about me with your friend a minute ago.

They were in shock.

Her friend: Holy crap man just block him
he's a f***ing psycho!

The girl: Ok holy crap, you think he's
watching us?

SatanStalker: I am.

SatanStalker: Well it wouldn't really
matter if you blocked me anyway; it wouldn't stop me
from coming to your house.

XxLoVemExX: What? My house?

SatanStalker: Yeah, you're both alone so it's not a problem.

XxLoVemExX: Ok I think Im going to
leave now because you're freaking me out.

SatanStalker: Your screen name says
love me, and trust me that won't be a problem.

SatanStalker has just signed off.

The girl and her friend were really
scared.

Girls friend: Whatever lets just go upstairs, trust me.

I doubt he's really coming. It's just a joke
from someone. They went upstairs and were having a pillow fight. All of a sudden the girls friend said she had to go to the bathroom. The girl said ok.

Ten minutes later the girl noticed that her friend was still in the bathroom and was wondering what was up. She goes and knocks but no one says anything.

She opens th door and finds her friend there on the floor dead. She started to scream but when she turned around he was there.

News the next morning reported that there was one girl dead in the bathroom; her neck sliced with blood all over
the room. Her head was nailed to the wall. Just her head.

If you do not repost this tonight
there will be three men, one in your bathroom, one in your room, and one killing your parents at that very moment. Starting tonight at 1:30am. Well what are you waiting for?


Is that second one suppose to be a chain-mail? Because chain-mail is not real a story can't kill. But anyway I don't think we could repost it on this website.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snampa » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:48 pm

I-miss-u wrote:Is that second one suppose to be a chain-mail? Because chain-mail is not real a story can't kill. But anyway I don't think we could repost it on this website.

*kills super-long quote*
Chances are, a lot of these stories aren't real. xD And none of them can kill.
And I found that one kinda creepy. :3 What's the problem if it's chain-mail?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:50 pm

The chain-mail one was posted log ago and we said that you could not repost those it causes spam
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snampa » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:52 pm

Oh! Well I didn't know it was already posted. xD Sorry.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:56 pm

Waffo wrote:
I-miss-u wrote:Is that second one suppose to be a chain-mail? Because chain-mail is not real a story can't kill. But anyway I don't think we could repost it on this website.

*kills super-long quote*
Chances are, a lot of these stories aren't real. xD And none of them can kill.
And I found that one kinda creepy. :3 What's the problem if it's chain-mail?


No, no I didn't mean it like that. I loved the story but the chain-mail part creeped me out...alot.
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