At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

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What do YOU think should happen next (see page 14 [2nd post] for latest entry)?

You should make an army of Jenettes. ARISE JENETTIANS!
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29%
Make an army of Anger's (I like his ebilness....).
1
3%
Make them go to Disneyland!
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14%
Make Suzi appear and kill them all! MWAHAHAHAHA!
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3%
Have Amy eat some pie... or cake.... or BOTH!
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6%
Jessy should die! She's a little brat!
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BRING PETE AND INDAH BACK TO LIFE TO SAVE THE DAY! WOOHOO! GO TEAM PETE/INDAH!
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17%
Have a chef come in and bake a cake.
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3%
Make some pie!
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9%
*Hums tune* Amy should sing!
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17%
 
Total votes : 35

Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Feb 01, 2012 6:29 am

xxazul63xx wrote:if Jeanette dies, i will sit by your bed and growl at you the whole night, and yes i do growl, im a were-wolf.
>:(
(I won't literately sit by your bed, i'll imagine it! ooh mysterious)

......... scary.... XD

































I tried to even grab Jenette, but her head was already under the water. It didn't come back up. Suddenly, there was a bright light, and I stumbled back.
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..... It was sorta creapy. He reminded me of Linda.... I mean Aurauria.... I mean Mom. He landed on the ground in front of me. And then I looked at him again. He was holding Jenette! (His words will be in a blueish greenish color)
What is this? A sacrifice?
He looked at Jenette.
Who is it you wish to save?
I wish to save my little sister.
Jenette looked at Jessy, and then at me. Her eyes said "Don't worry". But how could I NOT worry?!
Don't do it, Jenette!
I have to.
I ran at the dog surrounded by food. But I ran straight through him, and nearly ran into the water, but I stopped at the edge (luckily).
You DARE try to harm me?!
He was roaring with anger. I could tell. This wasn't good.
You will now see what happens to those who try to harm me!
He roared, and I began to panick. I looked at the river. It started turning around and around, until it was a whirlpool. And in less then a milisecond, the water shot up. A hand was forming in the water (and a very large hand at that). The water hand lunged at me, but I moved out of the way just in time.... but Jessy didn't. It grabbed her. She screamed, and the hand pulled her and itself into the water and down.
JESSY!
But I couldn't see her anymore. I couldn't hear her anymore. The hand shot up out of the water again, and this time it lunged at Flower. She had fainted long before this, so she didn't make a sound when it pulled her down the water just like it had with Jessy. And then it lunged at me! It grabbed me and pulled me down. I didn't even have time to scream! I felt the water surround my body as I went down. I was holding my breath, but I had to let go sometime. And before I knew it, I let go of my breath and saw complete darkness.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Wed Feb 01, 2012 11:11 am

Wow...... :o
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby kaypatts » Wed Feb 01, 2012 1:23 pm

If, Jessy, AMy and Flower die, I'm fine. But JEANNETE is a different situation. I wanna be her for halloween!
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:07 pm

Ellies wrote:Wow...... :o

*Dun Dun Dun [dramatic music plays]*
Kayla wrote:If, Jessy, AMy and Flower die, I'm fine. But JEANNETE is a different situation. I wanna be her for halloween!

Man! You're like a VERY big Jenette fan! XD You should like, make a fanclub for her or something. XD (That would be pretty cool........ :))

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ourpawprints » Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:42 pm

I don't exactly get why this is so popular. Not to sound offensive, its fine I just don't see whats so amazing about it.
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You shoot me down, but I get up

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Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Betta132 » Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:16 pm

Well, it's funny and random. People like funny and random. Yours is good too.
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Wed Feb 01, 2012 10:36 pm

.....

Thats all I can say.

if I was amy Id get out a mallet from nowhere and try to smash the thing. and then fail miserably XDD CX
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:22 am

No!!!!!!!!!! Jessy must not die either! niether Amy! The only one who should die is flower!
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:02 am

CookieRaider wrote:D:

D:
ourpawprints wrote:I don't exactly get why this is so popular. Not to sound offensive, its fine I just don't see whats so amazing about it.

I don't either (even though I'm the writer). I just started writing one day, sent a few of my friends the link, and people liked it. No idea why people like it (I know, it probably sounds odd coming from the author of it....).
Betta132 wrote:Well, it's funny and random. People like funny and random. Yours is good too.

Ya, I guess so. :)
brambletalon98 wrote:.....

Thats all I can say.

if I was amy Id get out a mallet from nowhere and try to smash the thing. and then fail miserably XDD CX

lol XD
xxazul63xx wrote:No!!!!!!!!!! Jessy must not die either! niether Amy! The only one who should die is flower!

You will have to wait and see..... *Dun dun dun*

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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