' flo's challenge to you //

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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:20 am

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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby silkteeth. » Sat Mar 11, 2017 7:21 am

      my writing dump

      — they won't be very good, since i'm a poor writer. i'd appreciate some advice, if possible.
      i really like this challenge, i wanted to try it sooner i've just not had the motivation.
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby cainhurst » Sat Mar 11, 2017 8:48 am

    just wanted to pop in to suggest something if y'all want to edit your writing
    this is a pretty decent help for editing - it does not replace editing it yourself/with the help of others,
    but it does indeed point out parts that might need to be changed up a bit and can make the process a lot easier c:
    of course you shouldn't change everything just because the app tells you to tho, that'd be silly
    that's why letting actual people look over your work is always a nice idea after all
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Pyjaks » Sat Mar 11, 2017 9:00 am

prince lotor wrote:
    just wanted to pop in to suggest something if y'all want to edit your writing
    this is a pretty decent help for editing - it does not replace editing it yourself/with the help of others,
    but it does indeed point out parts that might need to be changed up a bit and can make the process a lot easier c:
    of course you shouldn't change everything just because the app tells you to tho, that'd be silly
    that's why letting actual people look over your work is always a nice idea after all


Ooh neat!! I'll definitely try it out for my next one :0
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby blackbird. » Sat Mar 11, 2017 11:14 pm

      welcome to those who just joined us!
      sorry i've been mia i was overseas without wifi
      but i'm back and i got my latest one-shot up!

      @prince lotor
        that's a pretty neat site/app!
        thanks for introducing it to us c:
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby eri » Sun Mar 12, 2017 7:26 am

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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby tenturo » Sun Mar 12, 2017 7:36 am

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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Mar 23, 2017 5:25 pm

I'm prepping for Camp NaNo, which is next month, so writing has been slowww... But who knows, I might be able to squeeze out a few more prompts while procrastinating doing my camp-story next month! XP
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby cainhurst » Thu Mar 23, 2017 9:08 pm

    been super stuck as of late, i just don't seem to really "connect" with any of the prompts tbh
    i started one, but got frustrated two paragraphs in and decided to get rid of it again
    at this point i'm honestly tempted to ask someone else to choose one for me and just... power through it somehow
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Thu Mar 23, 2017 11:36 pm

Honestly when that happens Lotor, I go work on something else until I come up with an idea. Because even if you manage to power through it chances are your not going to be too happy about it. Remember that you can interpret the prompt anyway you like really.
And if I really, really, have to do one, then I let it roll around in my head while I'm doing something totally unrelated from the computer. Walking, cleaning, lying in bed and staring at the ceiling seem to be the best things to clear your head while thinking about the prompt. It seems to help.
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