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Who's your favorite character of the main 6?

Amy
4
33%
Jenette
4
33%
Suzi
1
8%
Gish
2
17%
The Demon Queen
1
8%
Ginger
0
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Mar 16, 2013 7:04 am

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Thanks, Mento! XD
Feel The Beat wrote:Hey JF! I think that Join.me is a great idea! It would be great!

Thanks, Katie!
.:Invisi:. wrote:Definitely! However, it would probably have to be in the morning if you wanted to do it with me, because of the time difference. Like, when you do it with me most of the time, it's often 6/7/8 o'clock at night.

Hmm.... it would be a bit difficult because I'm sure everyone lives in different time zones. Maybe I could hold multiple join.me's that way everybody will get a chance.
whoa gal1 wrote:I don't have join.me. :cry:

What do you mean? You don't even have to download it if you're just watching my screen...

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Mar 16, 2013 2:22 pm

I'm sorry I haven't written more! I'm going to try and write more tomorrow!
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:05 pm

Decided to write an entry lately! :)















I smile at the white clouds. It's so beautiful up here. The ground is made of gold and it shone all over the room. It smelled wonderful, though I couldn't pin-point the smell.
Jenette? I don't want to go back. It's so nice up here.
Jenette walked toward me, an earnest look in her eyes.
I know it is, Amy. But you have to come back. The world needs you.
Will I be able to come back after I help the world?
That's your choice entirely. I can't make that decision for you.
Jenette? Where exactly am I?
You're in Heaven.
So... I like, died?
Jenette nodded.
Then how come you're here? Did you die too?
No. Well, yes. I was dead before, remember? Then DQ brought up my spirit, which is down there on Earth. I'm up here, really, but my spirit is down there.
... I don't understand.
Alright, think about it as if the real me is up here and the me down there is only a projection of me.
Oh... okay, I think I get it. But wait, does that mean that the me down there is a projection of me?
Yes. But the real you needs to go back down there. The real you can use your powers.
Wait, so how can you use your powers down there if you're just a projection?
It's different with me. I was already dead when I got my powers, so the projectional me had to gain them. You got your powers and then died, so the real you is the only one that can use your powers.
Okay.... I think that makes sense. But how exactly do I.... delete my projection and put the real me in its place?
I've already talked with the Big Man. He said He'd get you down there.
Big Man? Who's that?
God.
Oh.... wow. He was that big bright guy in the beginning, right?
Yup. That would be Him.
How did I meet God and not know it?
It's okay. You'll see Him again. But now you need to go back to Earth. You ready?
Yeah. What do I do?
Just close your eyes. I'll see you below.
You mean the "projectional you" will see me below.
Right. Now close your eyes, Amy.
I closed my eyes.
Thanks, Jenette.
For what?
For being an amazing sister.
I didn't hear a reply. I opened my eyes slowly and realized I was laying on concrete. Staring down at me wasn't Jenette. Wasn't even one of my friends. It was Pete, my old boyfriend.
Amy? You okay?
Pete?
I sat up and ran my head into his. I moaned and rubbed it.
That hurt. But yes, it is me. You okay?
Yeah, I think. My head hurts now, though.
Pete smiled and suddenly hugged me. My eyes grew large but they soon relaxed and I hugged him back.
I missed you so much.
I missed you too.
I held and held onto him. I didn't realize how much I'd missed him 'til I actually saw him.
Where.... where were you all this time, Pete?
Rhubarb was holding me captive. Today he just.... let me go. No reason whatsoever.
Are you sure you weren't followed?
I looked over Pete's shoulder and saw Jenette. Standing beside her was DQ.
I don't know. I didn't even consider that...
Of course you didn't.
Rhubarb came out of nowhere and grinned.
Hello, not-my-lover-Clyff.
Jenette, DQ was lying. I am Clyff.
Jenette looked over at DQ, horror in her eyes.
He's lying, right?
DQ stared at the ground.
He's not.
I really am Clyff, Jen.
Jenette snapped her head up.
Don't you dare call me Jen again.
Oh! Oh! You rhymed, Jenette! Jen, again! It rhymes!
Jenette shot me a look that could freeze ice.
Sorry. Continue with your conversation.
Jenette shot me another look then turned to face Rhubarb.
Why can't I call you Jen? That is your name, isn't it?
Well... yes, but I go by Jenette now. If you don't call me that then you should just leave.
You've grown touchy, Jen... oh, I mean Jenette.
Jenette gave him her look.
I have a question for you, Jenette. Do you remember that necklace I gave you? The one with wings?
Jenette didn't reply.
Well, you remember how you tore it off when you found out who I really was?
Again, no reply.
How then do you have it around your neck now?
Jenette touched her neck where the necklace with the wing pendant with her name on it hung on a silver chain.
I found it.
But why are you wearing it if you don't love me anymore?
I never said I didn't love you anymore.
What was that?
Nothing. If you want it back, you can have it.
Jenette looped the long chain over her head and threw the necklace to the ground. It skidded and landed right in front of Rhubarb's feet.
Jenette? This.... what happened back there.... when I died-
Stop stuttering, non-dead-but-soon-to-be-boy. Get to the point.
When I died back there and you found this necklace in my hands, I had to do that. The agency ordered me too.
But how could you not tell me? I loved you, Clyff. When you died, I almost died. I felt like I couldn't live anymore. I felt like there was nothing to live for. I know I acted like it was nothing when you died and I just ran off to help Amy, but that's not what it was. I cared about you, Clyff. I loved you more than anything in the world. And when you died, I died.
Rhubarb, or Clyff, looked at Jenette. He was speechless.
How do you think I was supposed to act when you suddenly appeared after having "died"? Was I supposed to be giddy with joy and jumping up and down and hugging you? I thought you died, Clyff! And then you show up and claim that you've been Rhubarb the whole time so of course I'm a little freaked out!
I'm sorry, Jenette. If I could go back in time I would change that moment.
But you can't, so it doesn't matter. You did what you did and you can't take it back.
That's actually why I'm here. I've.... I've come to change what's happened.
If you think that I'll forgive you right now then you must be crazy, because-
No, I'm not talking about asking for your forgiveness. I've already tried that multiple times, and I know you will never forgive me for what I have done... unless I change it.
Yeah, but for that you'd have to go back into the past to change it.
Rhubarb (er, Clyff) cocked his head slightly and grinned.
Wait a minute.... no way, Clyff! You wouldn't dare!
For you, Jen, I would.
Jenette was so shocked she didn't even correct him when he called her Jen.
Uh.... can somebody please explain all of this to me?
Jenette can while I go get ready. I'll see you back in time, Jenette.
Rhubarb smiled slightly, and for once he actually looked non-evil. Jenette snapped out of her staring and started to run after him.
Clyff! You can't! Don't do it!
Rhubarb suddenly disappeared into thin air. Jenette shouted and put her hands on her head and started pulling at her fur. I ran over to her.
Jenette! What's wrong? What's going on?!
Clyff's an idiot!
Yeah, I think we know that. What's he going to do?
DQ, you remember how you sent us back in time?
Yeah, I used my time traveling machine.
Wait, wait, wait. You had a time traveling machine and you never told me?!
Yeah, you'd probably break it.
Hey!
ANYWAY, back to the dilemma, Clyff has had it for quite a while. He had it when I... uh... died at the titanic and when the twin towers crumbled back in time. I saw it in his hands.
How'd he get it? I had it on me at all times.
He probably stole it from you. I just saw it in his hands as he was running away; that's how he disappeared.
Wait, so he's already back in time right now?
Yes, and if we don't stop him then the whole future of the world will be ruined.
How will it be ruined? Won't it just be changed?
Changed.... majorly. Think about it. Clyff's going back in time to stop himself from dying so that I won't get mad at him and we'll live happily ever after... or so he thinks. If he stops himself from dying, then I will spend all my time with him instead of helping you save the world. You won't learn how to save the world, and the world will end the first time.
So... if we don't find a way to stop Clyff right now, we're going to find ourselves dead?
Yes... along with the rest of the world.















End of book 6! Thank you bakugan lover 890 for reminding me about Rhubarb. :3

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:59 pm

Ohmigosh, AWESOMEPIENESS! And grr. Whatever pairing name we decide on for Jenette and Rhubarb, I dun like it :(

Also, that last bit reminds me of the TimeRiders series by Alex Scarrow... bit weird, but yup. Anyway: can't wait for book seven! If you need any titles, feel free to PM me :)
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:46 am

OH MY JEGUS HE CAN'T DESTROY TIME AND SPACE NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOO
Anyways I like the entry a lot ::::D ;;;;D
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:58 am

.:Invisi:. wrote:Ohmigosh, AWESOMEPIENESS! And grr. Whatever pairing name we decide on for Jenette and Rhubarb, I dun like it :(

Also, that last bit reminds me of the TimeRiders series by Alex Scarrow... bit weird, but yup. Anyway: can't wait for book seven! If you need any titles, feel free to PM me :)

Thanks, Invisi! I've already got most of your title suggestions from beforehand.
Rockfire wrote:OH MY JEGUS HE CAN'T DESTROY TIME AND SPACE NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOO
Anyways I like the entry a lot ::::D ;;;;D

lol, thank you!

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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:51 am

Alright, the join.me has ended! Here were the questions asked:
Feel The Beat asked....
Q. How old is Amy?
A. She doesn't really have an age, but I always imagined her to be in her teens.

Q. Where's Brent?
A. Suzi beat him up and nobody knows (well, except for me) where you went to after that.

Q. Are you planning on making a third series?
A. I have been planning it, since the end of the 2nd series will be a cliff-hanger. It will be rather different from the 1st and 2nd series, but I'm still planning on writing it.

Q. Were Gish's parents Raboas too, or were they normal goats/rabbits/sheep?
A. No, Gish is practically the only Raboa on the planet (except for her siblings). Her mother was a goat, and her father was a rabbit.

Mento asked...

Q. What's gonna happen to Amy now?
A. That will remain unknown until the end of the series. :twisted:

Q. Do you listen to music while you're writing an entry?
A. Yes. Music is amazing, and I love listening to it while writing. I don't think I've ever NOT listened to music while writing...

Q. Will DQ turn evil again?
A. You will have to wait and see, my Stalkerwan!

Q. Do you come up with characters off the top of your head or do you listen to music and create them from there?
A. Usually from the top of my head. I don't think music has ever made up a character for me, except for one of my characters (Feather [who will be in my next published book]).

Q. How EVER did you come up with Stalkerwans?
A. Oh, gosh. I'm not sure. XD WAIT. I remember! I happened to LOVE Star Wars at the time, and the Jedi in training are called Padawans. So I figured "hey, you guys are stalkers, so I'll call you stalkerwans!".

Invisi asked...

Q. Who is your favorite characters out of all TIAJNAD?
A. Either Amy or Jenette

Q. Do you plan out the entry before you write it? Or is most of it spontaneous?
A. Usually I just wing it. :p Occasionally I have a few ideas in my head. Like, I know how the end of the 2nd series will end.

Q. Will there ever be a "last" series of TIAJNAD, or will you carry on until you grow tired of it?
A. Well... I've already planned out a 3rd series, which will be quite different from the 1st and 2nd. I think that the 3rd series will probably be the last one, but I don't know for sure.

Q. Do you have an evil side that makes all the bad stuff happen?
A. Like, in writing? If so, then I think I might... but bad stuff has to happen in a book, or else it will be all about lollipops and rainbows and "Oh I went outside and the sun was shining and it was a beautiful day and I was so happy THE END". Nobody likes those kinds of stories.

Q. I know it's against "writer's code" to tell your fans what will happen, but have you got any hints about book seven?
A. Hmm.... I can give away a few hints about book 7. I can tell you this: It will have love, it will have sorrow, it will have pain, it will have Amy screaming.

Q. What is your favorite book so far?
A. Oh... I don't know! I think I'm getting a bit better on my writing as I continue writing, so I don't know if I have a favorite... but I'll try and choose. In the 1st book, I'd have to say... the 3rd book. In the 2nd series, I'd have to say... the 6th book. The 6th book is really emotional in my opinion, and I'm hoping it's getting right to the reader's heart. The 3rd book (in the 1st series) I like because I loved the title of that one and that was where the "squidapotamus" came in.

Q. Do any of the characters have a last name? Or are they just first-name only?
A. For now it's first-name only, because I can't come up with any good last-names. XD As it is, I always want to name my characters with an A name, and I don't know why. Amy, Ariadne, Alexandria (different book), Alexander (different book), etc. etc.

Q. Do you plan on having "official" names for pairings of TIAJNAD like the other books on fan-fiction sites, or are we just going to have to say, for example, Rhubarb and Jenette, all the time?
A. Hmm... I never thought about pairing-names. But now that I think about it, RhubarbXJenette can be Rhunette. :D AmyXPete can be Pamy.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sun Mar 17, 2013 7:24 am

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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby TPDebate » Sun Mar 17, 2013 7:33 am

the last part of your answer to invisi's fith question is pretty much a given.
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Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:51 am

Aww I missed it, but those answers were still good
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