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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Fri Jan 07, 2011 12:48 pm

Woah, I had something like that happen once too.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby mybubbles » Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:03 pm

Milly always spent her evenings with her uncle. She didn't like to, but his health was failing and she had to take care of him. She had to make him dinner, read to him, and see him safely into bed before she could return home.
She got the feeling that her uncle didn't like her, either. He lived in fair mansion that always seemed to be crumbling. He didn't like to have all his lights on or his heater on, because it "wasted electricity". He would only grudginly let Milly in, and made her tasks as difficult as possible.
He was particularly nasty one night and seemed ill. Milly barely held her temper with him. It was a relief when she could head home.
At home, she found her mother in the kitchen, sobbing wildly. "Mother," she said, alarmed. "What's wrong? Mother?"
Her mother gulped a breath and lifted her tear-stained face to Milly. "I'm s-sorry, Milly, your u-uncle d-die last n-night in h-his sleep. T-the docters said he wouldn't have s-suffered."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:50 pm

((here we go again.))
Satisfaction ((yet again continued))
Were we were last time is that something was making a loud noise outside of Emmas house. Her, Mike, and Cleo were on videochat.


Cleo:"Did you hear that?"
Emma:"Yea. I didnt sound too friendly."
Mike:"What are you guys going to do?!"
Emma:"I dont really know!"

Then the computers shut off.
Mike:"Guys!! Oh, crap."

Cleo and I sat alone, scared, and clinging on to eachother. Not knowing what was going to happen next. We heard it scratching, and clawing. But what I just noticed is that my mom hasnt responded to the occurences. As brave as I was i didnt really want to investigate, but i did. I grabbed my hunting gun and slowly walked downstairs. It was the worst scene ive ever seen. There was my mother, chest ripped open somehow. Lying in her own blood, and next to her, written in her own blood was some words. I read them and almost died of shock. What was written was It needs to be satisfied. The job is almost done. I screamed in horror, i didnt know what to do. So I started to cry, not because I was scared... but there was my mother. Dead on the floor. All I know is that this isnt my regular Thursday, so I went upstairs. Still crying, I walked in my room and told Cleo. She ghasped in horror, and put her arms around me. We had some of that Caution do not cross tape from a skeem from earlier that month. So, when we know for sure that it was gone we went outside and taped it over the door. Then we took our bikes over to Mikes house.

When we arrived I told Mike the whole story, he looked more depressed than I was, and I saw it. I guess it was just guilt kicking in. But it didnt matter. We all sat down on Mikes couch. "Im, so... sorry." Mike said to me. We all looked down at our feet. But something took us out of our trance, there was a knock on the door. We got up, and knowing it was a human knock Mike opened the door.

There was the letter that would take this situation to the next level.

((WIP))
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:55 pm

HEHEHEheheheheh.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:58 pm

Starfighter123 wrote:((here we go again.))
Satisfaction ((yet again continued))
Were we were last time is that something was making a loud noise outside of Emmas house. Her, Mike, and Cleo were on videochat.


Cleo:"Did you hear that?"
Emma:"Yea. I didnt sound too friendly."
Mike:"What are you guys going to do?!"
Emma:"I dont really know!"

Then the computers shut off.
Mike:"Guys!! Oh, crap."

Cleo and I sat alone, scared, and clinging on to eachother. Not knowing what was going to happen next. We heard it scratching, and clawing. But what I just noticed is that my mom hasnt responded to the occurences. As brave as I was i didnt really want to investigate, but i did. I grabbed my hunting gun and slowly walked downstairs. It was the worst scene ive ever seen. There was my mother, chest ripped open somehow. Lying in her own blood, and next to her, written in her own blood was some words. I read them and almost died of shock. What was written was It needs to be satisfied. The job is almost done. I screamed in horror, i didnt know what to do. So I started to cry, not because I was scared... but there was my mother. Dead on the floor. All I know is that this isnt my regular Thursday, so I went upstairs. Still crying, I walked in my room and told Cleo. She ghasped in horror, and put her arms around me. We had some of that Caution do not cross tape from a skeem from earlier that month. So, when we know for sure that it was gone we went outside and taped it over the door. Then we took our bikes over to Mikes house.

When we arrived I told Mike the whole story, he looked more depressed than I was, and I saw it. I guess it was just guilt kicking in. But it didnt matter. We all sat down on Mikes couch. "Im, so... sorry." Mike said to me. We all looked down at our feet. But something took us out of our trance, there was a knock on the door. We got up, and knowing it was a human knock Mike opened the door.

There was the letter that would take this situation to the next level.

((WIP))


It's so good! I'm your number one fan now, okay? XD Your a great writer.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:02 pm

these satisfaction stories are good, and they are done well in the fact that you have made to be continued each time, and not just ended it so quiockly or never poseted again about it, it keeps me waiting for the next installment of the satisfaction series, you should write some books lol,

but in all seriuousness, it is good, and i cant wait till the next part of the story
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:24 am

"3, 2, 1"

1995

Billy walked around with a luminous lantern in his hand. He rubbed his other hand on the hieroglyphics drawn so descriptively on the walls of the tomb. He then walked a tad more and *BOOM* went the floor. Billy fell and found himself in a snake pit. As cobras swarmed onto him he fought them off luckily not getting bitten but luck would ware off soon. He ran to the wall and knocked on it over and over again. Soon enough he smiled and kicked the wall. It crumbled and he ran but didn't look down. Billy stepped on a stone that was shaped like a circle and with a "whoops!" water spilled into the room, slowly flooding it. He trudged through a long hall way and heard something slam shut. Billy turned around and saw a wall closing and stopping the water from coming into the room. "im in!" he yelled hearing the echo. He looked at the hieroglyphics and gasped. Pictures of aliens and monsters killing humans and natural disasters happening covered the walls and ceilings. Mummified aliens and monsters were in golden caskets. He left the site and denied finding it when reporters and people asked him. The biggest scare he got was that after every 20 pictures the number 12 was written. He tried to figure this out for 15 years and finally he figured it out, 2012. Now it was 2010. So in 2 years what would happen? Billy then remembered the monsters and aliens and the disturbing pictures. He figured not to tell anyone.

New Years, 2012

"ring ring ring ring" the phone sounded. on the TV screen it read Bumfy, Edward. "ugh Eddy." he huffed getting up and answereing the phone "what do you want?" he asked in a tired voice.

"only 2 more hours till 2012! A new exciting year! seeing the ball drop!" Eddy said excited not knowing what Billy knew.

Billy hung up and walked outside seeing bright star-like things in the sky but big. "2 hours 3 minutes and 6 seconds" he said feeling the wind strongly whip his shirt making it flap. He then walked inside. Should he do something? Billy then sighed not knowing what to do. He heard a bang out side and a scream. "i can!" he yelled picking up a phone and calling the government "listen the world's gonna end!" he yelled into the phone. No response. He hung up sighing. No one would believe him. "you know what? to bad." he said crossing his arms angrily. "1 hour 42 minutes and 26 seconds." he said sighing sadly.

1 hour 3 minutes and 8 seconds later


" 39 minutes and 18 seconds left." he said looking outside and seeing trees blowing down and his neighbor's roof ripped off his house. His family sit outside, the mother crying as the daughter took short small breaths gasping for air. Billy stood up and ran to his basement, his lab. He put on a gas mask and gave mixed some medicines. he then injected the shot into his left leg. "20 minutes and 56 seconds." he said grabbing the needle and running up the stairs. Billy opened the door and looked around. His skin tingled but wasn't burned because of the antidote. He ran to his car and started it, driving past houses and seeing people going outside and dropping dead. "10 minutes and 2 seconds" Billy stepped on the gas and drove as fast as he could but everyone was already dead. "1 minute and 25 seconds" He stopped driving and sat in his car looking around at the houses with dead one outside of them. "19, 18, 17, 16, 15, 14, 12, 11, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1." he canted as the time ran out. Suddenly the earth began to crumble and water flooded the cracks being made. Bill drove avoiding the cracks and water. Suddenly he felt the car being pushed and looked behind him seeing a creature with a large head and only 1 eye. Then a dead ripped apart human was flung onto the car. Blood smeared down the wind shield as the gory body slid down. He turned on the wind shield wipers and the blood smeared around a little. "ugh" the thing on the back of the car scratched up the glass and made horrible screeching noises. He started to drive again, running over the body that was flung onto the car and seeing more hideous creatures. Billy didn't know where he was driving but he needed to go somewhere. suddenly the car was flipped and a dinosaur like creature began to crush the car. He grabbed some paper and wrote, wrote the secretes, wrote the antidote, wrote the creatures. Then after he wrote the last sentence he chanted "3, 2, 1." and the car was crushed causing him to explode. His blood and guts covered the inside of the car as one of the creatures slurped him up.

558,798 million years later

"hey momy!" yelled little Billy holding his mother's hand as they walked down the street. "look what i found at Eddy's house!" he held out an old burned, bloody piece of paper. Little did he know, it held the secrets to the world.
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:05 am

@Li Syaoran- Thanks, ive been working on them at school. Glad you guys like them.

@Madame Lotus-Yes, you can be ma number one fan.

Thanks for liking my stories everyone!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:07 am

@NekoxSox- that was an amazing story XD It was a very unstereotypical scary story
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby BassKitten » Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:14 pm

.:dragonfly:. wrote:Ok, I will post one of mine now ^.^ that was a pretty good one.

New Doll.

A young girl named Molly went was walking down the street with her mother when in the window of a shop a beautiful doll caught her eye. Molly behed her mother to buy her it and of cours. She did. Molly brought home the doll and played with it all day. When night came, Molly left her new doll at the bottom of the stairs before she went up to bed and quickly fell asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the first step"
Molly was alittle frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Third step"
Molly was more frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Sixth step"
Molly was very frightened but she pulled the covers over her head and fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the last step"
Molly was shaking with fear she closed her eyes very tight and sat there with the covers over her head.

A couple minutes later Molly hear the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on your bed."
Molly looked out from under the cover to see her dolly standing on the edge of the bed.

"Molly I'm going to kill you."

In the morning Molly's mother went in her room to wake her. She discovered the blood smeared bed and outside the window was little Molly hanging dead from the tree. The doll sat on the window sill smiling her evil smile.


I've heard this story before. Isn't the doll meant to be in the shop window with two fingers up, then after it has 3 fingers up?
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