♥Mrs.Draco Malfoy♥ wrote:Black Dog
One Evening, on a dark and stormy night, there were four girls..2 parents..and one street..these four girls were having a sleep over, and the parents were downstairs. "Girls, were going out to the store, we'll be back in about an hour!" yelled one of the girls mother up the stairs.
So the girls said goodbye and went back upstairs. About 10 minutes later, they heard a noise outside the back door..it was a scratching sound. One of the girls said "Hey, What's that noise? Wanna go check it out?" So, They went downstairs and opened the back door..it was a small black puppy, and it ran in and shook with the cool nighttime air. "Awwwww.. It's SO CUTE!" said One girl. Everyone else agreed, all petting it softly. Just then, one girl looked behind her, and saw a shadow being cast by the smooth light of the moon, it looked as if it were a person's shadow. She looked and opened her mouth to say what she saw, but when they looked back, nothing was there. "It was probably just your imagination, tricking your mind." said one girl, with a bit of fright in her voice.
They all agreed and went back upstairs after feeding the puppy some ham. They were playing around with the dog when the dog ran out of the room. They looked and looked but couldn't find this mysterious dog, so, sadly, they sat back down in the room they were sleeping in.
Then, one girl had to go to the bathroom. Leaving the room, she heard a quiet bark..coming from the attic. "Now how did the dog get in there?" she asked herself quietly. she slowly walked in the dim light of the narrow hallway to the attic stairs..As this was hapening, the girls were talking, when they heard a loud scream. They ran out and saw their friend go flying out of the attic door, landing in front of them. They all screamed at this, but the girl was ok, they assumed that it was the dog that scared here, but she kept saying something about a man..in a dark hooded cloak, pushing her off the staircase. Everyone thought she was just kidding, so they continued on with their sleepover.
But then, they remembered the dog, and how it was up in the attic. They all raced up to the dark and gloomy crawlspace of the attic, boxes were piled up high on top and beside each other, they saw the dog, but heard a man talking, he seemed to be whispering to himself.."death is mine, death is mine"..They screamed and ran downstairs.
One grabbed the phone to call the police, but just as they did that, the girl with the phone ran downstairs, remembering not to call the police unless she was sure of what was happening. So she checked the door to see if it was unlocked..it wasn't. So she was at the bottom of the stairs, the other girls waiting in the room they were sleping in, when the phone rang. The girl at the bottom of the stairs ran upstairs and was in the bathroom, and she answered it.. it said.. "Look in the shower..there's a surprise"..she hung up, but curious, looked in the shower.
All of a sudden a man jumped out and slit her throat, and then licked up the blood that had been drawn from her neck. But before she died she had enough time to scream, and the other girls heard it. They rushed into the bathroom. The man had vanished. They saw the blood and their dead friend and screamed. They ran to the phone. It was dead. There was a note,It read: The phone is dead, your friend is dead, what does it mean?.. just then they heard a loud bang and heard someone singing softly: "My name is, Loomar and i'm on the street called boomar, going to kill the whole town, give the world a big frown.."
They got really scared and ran into the basement. Sadly that's where he was.. he brutaly murdered the last three girls, and went back into the attic, waiting.. and to think, those girls were the idiots who let him in..he was a shapeshifter, gone crazy.. but his fun wasn't over...there was still a whole town and street waiting just for him
.:Vamp wrote:Holy shiz... O.O
That one probably scared me the most out of a lot of the ones I've read so far.
Just the whole thing where he was shapeshifter and the girls wrote their own deaths by letting him in kinda freaks me out.
Okay... This one is actually pretty entertaining. xD
A lot of people have probably heard it before, but this is my version:
One night, during a terrible storm, a man went to a hotel hoping to find shelter from the awful storm, as it was so bad, he wasn't able to see out his windshield anymore.
When he got to the check-in area, he requested a room, but the girl working said that there was only one room left, and that it was haunted. The man, choosing not to believe this, took the room anyways.
As soon as he had unpacked all his stuff and gotten ready to relax, a ghost appeared. It's fingers were dipping with crimson blood.
"Bloody fingers, bloody fingers..." The ghost moaned.
The man immediately ran out of the room. As he ran past the check-in desk the girl was working at, she sighed, knowing she had been right about the room being haunted.
The next night, there was another terrible storm, and all the rooms were booked except the infamous haunted suite. Except this night a woman got caught in the storm. She came into the hotel hoping to find a safe place to stay until morning, but she got the same answer. That all the rooms were filled except for one, which was haunted. Not believing in anything like that, the woman took the room and went up to rest. Before she even had enough time to get her things unpacked, the ghost appeared, again.
"Bloody fingers, bloody fingers..." That was all it moaned, its finger still covered in the scarlet blood.
The woman ran out of the room, and past the lobby where the check-in desk was. As she passed, the girl working slightly smiled to herself, she always found it amusing when people took the room, as it always had the same result.
Realizing the woman had left her things in the room, the girl went up to retrieve them.
As she picked up the woman's various left-behind belongings, the ghost appeared again.
"Bloody fingers, bloody fin-"
The girl shook her head with amusement, and without even looking up, she said,
"Dude, you seriously need to get yourself a band-aid.
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