•Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

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What Do You Think?

I'm Loving It!
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50%
It's Weird
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14%
It's ... eh
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11%
No Dont like it
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No votes
HORRIBLE
3
11%
It Doesn't Make Any Sence
4
14%
 
Total votes : 28

Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby icicle1107 » Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:21 pm

Great way to end it...though I think it shouldn't end becuz I love it so much :cry: I'm gonna cry :(
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Lazeling » Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:56 am

Whoa...
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Oh my. How horrible.
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:53 am

Thank you all so much for sticking with the story and reading, as well as all the awesome comments
It does mean a lot to me!

I also will be starting another story as soon as I can! :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:59 am

Keep me posted please. I really enjoy your writing.
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:46 am

I will probably post here once I get a new one started :D
~ and thank you!!
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:50 am

I must admit I am extremely jealous of your epic skillz (:
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:16 am

seriously? I had never really thought that I have epic skillz but thanks :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby tiklmonstr » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:50 am

I have to say, that was amazing. I usually find it hard to enjoy that type of narration, but your story just sucked me in. At first I thought, "Oh, another schizo-type thing..." but then I realized it was the other voice narrating (I just sort of skipped straight to the story, then went back and read the first post explaining stuff) and I thought, "Hang on, this is different. I like this! :D" All in all, very well done, and I'll be off reading your other stories. :thumbup:
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:20 am

Haha, well thanks a bunch! I'm happy you liked it! :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:19 pm

Hey, people who read this story, if you check out my other thread- MASH UP (link in signature) tell me if you think I should continue "stained" or well, any of them :D
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