'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
1
4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
3
12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
1
4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
4
16%
Still hate her the same.
1
4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
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No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
4
16%
She still needs anger management.
4
16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
6
24%
 
Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 01, 2012 1:56 pm

*Ahem* If I may..... ALL WILL MAKE SENSE AT THE END!!! I'm gonna make a list of questions that SHALL BE ANSWERED by the end of book 10/9[maybe 8] (still not sure how many books there's gonna be):

1) Why Jenette left

2) Why Jenette is serious all of the sudden

3) Where Suzi went to

4) If Amy will truly save the world

5) What Amy has to save the world from

6) Where Suzi went off to

7) If Rhubarb likes pie

8) If Amy will actually ever see Jenette again

9) If Jenette is evil

10) If Amy is evil

11) What happened to Sorrow

12) Where Jessy is

13) Where Agent Roger is

14) Where Jenette's "Minions" are (AKA Delilah, Twila, and Sugar from Book 1: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary)

15) What happened to Agent Cornelia

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed May 02, 2012 3:50 am

Yay! You're gonna answer my question! Seriously, tell me...
Does Rhubarb like pie?!

Also, sorry for not posting. I kinda lost this on my itouch and I couldn't be bothered to find it, but today I did.

Also, I love the new chapters.

Also, write more!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed May 02, 2012 10:12 am

レo√乇 イo レo√乇 wrote:
Yay, questions!!!

Yes, questions that will be answered! :)
Rebel Faery wrote:Yay! You're gonna answer my question! Seriously, tell me...
Does Rhubarb like pie?!

Also, sorry for not posting. I kinda lost this on my itouch and I couldn't be bothered to find it, but today I did.

Also, I love the new chapters.

Also, write more!

XD And it's alright! :)

Now, as you can probably see, I've been starting to catch up on my entries. So now... ANOTHER ENTRY!!!



























You probably would have cried if your best friend were to leave you forever. But I didn't! Nope. I was strong! I was-
JENETTE! PLEASE COME BACK! PLEASE COME BACK! I MISS YOU SO MUCH!
...... Fine. I sobbed. Gish tapped me on the shoulder, making me jump. I had forgotten she was there.
WHAT?!
Man, I was moody today.
We must begin training.
Wha?
If you are to save the world, you must train.
Oh. Right. Training. Duh. I sniffled slightly.
Okay.... so what should I do?
I will show you.











Sorry for short entry. Dad wants to go do piano lessons. Have to go! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu May 03, 2012 3:02 am

love the new entries :)
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu May 03, 2012 5:04 am

Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:love the new entries :)

Why thank you! :)

And..... NEW ENTRY!!!












When Gish said "Training", I was expecting doing push-ups and stuff. Boy was I wrong.
WOAH!
Gish had thrown a stick at me and I had ducked.
What was that for?!
Wow. I just realized something. I used exclamation points a lot...
Training!
Uh-oh. This was training? Gish launched herself at me, and I rolled out of the way. She landed face-first on the ground.
ACK! I'm so sorry, Gish!
I reached down the help her up, but (get this) SHE BIT MY PAW! I shouted and pulled away from her, rubbing my paw. It was like she was a vampire!
What was THAT for?!
A hint of advice...
Gish said, standing up.
Never help up the enemy.
Before I could ask what she meant, she launched herself at me again and succesfully knocked me to the ground.
Would you get off me?!
Gish smiled..... and it was almost sinister...
Why would I do that? You are my enemy.
Ooohhh, that's what she meant. I got it. She was helping me train!
Oh, uh, right. You are. Uh..... grr?
Gish laughed.
You are pathetic!
Okay, now that got me mad. I knocked her off of me and attacked her with force I didn't even know I had. I seemed to be stronger.... to be braver. Don't know how, but I was. When she was finally on the ground (gasping for a breath), she raised her hands.
Alright, alright! You win!
I would have rejoiced, but I was trying to get a breath myself. I was huffing and puffing, standing next to Gish who was doing the same thing. And I was still trying to find out how I had knocked out all those awesome moves. I mean, I was fighting like I never had before. It was like, with new power...
Amy, you saw how you moved?
Ya, it was awesome!
Gish smiled.
Yes, that and you know what that means?
Well I would have told her if I did.... but I didn't...
You're growing in your power.













I'm thinking of ending this book soon and starting up the 9th one. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu May 03, 2012 5:30 am

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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu May 03, 2012 7:20 am

Gish is a very mysterious bunny..... sheep............thing
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu May 03, 2012 6:02 pm

Cool! I like the banners! And, more!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby -Frost- » Fri May 04, 2012 2:01 am

But, you just started this book O_O
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