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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby waitingonhope » Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:47 pm

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I'm sorry.... That's all I can say...

In my mind, I'm freaking out and asking myself "Why isn't this amazing person a famous author? I mean seriously, she is AMAZING!!!"

Note: If you are a boy, I'M SORRY! It's just that you were in a perspective of a girl and kinda sounded like one...
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby . ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ . » Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:35 pm

Yeah, I'm DEFINITELY a girl. XD Thank you so much!
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Postby .oOFrøstBittenOo. » Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:41 pm

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Postby profilegone » Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:46 pm

Man, I wish my stories got this kind of praise and comments. :c

Well, actually, I haven't really written any stories on CS.. so.. that's kind of impossible. xD

BUT GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP ALREADY. >:U
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Postby . ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ . » Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:58 pm

XD This is my most popular story ever. :P

And I wiiiiiiiiiiill, okay? XD Sorry, my muse ran away yesterday, and I still need to catch it AND finish my homework. -.-
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Postby placidcoast » Wed Feb 29, 2012 3:38 pm

Take your time. c;
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby waitingonhope » Fri Mar 02, 2012 12:12 am

OMG Some of your faces will turn out like this when I'm done: >:(
Please don't get mad, but for a second, I got this mixed up with the Hunger Games....

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Postby .oOFrøstBittenOo. » Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:35 am

Bump! "D
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Postby glorified oblivion » Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:48 am

Where is the next part? I need it! o3o
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby . ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ . » Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:53 am

Sorry. :P My computer broke, I got really sick, and I've been busy, too. -_- I hate life sometimes. And my stinkin' flu.
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