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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:24 pm

((here we go again))
Satisfaction ((Continued))

The sight was scary and unbearable.We freaked out at once.Then... the video zoomed in on the creature-thingy. It was the freakiest thing i've ever seen! Its body was huge, and its fur was lons and twisted. Its eyes glowed a yellow, with blood colored pupils. Its teeth were long and jagged. There was more teeth than I can count. They stuck out of the mouth like daggers and it was drooling. When it breathed its upper-body moved up and down. It was like something out of one of my Stephen King, or Edgar Allan Poe books. Now I know it was a bad idea to read IT my Stephen King book today. The thing looked right at the screen, it store onto my soul and then it lunged at it. We all jumped with a huge ghasp.Then the shot of the video went back to Mikes house. Then Cleos laptop went black. We all looked at eachother, with terrified faces. We were quiet for a couple minutes. Then I started to get freaked out with the silence.
"What was THAT?" I asked them. They shook their head and shrugged at the same time, still with those terrified faces on. I waved my hand over their faces and they stopped, they looked at me. Cleo started to cry a little. I put my arm around her."Its okay Cleo. We'll be fine." She shook her head and shoved me away.
"No, its not okay. And we won't be fine. I mean did you see that thing!" She stated rather harshly to us. I just look at her, thinking of something to say.
"I...know it was scary, but its gone now. Just don't go on until tomorrow. Okay." She looks at me.
"Don't go on what?" she says. I look at her. "Oh, yo mean Chills Down Your Back. Okay." She said smiling wiping her tears away, and sniffling. Then Mikes head shoots up.
"Wern't we going to do that plan Emma made up in the car?" He asked us. We nodded our heads."When should we meet in the library?" He asks us.
"Oh when freetime starts in homeroom. You guys should know when it starts for Mrs.Dezelle's homeroom. Were all in the same homeroom together." I say to them.
"Right, I forgot about that." Cleo said. Then our heads popped up at the sound of a car horn."Can I sleep over your house Emma?" Cleo asked me.
"Sure. Tomorrow's a friday, my mom won't mind." I tell her. We get up and grab our bags. We turn off the Xbox and head upstairs. Before we head out the door, Mike taps our shoulders.
"When you guys get there can you video chat with me? This place freaks me out after we saw...ya know...that." He pleads us. We look at him.
"Sure.Ill be on my computer, and Cleo." She turns to me."Can you videochat on your laptop. Just sitting next to me?" I ask her. She nodds her head."Okay, thanks. See you on videochat." Mike nodds, and as we drive away Mike already has his door locked. I don't blame him though.

There are three people in videochat. Emma, Cleo, and Mike

Mike:"Hey guys, im not soo freaked out anymore."
Emma:"Good, I would be freaked out too."
Cleo:"Good thing you have us!"
Mike:"Yea. So.... what do you guys want to call it?"
Emma:[b]"Call what?"
[b]Mike:
"That thing outside my house."
Cleo:"Why do you want to name it?"
Mike:"I don't know."

Then there was a bang on the door of my house
Emma:"What was that!"

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:26 pm

hey guys this is a suggestion but i think yall should finish the stories yall already made that are [wip] theres a few of them on this thread
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby LupusArgentea » Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:47 pm

Dear Reader,
I am laying in this hidden place, in fetal position, tending to the wounds it has left on me. I am recording any and all information I can get on it, so that the creature may one day be fought. I hope all I have written will be of good use to you, if you are not already dying.
But I know you, dear reader, have questions.
How did I get these injuries? It left them. If you do not yet have such injuries, check the vicinity for health supplies. I hope you have some knowledge of first aid, as you will need it.
Where am I? I cannot say, as this creature seems to be able to read my mind, and I do not want to give myself away.
How did I get here? I am not sure. I have no memory of anything previous to this day. Was my sole purpose in life to come here and die? Maybe. But I will make my death worth something, by writing this.
There is a panel that shakes when you step on it in the lab- lift it, and dried food supplies are beneath it. It restocks every evening. Use this well, as it is the easiest food source to obtain in this death trap. Remember its placement.
Also, hide in small areas. If you have not yet seen it, then I will tell you it is very bulky, but agile. Hiding is your best chance at survival.
Hope that I don't die tonight.
G.

Dear Reader,
This is a game.
A game, fabricated by the creature. I have found this in the form of skeletons, wearing the same clothes as I. All hidden away. Victims of this horrible game.
I have found more info about the creature, despite this. Why it leaves a trail of blood. Why its eyes are clouded over and ooze a sort of diseased grime. None of its paws have the same amount of toes, and its disgusting, blood-stained teeth are all from different mouths. It is some sort of creature only seen in a child's horrific nightmares.
But this isn't a nightmare. It's real.
I think the goo leaking from it's eyes might be acidic, too. There is a huge acid burn in the sole of my shoes that wasn't there before. I almost slipped on it earlier, too.
I won't last much longer. The ways to the food sources are becoming more dangerous, and the portions from the source I usually go to are getting smaller each day.
I don't have anymore time to write. I need to locate more food sources.
G.

Dear Reader,
I know this is a game, now. For certain.
This creature is entertaining itself with intelligent prey. Me. I'm its next victim. There is no way out of here. I am a toy for this creature until I die.
I hope it's soon.
I cannot commit suicide. The only surefire way to die around here is at the hands of the creature, and I have seen what it does to the random deer and sheep that run through the place (which I believe are placed so I notice that they're dying), and I will not let this creature claim me in such a way.
No, I will die fighting.
I'm tired. I need the rest I can get.
G.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Wed Jan 05, 2011 2:01 pm

Interesting... >:D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Thu Jan 06, 2011 11:45 am

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby -Page of Time- » Thu Jan 06, 2011 11:56 am

Someone just posted one that's a true story. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=401471
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Thu Jan 06, 2011 12:05 pm

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Thu Jan 06, 2011 12:49 pm

@ LupusArgentea- That is really cool. Can't wait to see what happens next to whoever G is!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Trexxa » Fri Jan 07, 2011 10:54 am

Here is another story I made up
A ten year old girl was in a house fire, and her whole family died, she was the only one who lived. She went to live with her grandparents. One day, when her grandparents were gone to work, the girl heard a crying noise that sounded like her baby sister. She followed the noise, but no one was there, her baby sister wasn't alive anymore.
The next day, the girl heard noises that sounded like her mom and dad arguing. Still, no one.
One night, the girl was woken by noises. She opened her eyes and saw her Mom, dad and sister by her bed. "Come die with us." Whispered her dad, revealing a knife.
The next morning her grandparents found her dead in her bed. Did her family really make her die too? :shock:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby LupusArgentea » Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:03 am

I'll write some more later.
Although, G isn't his name. ;3
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