Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!!!!!

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No, the first one was an epic fail and this one will be too. You should just stop writing and stick to doing nothing your whole life.
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The first one was good, but this one is better!
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Manafest » Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:22 am

Oooh. Epicness.
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:31 am

Jamie Grace wrote:Oooh. Epicness.

lol Thanks! :D








I suddenly hit the ground and landed on my butt.
Ow! I think I broke my butt!
I looked around, still rubbing my butt, and saw lots of snakes. My worste nightmare. A snake slithered towards me, and then it shoved me. It SHOEVED me! How can a snake shove you? Anyways, it took me into this large room (where it was very bright) and then guess what? They put handcuffs on my ankles and wrists. How can a snake put handcuffs on you? And why are they called handcuffs if you can put them on your feet? They should be called 'hand-and-feet-cuffs'! Anyway, there was chanting. I don't know WHAT they where chanting, but the snakes where chanting something. Suddenly, a large snake appeared. Right in front of me. Just like that. My life is a wreck. My eyes got buggeyed as I stared at the large snake. The snake had fangs, and it had a rattle. OMW IT WAS A RATTLE SNAKE WITH FANGS AND IT WAS HUGE!!!! It was way bigger then me. It was about the size of a two-story house! Anyways, it's bright yellow glass eyes stared at me and hissed. This snake wasn't slimy, like the others, though. It was completely dry, but yet it looked beautiful. WAIT! I had just called a giant snake beautiful. Life really changes you. The snake glared at me and hissed. (It's words will be in dark red.)
Who daresssssss enter my housssssssse that'sssssss not a sssssssnake?!
The snake was a female. Oh no.
Er...... uh...... hi!
Why had I just said hi to a SNAKE?!
Er...... um... my name is.... uh..... Amy!
Why wouldn't I STOP TALKING?!
Sssssso, you are a dog. A sssssstupid little dog named Amy.
I'm not stupid. I just don't think well sometimes.
Oh my word, I had just argued with a snake! I really should've shut my mouth.
Take her to the dungeon you ssssssslimy ssssssssnakes!
Two snakes wrapped around my body, and then pulled me away from the big snake.
What will you do to me?!
I screamed at the big snake as they where pulling me away.
Youl'l see.... you'll see......

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Lunala » Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:50 am

Awesome!!
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Zookrates » Fri Sep 09, 2011 6:48 am

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Ultra Exiting!!
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:50 am

Doglover141 wrote:Awesome!!

Thanks! :)
Zookrates wrote:SUPER DUPER KIWI & BANANA SMOOTHIE AWESOMESAUCE FANTA EXITING!!!!!!!!

lol!











The snake's threw me in a jail cell, and locked the door. Although I still am not sure how; they have no hands. It was dark in the jail cell, but there was still some light. I looked around, and there was mold everywhere. I fell asleep, though, since I was so tired from the journey.

.........

When I woke up, it was the next day. I heard the jail cell I was in unlock, and snakes slithered in. They twisted around me, and pulled me back to the large snake.
My name is Aurauria, by the way.
The large snake was grinning evily.
What do you want with me?
Any trespassers get what they deserve.
What would that be?
I trembled as I said those words. The snake smiled even more eviller this time.
You'll see.
Why did she KEEP ON ANSWERING THAT?! I wanted an answer.
Take her to the place.
The snakes wrapped around me yet again and pulled me out a door. I was suddenly in an arena. Snakes where above me in stands, but there was glass around so that nothing could harm them. But what would harm me? The snakes let go of me and tied me. The snakes then slithered away, and locked me in the arena. Aurauria appeared above where the stands where.
This dog trespassed!
The crowd grew quiet.
And you know what happens to trespassers.
The crowd cheered.
Release Anger!
The crowd roared, apparently happy. I looked up. I saw snakes turning a lever around and around. I looked in front of me, and there was a large cage. The cage was opening up, though, as the snakes turned the lever. By fifty seconds, the cage was all the way up, and there was a loud roar. The snakes that had opened the cage slithered away. Now it was only me and the thing that was in the cage. Suddenly, the terrible beast came out of it's cage. Here's what it looked like:
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It roared. Flames came out of each of it's mouths, and they nearly hit me, but I dodged out of the way. It's words will be in black.
My name is Anger, and I am very hungry.
I gulped. Anger lunged at me and had me in it's middle head's teeth. The crowd roared with happiness.
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:58 am

And if you guys are wondering (JF is speaking here, not Amy..... in case you didn't know... XD), this is what Aurauria looks like (except she's about 10 times that size): http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=lar ... ORM=IDFRIR
And here's what the other snakes look like: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=sna ... ORM=IDFRIR and http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=sna ... ORM=IDFRIR

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Sep 09, 2011 10:42 am

Luckily, I still had my legs. I kicked Anger on his third head, and he roared, dropping me. Blood was dripping down my back, but I was okay.
You get back here!
Anger was angrier then ever. He opened his mouths and breathed fire on me. I started to burn, but I rolled over and the fire burned out. I found some rope (I don't know why it was there) and hopped onto Anger's back. I tied the rope around all of his heads, and I pulled. He gasped for breath, moaning and groaning and trying to bite me. I then pulled the hardest of all, and he died. The crowd whre booing.
How did she defeat Anger?! Guards! Make sure all the snakes stay in the arena! I'll finish her off myself.
Auraura was suddenly right infront of me, hissing. Her yellow glass eyes stared at me angrilly.
You killed my pet. Now I will kill you!
Auraura lunged at me, and I moved out of the way just in time. Suddenly, I heard footsteps and then a scream. I turned around and saw-
Jenette?
Jenette had kicked Auraura and had knocked her down.
Hi Amy!
But how-
Suddenly, Auraura lunged at Jenette when she wasn't looking, and bit her. Jenette screamed out in pain. Auraura hissed at her victim.
Jenette!!!
I knelt beside me sister, who had just been bitten by a poisonous snake.
Amy...
Jenette was closing her eyes, breathing softer and softer.
Stay! Please! Stay here! I'll help you!
I began to cry as I saw my sister, breathing less and less, until.... she stopped breathing all together.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Manafest » Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:13 am

What? O_O Thats 2 sisters down, how many more to go!?!?!??
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:15 am

lol! Don't worry.... MORE TO COME!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Manafest » Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:17 am

I don't know whether to wait, or to wait. Wait, thats an easy one. O_O Sometimes I dunno what to do with myself!
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