' flo's challenge to you //

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Postby sammmy » Thu Feb 23, 2017 2:15 pm

luminescence; wrote:
      @samo,
      i'm TRYINg to write stuff on wattpad, and yet i fail to eve publish anything soooo cx


That's ok I've only published three things aha :3


















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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby blackbird. » Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:21 pm

      @samo & @lumi (& @everyone who uses wattpad)
        how do you guys find wattpad? i'm still deciding if i should start an account
        it seems difficult to use bc the site features only the popular stories
        and the new and upcoming authors can't seem to break through
        but that's just how i see it - what do you guys think?
        (also maybe it's just because i'm confused by technology whoops)
      @atlas
        i really liked it! didn't get a chance to read the un-edited so can't comment on the changes
        but comments on it:
        description is so good like whoa the detail is so on point
        i liked that you gave so much in-depth writing to how he was feeling and thinking
        i felt like i really got to understand his current emotion
        wished i could understand why he was feeling like that tho! (backstory pls haha)
        the way you evoke emotion is great!
        felt so bad for jennifer :c
        but at least there was some happiness for spencer - someone cares about him enough to mourn!
        (also i'm not sure if you prefer me to pm you regarding comments - let me know if you want me to pm c:)
      @inevitable
        welcome! looking forward to reading your one-shots c:
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby rogan » Fri Feb 24, 2017 12:27 am

      @blackbird,
      how do i find wattpad? uh...normally i end up clicking a link. and i have the app
      sometimes i believe that those popular books are either popular because so many peo
      ple follow that person; the person has like 5000000 links to their page (or book. and n
      ot that i don't like it, just sayin ... i do it too; or they wait and waaitt
      and waaait (which i, personally, am not patient at all)
      i see your point, so i'm sidig with you a bit (especially on the popular books being feat
      ured).
      (technology is confusing tahaha)
      to be honest i'm still confused about wattpad soooo

      @samo,
      three? compared to what i have that is a lot more cx

      i should have another prompt up today??? depends on if my muse runs away again amsl
      so sad that it does that to me
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby pereyra » Sat Feb 25, 2017 2:00 am

Quick question; as far as prompts go, have you guys,been using the prompt as the first sentence, or the last, or just throwing it in there?
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby blackbird. » Sat Feb 25, 2017 2:43 am

      @lumi
        oh i see!
        hmm maybe one day i'll try it out
        once i write a story that isn't a one-shot

        also what's your wattpad name so i can stalk?
        @samo too i want to stalk you too!
        sorry if that sounds really creepy

      @astronaut
        most of the prompts are in the middle of the one-shots
        when i read the prompts i usually ask myself which situations i can use that in
        first and last sentences are usually reserved for exposition/conclusions
        only for prompt #16 ("Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!") did i use it as my last sentence
        because to me that was more of an afterthought of a statement? (if that makes sense)


      as a side note, i finally hit 10% completion whoot
      hoping to get one more one-shot up tomorrow before i take a break
      one and a half weeks without internet so that's my hiatus
      maybe i'll go old-fashioned and write in a notebook while i'm away
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby rogan » Sat Feb 25, 2017 3:17 am

      @ blackbird,
      in a way it is kind of fun to see what others
      can come up with cx

      oh, and my wattpad username is not as uni
      que as some of them, it's simply ophidioph
      ophobia *3*
      in the car writing the description of a st
      ory smh i need my computer



      @ astronaut,
      i guess it depends on who's writing and wh
      at's going on, i know some people like to s
      tart with the prompt, (i personally though
      t of doing that with #69 (i found the ring!)
      especially for a starting line) everyone's m
      ind works differently so i guess it kind of j
      ust happens >.< i have no clue honestly, i'
      d have to go with blackbird on this hahah.
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Pyjaks » Sat Feb 25, 2017 4:25 am

god is an astronaut wrote:Quick question; as far as prompts go, have you guys,been using the prompt as the first sentence, or the last, or just throwing it in there?


I think I've started one of my one shots with the prompt. The rest have the prompt somewhere else in the story.
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Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sat Feb 25, 2017 4:28 am

And the prompt can be based off it without having the words directly in the scene, right?
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby floki, » Sat Feb 25, 2017 6:45 am

TheSongOfTheStars wrote:And the prompt can be based off it without having the words directly in the scene, right?

      yes, the story can be based on the prompt without the actual phrase being used in it. c;

Pyjaks wrote:
god is an astronaut wrote:Quick question; as far as prompts go, have you guys,been using the prompt as the first sentence, or the last, or just throwing it in there?


I think I've started one of my one shots with the prompt. The rest have the prompt somewhere else in the story.

      the prompt can be anywhere in the story, or nowhere at all. your story can be based on the prompt without actually using the phrase. i personally have the prompt be shown towards the end of a story, but that is just my writing style. c;

      i am so far behind on updating this thread... i will try and get that done sometime today. c;
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby sammmy » Sat Feb 25, 2017 7:54 am

god is an astronaut wrote:Quick question; as far as prompts go, have you guys,been using the prompt as the first sentence, or the last, or just throwing it in there?


I've done most of (Or all of) mine starting with the prompt but it's really just my personal reference c:


blackbird. wrote:
      @lumi
        oh i see!
        hmm maybe one day i'll try it out
        once i write a story that isn't a one-shot

        also what's your wattpad name so i can stalk?
        @samo too i want to stalk you too!
        sorry if that sounds really creepy

      @astronaut
        most of the prompts are in the middle of the one-shots
        when i read the prompts i usually ask myself which situations i can use that in
        first and last sentences are usually reserved for exposition/conclusions
        only for prompt #16 ("Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!") did i use it as my last sentence
        because to me that was more of an afterthought of a statement? (if that makes sense)


      as a side note, i finally hit 10% completion whoot
      hoping to get one more one-shot up tomorrow before i take a break
      one and a half weeks without internet so that's my hiatus
      maybe i'll go old-fashioned and write in a notebook while i'm away


My wattpad username is stories_by_sam (I know very original xD ) and I would like to stalk you too!! Can't wait to see what you post! <3


















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