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Do you like this draft better than the first one so far?

I didn't think it could get better but then it DID
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hmm... dunno yet
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why. why did you change it. WHY -sobs-
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... I... didn't... there's another one...?
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:02 am

    Oh gosh, I'm really happy to hear you say that! Thank you! <3 I'm glad you like them!
    The new draft will be different in a lot of ways, but I'm hoping everyone will like it better!

    Edit: beta copy of the first interlude is up on wattled guys! I mixed it up a little this time eheheh we'll have to see what happens
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Postby Asherwy » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:05 am

      did i just hear....BETA?!?!
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:07 am

    BETA
    There might be mistakes and the wording may be tweaked in the future, but it won't change!
    It's merely open for critique c:
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Postby Asherwy » Tue Feb 02, 2016 4:34 pm

      hell i thought it was the real thing
      you're too good skippy
      too frkn good
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Thu Feb 04, 2016 5:20 pm

    someday, ma petite pomme
    someday
    and thank you hehe I'm glad everyone seems to be taking to the difference well

    EDIT: chapter one of the third draft up on wattpad!


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