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by honeydont » Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:22 am
witch. wrote:I'd like some advice and opinions on my novel's plot, though it may be best discussed over pm. Is there anyone who might have a good perspective on angels and biblical references? I'm terribly stumped and have researched endlessly with still a lot of bumps in my novel. Any help would be appreciated.
I may be able to help, if you'd like. c:
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by Yuki. » Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:55 pm
Username:
What we will call you:
Will you critique other's work?:
Possibly, but if they ask for it from me specifically then yes. Im afraid Im far to busy, and any amount of free time I use mostly for my art XD
Links to your story if you have any:
Well, I did a few on here when I was fairly young, but i'm so ashamed of them i'd rather not share. Go hunt them down if you wish, I'd rather just start clean with my new story.
Anything you want us to know?:
I'd like a lot of critic c:
Oh, and I don't mean to jump right in, but if i'm allowed, I would like to ask someone to help critic the first paragraph of my story so far. It's a little long, so i'd rather not post it here ^u^
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by candu » Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:01 pm
Welcome Snow

happenings in 2015:discovered dan + phil,
swam competitively,
went to we day twice,
started listening to p!atd,
got my braces off,
visited family i haven't
seen since like 2004,
tried candy from japan,
saw superwoman and
justin trudeau in person,
got ice cream a lot,
stopped being friends with
some really toxic people,
had an amazing year.



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by candu » Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:32 am
Welcome Sky

I'm Emma/Emmy/Aqua/Missy/Whitey.
happenings in 2015:discovered dan + phil,
swam competitively,
went to we day twice,
started listening to p!atd,
got my braces off,
visited family i haven't
seen since like 2004,
tried candy from japan,
saw superwoman and
justin trudeau in person,
got ice cream a lot,
stopped being friends with
some really toxic people,
had an amazing year.



/. 

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by Placebo Effect » Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:40 am
Hi Emma/Emmy/Aqua/Missy/Whitey. I am going to attempt to type all those names now when I talk to you
I'm glad that I'm accepted, I think I was also on the V2 thread... Long time ago.
I was wondering, on here, does anyone have a specific genre they stick to or does everyone's writing flow into other genres too? 'Cause my writing seems to stick with fantasy when it comes to roleplay, then when I'm writing short stories, it just turns into a depressing and much more of a reality based story.
◤................................................................◥granddad, even though
you are no longer with us
physically, you'll always be
in my heart. i miss you.08 / 07 / 2013◣................................................................◢my deviantart
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by Brittle » Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:47 am
Well limit, {sorry I know you we're asking her{I apologize if your a guy, I'm a girl so it's normal to say her lol} but I've been on this thread awhile now so what the heck

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Well, everyone can basically do what they do! I love fantasy and write it just as much as Realistic fiction, my second favorite. So you can switch through, or work on something directed.
I know Stray dog has been working on some terror novels, and I don't think he was doing that before...{again sorry on the gender thing,

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~Brit
P.s. Actually it's instant accept so no one actually accepted you

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by rothbart. » Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:42 am
Username: rothbart.
What we will call you: rothy, roth, anything's fine by me.
Will you critique other's work?: sure, if they're looking for it.
Links to your story if you have any: I've actually not posted anything to link to, I prefer to keep a good amount of things to myself, but I'll share if asked! ouo
Anything you want us to know?: I started writing two years ago and it was a great decision. I've still got a lot to learn, but I've come a long way and hope to be published one day!
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by Darius4Ever ~ ♥ » Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:48 am
The Sky is the Limit wrote:Hi Emma/Emmy/Aqua/Missy/Whitey. I am going to attempt to type all those names now when I talk to you
I'm glad that I'm accepted, I think I was also on the V2 thread... Long time ago.
I was wondering, on here, does anyone have a specific genre they stick to or does everyone's writing flow into other genres too? 'Cause my writing seems to stick with fantasy when it comes to roleplay, then when I'm writing short stories, it just turns into a depressing and much more of a reality based story.
There has to be romance and tragedy in mine, and I also prefer a creepier or more taboo / wrong / disturbing writing to a happy, predictable one. I started writing a stalker one a while ago about a Freshman in college stalking an eleven-year-old. That probably sounds disgusting though so yeah. /shot ; I also write lots of abuse stories.
that's just what I write, I've tried to change it but I can't, I lose interest in other things.
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