Also, who really cares about spelling and grammer if it's in their diary?
It makes it seem more like an actually journal.
Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by Dracanea » Fri Feb 01, 2013 1:31 pm
*slowly creeps in* Stalking now! X3
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by ✿Maragold✿ » Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:41 am
Well, dear Sydney. You're chosen for...
GIVING ALL YOUR COOKIES TO THE REST OF THE WORLD >8D
...*cough* Anyway, waiting for more!
I don't really understand why the grammar would be so important in a diary/journal, if you are only writing about your day, not a book to publish. XD I'm not trying to seem like I'm against your opinion, but let the important things to slip and have a good time while laughing at things. C:
GIVING ALL YOUR COOKIES TO THE REST OF THE WORLD >8D
...*cough* Anyway, waiting for more!
.:Rayneh:. wrote:One word: Grammar.
Please fix your grammar. I started reading it, but then saw grammar mistakes, and stopped. I would finish it, if the grammar improved.
I don't really understand why the grammar would be so important in a diary/journal, if you are only writing about your day, not a book to publish. XD I'm not trying to seem like I'm against your opinion, but let the important things to slip and have a good time while laughing at things. C:
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by .Fish. » Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:32 am
Maragold wrote:Well, dear Sydney. You're chosen for...
GIVING ALL YOUR COOKIES TO THE REST OF THE WORLD >8D
YES I'm first on the LIST
MORE???
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by Foul » Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:31 pm
Stalking c:
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by moved to EeveeAnthro » Mon Feb 11, 2013 7:35 am
I'm gonna try to get a new entry up soon.uwu
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by .Fish. » Mon Feb 11, 2013 8:15 am
YAY
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by Leafy_Kat » Mon Feb 11, 2013 2:13 pm
moar plz! this is awesomeness!
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Re: Once upon a time.. (A Pet Diary) Book one
by moved to EeveeAnthro » Mon Feb 11, 2013 2:54 pm
Hey,Journal.
I'm sick.In bed.And everyone in this place is treating me as if I'm a god.
"Oh,Sydney,do you need any refreshments?"
"Oh,Sydney,my dear,are you comfortable?"
That's pretty much all I heard all day.Strangers asking me if I needed anything.Lots of noise.
But once I overheard two ladies.
"Finally,the pup in the purple cloak has come," One cooed softly.
"It's about time," Hissed the older lady."I won't be a alive much longer-none of us will be alive much longer-if she doesn't fix it."
"Don't worry,everything will be fine,Ms. Penny," the younger lady assured her.Then the two walked off.
What? What did they mean by 'the pup in the purple cloak'? Did they mean me? I had a purple cloak...And what did they mean by 'if she doesn't fix it'? Fix what? So many questions unanswered.
Too tired to write right now.Bye,Journal.
I'm sick.In bed.And everyone in this place is treating me as if I'm a god.
"Oh,Sydney,do you need any refreshments?"
"Oh,Sydney,my dear,are you comfortable?"
That's pretty much all I heard all day.Strangers asking me if I needed anything.Lots of noise.
But once I overheard two ladies.
"Finally,the pup in the purple cloak has come," One cooed softly.
"It's about time," Hissed the older lady."I won't be a alive much longer-none of us will be alive much longer-if she doesn't fix it."
"Don't worry,everything will be fine,Ms. Penny," the younger lady assured her.Then the two walked off.
What? What did they mean by 'the pup in the purple cloak'? Did they mean me? I had a purple cloak...And what did they mean by 'if she doesn't fix it'? Fix what? So many questions unanswered.
Too tired to write right now.Bye,Journal.
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