Dog on Duty (20 chapters (SO FAR)

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Yes!
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Sat Jul 13, 2013 8:57 pm

Thanks! I'll check for grammar later. You see, I've been in france for the whole of this week and I just got back. I'll be writing more over the summer, i've been so jammed up with school :D
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby Mice on the Moon » Fri Jul 19, 2013 7:29 am

Woo!
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Fri Jul 19, 2013 7:41 am

I'm changing some stuff round to make more sense of the whole 'dogs rule the world' thing. So the only human name now is going to belong to Kelly. Hawk is just Hawk now, agent 206. She isn't called Nikki or Dusk, just to stop cunfusion. I think it sounds better any way. Umm, oh yeah! I may also be launching an art competition to get a better image of Hawk and promote the story.
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby JiaPop » Fri Jul 19, 2013 1:54 pm

Sounds awesome! If you decide to host an art competition, will traditional art count? 8-)
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dignity,and she
laughs without
fear of
the future.




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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Sat Jul 20, 2013 3:28 am

Yes of course! I don't care what you use to create the art, as long as you put some though into it :D
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby Mice on the Moon » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:12 am

:( My computer won't let me use the oekaki...:(
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Tue Jul 23, 2013 12:11 am

Hmmmn... Have you tried reinstalling java? I did that and it started working again.

As for the story, I've revealed one of Hawk's big secrets in chapter thirteen!

EDIT: new poll!
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby JiaPop » Tue Jul 23, 2013 3:36 am

To Hawk,
Or maybe someone already noticed but didn't bother to say anything about it.

I didn't know she was part husky. :o
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Tue Jul 23, 2013 7:25 am

To Jesus4ever,
I never thought of that, thanks.
Yours, Hawk

Me neither :o I thought it would be cool though 8-)
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Re: Dog on Duty (13,797 / 12 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Wed Jul 31, 2013 11:01 pm

Bump. I'm gonna use today just to improve the story, so prepare to read! Also, if anyone found any grammar mistakes please let me know, and i'll correct it C:
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