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[Forgotten Dearly]

This is awesome ^ _^

[rose tyler, i]

Bump :3

[fly away.]

This is cool, but if your looking for advice.

I advise that you slow it down.. But it is a very good story.

[rose tyler, i]

Thanks :3 I'll do that in the future :3
@ Forgotten Dearly: Thank you very much!

[Lanton]

This is definitely one of the most original stories I've read on CS so far, in a good way. ^^ The only critique I would have is that in this part,"No. This can't be happening... Lavender... She's been Wronged. First, you should know about me. I'm Alicia Stonebrook, 14, student of Brookfield school." the transition sounded a tad sudden. Other than that I enjoyed your story immensely and look forward to seeing more.

[rose tyler, i]

This is definitely one of the most original stories I've read on CS so far, in a good way. ^^ The only critique I would have is that in this part,"No. This can't be happening... Lavender... She's been Wronged. First, you should know about me. I'm Alicia Stonebrook, 14, student of Brookfield school." the transition sounded a tad sudden. Other than that I enjoyed your story immensely and look forward to seeing more.

Why thank you very much! Sorry about that, I've always had trouble with transitions. It was at first going to be a story, then I changed into diary form, and then I messed it up :3 Thank you again!

[Moodoo8]

I must admit, this story is very good so far. This is the main-characters diary, right? Anyways, can't wait to read more. PM me when you do write more of this book.

One last question: Do you have a plot?

[rose tyler, i]

I must admit, this story is very good so far. This is the main-characters diary, right? Anyways, can't wait to read more. PM me when you do write more of this book.

One last question: Do you have a plot?

Yes, but it's in the making :3
I have it all planned out, just don't know how I'm going to spread it put evenly XD

[Poke-]

Thanks for letting me feature this in my newspaper!
Here it is
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=994511

[rose tyler, i]

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