The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

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The characters of my book are awesome, are they not? But which of them is awesomer?

Amy
10
26%
Jenette
15
38%
Mom
1
3%
Sorrow
1
3%
Flower
1
3%
Indah
4
10%
Anger
0
No votes
Jessy
1
3%
Agent Cornelia
1
3%
Misty
5
13%
 
Total votes : 39

Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:46 am

Ellies wrote:I'm here if your ever stuck with your writing :)

Thanks! :D
Zookrates wrote:Smart little Amy xD
Keep writing :'D !

I'll probably have to do more tomorrow. Sorry. :(
*Blackberry* wrote:Well, I kind of was planning to write a story but so happens I saw this book and I straight away recognized the title and they showed '' FOURTH BOOK'' That's why I came here and read but you know the speaking maybe you could make it Darker as I can't really see it, you could use Blue or Dark blue.

There's already colors for that, but you can highlight the words with your mouse to make it easier to read. Sorry for the light colors.
Xela XIII wrote:Woo! Good start!
Just try not to write in that crazy neon yellow/green colour. I had to highlight it just to see it. >.<

I look forward to reading more! :)

Thanks! And I'll just have to write in that writing for one post, and then I think I'm good with the neon yellow green thingy color.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Into the Sky » Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:05 am

YAY!!! New book! :D

Augh...the cliffhangers...DX
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby cindy4213 » Tue Nov 01, 2011 1:04 pm

the whole series is so good. please keep up the good job :D :D :D
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Nov 01, 2011 4:17 pm

Into the Sky wrote:YAY!!! New book! :D

Augh...the cliffhangers...DX

lol!
cindy4213 wrote:the whole series is so good. please keep up the good job :D :D :D

Why thank you!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby brambletalon98 » Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:38 pm

AWESOME. EPIC.ness. XD.

*huggles JeasusFreak* Thank you for continuing to write X3
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby *Blackberry* » Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:00 am

Could you write the next part has I am abit worried about something and this make me feel better after reading it.
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Remaskis » Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:39 am

Yeah! ...I am a new fan. xD
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:55 am

Claw of the Ages wrote:AWESOME. EPIC.ness. XD.

*huggles JeasusFreak* Thank you for continuing to write X3

Whythankyou for reading! XD
Maplex wrote:Yeah! ...I am a new fan. xD

YAY! NEW FAN! :D
*Blackberry* wrote:Could you write the next part has I am abit worried about something and this make me feel better after reading it.

Alright, I'll write more, after this announcement:

PEOPLES THAT ARE FANS OF TIAJNAD! THIS IS AN ANNOUNCEMENT THAT YOU MUST READ! THIS IS THE MONTH OF NOVEMBER, AND A WRITING PROGRAM CALLED NaNoWriMo STARTS FOR THE WHOLE MONTH! I NEED TO WRITE AND FINISH A BOOK, SO I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO WRITE MUCH OF TIAJNAD! THE MONTHS OF NOVEMBER AND APRIL ARE USUALLY MY BUSIEST MONTHS! NOVEMBER IS NaNoWriMo, AND APRIL IS ScriptFrenzy, WHERE I HAVE TO WRITE A SCRIPT FOR THE WHOLE MONTH OF APRIL! I AM SORRY, BUT I PROMISE TO WRITE MORE RIGHT.... NOW!










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IT WAS AGENT CORNELIA; THE HEAD OF ALL AGENTS! (Her words will be in light green) As soon as I saw her I did a really idiotic thing.
Your Majesty!
I bowed and bowed and bowed. She was like my ROAL MODLE! .... Well, my second. My first one is pie! Jenette slapped me and I stood up straight. Agent Cornelia just stared at me.
Why did you call us here, Agent Cornelia?
I need your help.
OH MY CHEESE SHE NEEDED MY HELP!
With what?
There have been some strange things going on in the big city..... bad things.
I raised my hand.
Yes, Agent Amy?
Oooh, I loved the sound of that! AGENT AMY! The Double A!
Why do you have a bow and arrow and blue hair?
Agent Cornelia sighed.
I have blue hair because I was born with it, like you were born without brains, and I am really good at archery. Now, have any questions about the mission?
I actually do. What exactly is happening in the big city that's so bad?
There are these gangs. They're kidnapping mothers and their pups. There are over five families, besides the fathers, missing every day. I suspect that they are trying to form an army of some sort, and we need your help.
Alright, I'll be on it!
I started to head out the door.
Um.... Agent Amy, Jenette is going with you.
I stopped in my tracks and froze, out of sadness and happiness. I wanted to show Agent Cornelia that I could do things on my own, but I didn't want to go out there alone.
Right.
I walked back to Agent Cornelia and Jenette.
When do we start?
I'll give you the directions to the big city in a couple of minutes, and from their you guys have to figure out what to do.






(Thank you Xella XIII for the idea of dog gangs and them aiming for the mothers and pups!!)
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Lunala » Wed Nov 02, 2011 10:52 am

Is NaNoWriMo some sort of competition? If so I hope you write well. Well, that is expected, haha.
I also hope you write enough of TIAJNAD to keep us stalking. :3
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Postby katomorakwarrior » Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:07 pm

Good Luck on the NaNoWriMo, JF!!!!
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