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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby Asap1998 » Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:13 am

Wow...it just gets better and better!!!
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby Failed Gamer Girl » Tue Oct 18, 2011 3:56 pm

Love it! Drew is sorta mean brushing off Fabian's love like that and being all mega nice to Sabastion. D:
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby -Rue- » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:43 am

Love it!!!!
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby iSunshine » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:08 am

"Don't touch her!"
Fabian bit his lower lip and got up. Tears rolled off his chin as he screamed, "You!" Sabastian readied himself for fist but it never came. He lowered his hands to catch Fabian stalking off.
Turning to Drew, he muttered, "Maybe you should, uh..."
Drew woke from her dreamland. "Right." Her footsteps echoed on the dirt floor of the barn as she caught up with Fabian. "Hey."
His darted to her. "Back to taunt me?"
"No, I, uh, just wanted to tell yo-"
"That you don't want to be friends? That you want to make "goo-goo" eyes at pretty boy? That you hate me?" He paused to sniffle and wipe his nose. "'Cause, I want you to know..." Lurking behind his teeth, Fabian's tongue dared to venture to Drew. He began to lean in but caught himself. "...love you..."
Drew stared into Fabian's eyes. She watched tears brim over and sighed. "I know, Fabian. But," Her eyes drifted to Sabastian who was leaning against the stall door, looking into the light.
"Yeah, you love pretty boy." He glared into the dirt. "Well," He raised his hands and showed her his middle finger. "Get this!" Something was thrown at Drew's feet. She watched Fabian leave before she picked it up. As she unfolded it, her breath caught in her throat.

She read to herself,
I watch a dove fly to its nest
Little birds squealing for food
You are the dove
I am the bird
The food is our love.

I need you
Like I need air
But without it
I disappear
Into dust.

Don't leave me
That dove
My dove
Will always be
Forever
In my heart.


It was a love poem. From Fabian. Drew realized how heart broken he must be. She fell to the ground, her head in her hands and cried. Fabian loved her. He loved her. Not a crush. Not because he thought she was "sexy". But because it was true love. Sabastian heard the muffled crying and walked over.
"Hey, what's wrong?" He frowned.
"Sabastian, what are we doing?"
He looked at her, confused.
"We just met and,"
"We're going too fast."
They're eyes met and Drew sighed. "I-I just can't do this any longer. I'm not ready." Sabastian nodded. He scribbled something down and handed it to her.
"That's my number. Call me if you ever wann-"
"Thanks."
Sabastian nodded and ran a hand through his hair. "I guess I'll, uh...see you around."
"Bye."
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby iSunshine » Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:21 pm

Chapter Three: Trying

Drew sat up in bed. She stared at her alarm clock. 3:45am. She sighed and rolled to her side, staring at the wall. A tear or two rolled down her cheek and she had to take deep breaths to keep from sobbing. Her home phone sat on her side table. Staring at it, Drew remembered when she used to call Fabian whenever she couldn't sleep. With a start, she realized she had gotten Sabastian's number. She picked up the phone and dialed.

"Fabian?"
"Drew? I-is that really you?"
"Yes."
"But, I thought th-"
"It's over with Sabastian. I decided to give you another chance."
"You did...?" There was a sniffle and shaky breath. "I love you, Drew."
There was a silence before Drew answered truthfully. "I love you too, Fabian."
"Drew?"
"Yes?"
"Would you maybe...wanna uh, catch a movie this weekend?"
Drew smiled. "I'd love to."
"Awesome."

Drew woke up again. The clock now read 6:25am. She decided to get up. On her bed lay the clothes she had chosen to wear that day. A black, strapless dress, her favorite black zip-up sweatshirt, and her knee-high converse. She put on a pair of neon purple thigh-high socks and than pulled on the rest of her clothes. Drew stepped in front of a mirror and swept her black hair to the side. Checking her earrings, she smiled. To be truthful, she was dying to see Fabian.
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby iSunshine » Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:30 am

A knock echoed against Drew's door at 7:30. She opened to see Fabian wearing a nice purple button-up shirt, some nice black pants but, of course, well-loved, bright yellow converse. Fabian blushed and looked at the ground, his hand brushing up against the back of his neck. Drew giggled and took his hand.
"So, what are we planning on seeing, handsome?"
"Ooh, got a bit of a flirt, do I?" Fabian smiled. "What are you interested in seeing?"
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Re: [ WIP ] Safe :3 **Love Story**

Postby Failed Gamer Girl » Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:57 pm

Love it! Mommy your such a great writer!
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is my best friend of all time.
she's fabulous, and amazing.
and you need to love her too.
you should go pm her and
start a conversation.
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look like they're having a
rough day.
hi, my name is failed gamer girl, and i love one direction, ed sheeran, and fabulous gay men. this is why rire and i are best friends, she actually made this signature 'cause she's really nice.
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