Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Who's Your Favorite Character?

Amy
31
23%
Jenette
37
28%
Indah
5
4%
Rhubarb
5
4%
Misty
25
19%
Flower
12
9%
The Indians
3
2%
Suzi
10
8%
Mom
2
2%
Brent
2
2%
 
Total votes : 132

Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby Socks + Lani » Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:13 pm

I love this series XD
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Postby Zookrates » Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:21 pm

Owo....
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Postby Ellies » Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:47 pm

Wait im now confused what about mum and brent arnt they on a mission to find them?
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Postby Socks + Lani » Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:51 pm

No the magic pearl that could destroy the world and JF MOAR OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH A FRYING PAN!
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Postby Ellies » Fri Sep 09, 2011 9:04 pm

Queenflea wrote:No the magic pearl that could destroy the world and JF MOAR OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH A FRYING PAN!

UMMMMMMMM........... ok.......... (akward silence)
I think it is really good :) Im just anxious about mum and brent thats all.
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:54 am

MxRxSxMxMxR wrote:I am sitting here with marinade on my cheeks reading this book while eating marinated ribs XD

lol XD
Lil' Warrior wrote:Oh no! The forest IS cursed D :

Ooohhhh.... RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!! :lol:
Queenflea wrote:I love this series XD

Why thank you! :D
Zookrates wrote:Owo....

Owo..... back to you, Zooky! Wait, can I call you Zooky?
Ellies wrote:Wait im now confused what about mum and brent arnt they on a mission to find them?

Oh..... I forgot about them..... :oops:
Queenflea wrote:JF MOAR OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH A FRYING PAN!

Okay, I'll write more! :D And how would you hit me with a frying pan when you don't even know where I live? XD
Ellies wrote:I think it is really good :) Im just anxious about mum and brent thats all.

Ya, after I finish this whole pearl thing, I'll try to get back to that.

OMW YOU GUYS! (this is still JF talking) I just saw a mistake in my writing! Look at what I wrote:
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:They... they both died? Just like that?
Wait a minute... they where looking for the crystal too, I bet!

AW MAN I MEANT TO WRITE PEARL, NOT CRYSTAL! *Slaps forhead* I'm an idiot.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Sep 10, 2011 5:20 am

Okay, back to the story now:











I looked at who had put that spear to my neck, and guess who I saw? These crazy indiands! Who did they think they where, putting a spear to my throat? (Their words will be underlined)
You come with us.
What? No. Why?
Master want to see you.
Why us?
The indian didn't reply. Instead, it shoved me and Jenette forward, and we had to walk with them. By the time we stopped walking (which was like 60 hours later) we where looking at a castle.
You go inside.
What?! Are you CAHRAZY?!
You go inside.
What if I say no?
Swords and spears where pointed at her.
I have a feeling that I need to go inside.
You go inside first,
The indian was talking to me!
Uh... no thanks!
Spears where pointed at me.
Alright, alright! I'm going!
I walked up to the castle, and opened the door. I walked into the castle, and the door closed behind me. There where live animals everywhere! I'm talkign bunnies, baby dragons, dogs, foxes, fawns, and even fairies! Oh wait, are fairies animals? Either way, there where fairies there.
Hello? Anybody in here?
I heard muttering. (The muttering thing's words will be in greyish blue)
Who enters my house?!
UH..... DERP.... UH....
Your name is Uh Derp Uh? What an odd name.
No. It's-
So your name is No It's?
It's Amy.
Okay, It's Amy. Nice to meet you.
Just Amy, actually.
Alright, nice to meet you Just Amy Actually.
Amy.
Can't you make up your mind? Anyway, nice to meet you Amy.
I saw a dog. The dog was the one talking that couldn't get my name right! Here's a picture of him:
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My name is Indahzook, but you can call me Indah.
Nice to meet you, Indah. Why are there so many animals in here?
Because I'm the ruler of the animals. And the indians. And this jungle.
You are? Well then can you tell me why it's cursed?
Cursed?! I never put a curse on this jungle! I- oh that rascle!
What? Who? Huh?!
My brother. He's always playing tricks on this jungle. What kind of curse is it this time?
You can't stop arguing and you die of hunger and thirst.
Indah slapped his forhead.
Alright, I'll send out my men to find my brother.
Why is he setting curses on the jungle?
To try and make me not the ruler. He wants to be the ruler himself.
I nodded. This usually always happened. Somebody hated their brother or cousin or something and so they wanted to be in charge and tried to destroy them. I'd read that in books.
So now what? Jenette is-
Who's Jenette?
My sister. And she's waiting outside with the other indians and I need to-
Outside?
Yes, that's what I just said.
Oh dear.
What?
Hurry outside! We may already be too late.
What? Why?
If my brother is in this jungle, he'd be outside.
And? What's the problem with that?
My brother's an evil scourcerer, and if he finds anybody he'll keep the captive and make them work for him as slaves forever!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Zookrates » Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:52 am

Of course you can call me Zooky. Most people call me Zoo, but I dont care what they are calling me XD
Epicness, I made me want to write to XD
Maybe another day.
I have to much to do now X)
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Postby Socks + Lani » Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:09 am

-puts virtual frying pan away- I don't know what was better, The epicness of the story or getting to hit you on the head with a virtual frying pan XD THE STORIIIIIEEEE
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:20 am

Zookrates wrote:Of course you can call me Zooky. Most people call me Zoo, but I dont care what they are calling me XD
Epicness, I made me want to write to XD
Maybe another day.
I have to much to do now X)

Hmm.... I think I like Zoo better! So..... HI ZOO!!!! XD
And you should totally write! It's fun! :)
Queenflea wrote:-puts virtual frying pan away- I don't know what was better, The epicness of the story or getting to hit you on the head with a virtual frying pan XD THE STORIIIIIEEEE

XD I'll probably write more later! I have a lot to do today, thoguh; clean the bathroom, vaccum my room, vaccum the living room, empty the dishwasher, BUSY BUSY DAY!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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