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by nostalgiatech » Tue Oct 11, 2011 6:33 pm
Tech wrote:Tech wrote:Tech wrote:I was almost glad she couldn't see the horrible villain within me.
Villian hid in the shadows, never to be seen. The guards patroled the night, searching for the treacherous dog. People and groups of people on the streets were shouting 3 words. 3 words over and over again. "Kill the villain!" they would shout, Villian resisting the urge to kill them also, among the many he had killed in his lifetime.
When dawn began, the shouting stopped. The guards suddenly went back to their homes. Villian could finally come out.
Villian wandered around the bare streets, ready to kill any person who would dare show his or her face. It was true, Villian was a villain. He, ready to destroy any being that came close to him, was somewhat lonely. But that could never stop him. When Villian would awaken to his monster inside, others would scream and cower in fear.
Villian kept on walking, never stopping. He eventually reached a village, nature dominant in pretty much everywhere. No one was screaming. No one was running away. No one was trying to kill him. They didn't even pay any attention to him. Villian liked it that way. But there was one person who was looking straight at him. A young girl, pale skin, and wearing a black hood. Her eyes looked distant and clear. And then all of a sudden, the girl started walking towards him, wearing a curious look on her face. Villian said nothing.
"Mister, why does no one look at you? Why do you look like a stranger?" the girl asked like she knew him, "and why do you look so lonely?"
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part 2 later. Anyone like?
Part 2!
Villian looked puzzled, but he said nothing. The girl smiled and grabbed his hand. "Come on, Mr Quiet-person, let me show you around the village!" she said and skipped off to the town, Villian following behind her, trying to get away. He didn't want to harm any more innocent people.
They came to a market place, lively and full of colours. Everyone looked at the girl and greeted her, and then returned to what they were doing. The girl smiled happily.
"That voice over there belongs to Mr Barbir, he's always smelling like fruit," the girl pointed to a fat man selling apricots, "and that voice over there belongs to Mz Evermot." she pointed to a tall lady, singing loudly, a few people stopping to listen to her voice. She looked quite old and wrinkled. She had a stern look on her face constantly. "Mz Evermot is a very kind lady. Her voice is beautiful and she used to sing a lullaby to me when i was younger." the girl said. Villian frowned.
"Why are you telling me all of this, little girl?" Villian asked, hiding the fact that this village felt very welcoming to him, though he did not want to admit it. The girl put her hands on her hips.
"My name is not 'little girl', it's Mini. And don't friends introduce friends to their other friends?"
"Hold on, since when were we friends?"
Mini laughed. "Since i met you, silly!"
Part 3 -
Villian raised an eyebrow.
"How can you call someone you just met a friend?" he asked, not getting her point of view.
Mini smiled.
"Everyone here is my friend! And a friend knows all of her friends' names. What's your name mister?" she asked Villian.
"Villian the villa-"he paused, "Villian. My name's Villian."
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by nostalgiatech » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:57 pm


Dream ~~ Comet
My race, the Stars. We'd fly around in space like particles in a current. We never talked, along existed. We were the Stars. Not the stars you see in the sky at night. We were the nightbringers, hidden in the darkness, co existing with those twinkling stars you see at night.
I am Dream. I (am), or more correctly, (was), a Star.
One twilighted night, we fell from the sky, down to the ground. When we hit the ground, we were in a form of a Earthlander. (Eyes, mouth, legs, voice)
I looked around, looking for my family (Wish, Thought, Goal), but they were nowhere to be seen. So i sat on the grass, and looked up at the sky. I could see the stars from the ground. (They were lighting up the dark night sky)
The next day, i was curled up on the grass. I'm never awake during the day. I never saw the sun. But then this Earthlander girl woke me. (She was wearing a colourful jacket) When i opened my eyes, i saw the sun. I saw the world, the grass, the trees, the houses, the animals. But i couldn't see the stars. (The sky was painted blue)
"Where? Where are the stars?" I was paniking, where were the stars? Is this what they call daytime? But that girl just laughed, she seemed perfectly fine.
"It's not nightime anymore, you silly dog. Who are you, where do you belong?" that girl asked me, crouching down beside me.
I'm not a Star anymore. (I belong down here)Part 2
The girl with the colourful jacket took me in, invited me to her house. Still, no stars. I couldn't see the stars. But i have grown used to it by now. The night only comes every 12 hours.
The girl with the colourful jacket's name was Comet, named after the Cometia Falls, which is a large cliff of rushing water. I did not see how it fitted her, but i called her by the name. She was a beautiful dog, with green fur and twinkling eyes. She reminded me of home. (Her eyes reminded me)
The girl introduced me to her mother and father, who she called 'mum' and 'dad'. Back at home, we never talked to our parents, so i thought i should call them 'mum' and 'dad', but Comet insisted i just call them Mr and Mrs Jageer (Comet's last name was Jageer). Mr Jageer had Comet's green fur, and Mrs Jageer had her lilac eyes. (There were twinkling)
I waited and waited for the night to come, i sat outside on the grass, waiting. (It was oh so long) But when the sun finally went down, i could see a star. I quickly dragged Comet out of her house, to see the night sky. Comet admitted she never really took the time to count the stars at night. (I did, she couldn't believe it)
"Dream, your body is glowing!"
I looked at myself, and indeed i was glowing.
"I am a Star. I glow at night."
I thought to myself, i am not a Star anymore. But then how can i still glow?
Part 3
Comet stared at me, like she could not believe.
"But......but a star doesn't look like a dog!" she exclaimed.
"I am not a star, not one of those shines in the night sky. I am a Star, a unique species of a dog." i replied, glowing brighter. But it was hard to say that, since a star cannot survive on Earth. Why did i survive?
Comet frowned, but then smiled.
"OK, i will believe you. For now......" she said, and then look back to the dark sky, and rolled her head back.
The next morning, the stars disappeared again. I, for the first time, had slept inside the house, on the couch. But this time, Comet woke me early. She was wearing a uniform of some sort.
"Come on, Dream! Time for school! She said, and handed me a uniform, similar to hers.
"School?" i questioned. What is school? It must be the habit of an Earthlander, I'm sure. Comet laughed.
"Just put this uniform on, would you? I'll tell you about it on the way there." she said, and went outside. "I'll be waiting!"
I dressed in the uniform, my tie crooked and my fur a mess. I thought it was a pretty good effort for my first try. Although, the uniform would be much nicer if it had stars on it.
But, what is school?
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nostalgiatech on Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:10 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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by nostalgiatech » Sat Oct 15, 2011 9:09 pm
~Amandiy~ wrote:Wow ! You are a talented writer! I want to hear more about the Alchemists and the queens daughter story ! But they're all pretty good ;D
Why thankyou very much!

I may or may not continue some of my unfinished stories, but it depends really on how much writing motivation i have. XD
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by nostalgiatech » Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:12 pm
I have updated the Comet and Dream's story! It's on the same post.
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