Life

[Pyjaks]

I just moseyed on over here from the link you posted on Inklings- and wow. That's all I have to say.
Ok that's not really all :P

This was awesome. Seriously. Even in such a short piece you managed to create a brilliant, immersive atmosphere. I immediately felt sucked in and struck by the same sense of desperation and foreboding as the she-wolf. You also managed to shift the mood of the story so seamlessly- from desperation to anger to fear to motherly and protective, it all fit together so well. You're an awesome writer!

In particular I really liked this line;

A small village nestled beneath the hill’s forbidding brow, like chicks under their mother’s wing.

It painted the humans in a way that made them seem like prey or weaklings to the she-wolf, which highlighted the way she sorta flipped back and forth between fear and anger. I really liked it, lol.

Anyways, this piece was awesome. I can't wait to read more from you :)

[Ranger of the North]

I just moseyed on over here from the link you posted on Inklings- and wow. That's all I have to say.
Ok that's not really all

This was awesome. Seriously. Even in such a short piece you managed to create a brilliant, immersive atmosphere. I immediately felt sucked in and struck by the same sense of desperation and foreboding as the she-wolf. You also managed to shift the mood of the story so seamlessly- from desperation to anger to fear to motherly and protective, it all fit together so well. You're an awesome writer!

In particular I really liked this line;

A small village nestled beneath the hill’s forbidding brow, like chicks under their mother’s wing.

It painted the humans in a way that made them seem like prey or weaklings to the she-wolf, which highlighted the way she sorta flipped back and forth between fear and anger. I really liked it, lol.

Anyways, this piece was awesome. I can't wait to read more from you (:

Oh, wow, thank you! You honestly have no idea how happy your words made me
Thank you so much! <3 *retreats to cry happy tears

[Marastia]

You've really made a wonderful piece. From the first paragraph the reader is engrossed in the story. The visuals are powerful and detailed. A truly heartwarming piece,

[Ranger of the North]

You've really made a wonderful piece. From the first paragraph the reader is engrossed in the story. The visuals are powerful and detailed. A truly heartwarming piece,

Oh, thank you so much!! That really means a lot to me, thank you <3

[! honeysuckle !]

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this is SO good!! You should be super, super proud, Ranger. I aspire to write as well as you

[Ranger of the North]

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this is SO good!! You should be super, super proud, Ranger. I aspire to write as well as you

Aw, thank you so much!! <33

You guys are making me cry, haha x') Honestly, your kind words mean so, so much to me; thanks all for your wonderful words <333

[Spirit23Wolf]

Wow this is amazing I love it <3

[Ranger of the North]

Wow this is amazing I love it <3

Aw, thank you so much, man <3

[Arya22]

This is really good!!
I just love all the description and especially how it seems so... Realistic!
Well done!

[Ranger of the North]

This is really good!!
I just love all the description and especially how it seems so... Realistic!
Well done!

Aw, thank you so much!! I'm so glad it was realistic for you