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Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:12 am

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Smile! [url]Art of him Wearing It[/url]
Citron wants everyone around him to be happy, so on days where he thinks everything is a tad gloomy or he believes someone is a little sad, he will put on this outfit and walk past them on purpose in order to try and make them at least a little happier even if it's only for a while.
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❝strengths and weaknesses❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:30 am

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S T R E N G T H S
- When he's around people he knows, he is a leader.
- Good at critical thinking
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W E A K N E S S E S
- He is very bad with conversations
- Can't express what he's thinking properly.
- New things -- absolutely hates them
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❝quirks❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:34 am

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[url=art]The Side Mouth[/url]
When Citron is trying to lie or is irritated, he will talk from the side of his mouth, which gives a really awkward facial expression to look at as he does so. He also does this when he mumbles his actual feelings under his breath towards something that made him angry but he didn't express it.
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[url=art]Animal Sounds[/url]
When Citron is bored or the room is filled with awkward silence, he will break the silence or cure his boredom by making animal noises, it's just an instinct. It is also uncontrollable since he has been doing it most of his life.
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[url=art]Doodling on EVERYTHING[/url]
A common thing for Citron to do to his homework is destroy it with random doodles. Instead of "my dog ate my homework!" a phrase Citron could say would be "my drawings ate the homework!" He gets easily distracted by these doodles since he gets inspired and pictures awesome writings so he illustrates them on things like his homework, notes, etc.
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[url=art]Talking to Self[/url]
Citron can't really think too straight without talking, so he tends to talk to himself very quietly so he can actually think properly. It annoys people and makes it really awkward when Citron is around someone like his crush.
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The Bunny
This somewhat links into the animal sounds thing, but instead he actually pretends to be the animal rather than just making the sound. He will put on bunny ears he keeps stashed underneath his hair and hop around all day like a bunny depending on his mood. He typically does this around the two holidays that give out candy - easter and halloween.
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❝pet peeves❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:35 am

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Pencil Tapping
Although in the lot of the most common pet peeves, Citron absolutely hates it when people tap a pencil against their desk like a drum. It's rather distracting to him and if it goes on for too long, Citron will grab his own pencil and bash it against the pencil being tapped against the table, telling them to stop.
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Feel of Chalk
The texture of chalk makes Citron's paws tingle in a weird way, making it uncomfortable for Citron to even just hold chalk -- don't get started with actually writing with chalk, it only makes the weird texture more noticeable and sometimes it even makes Citron's paws numb.
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Whispering
Whispering bothers Citron a lot, since he feels like if you're whispering, you're trying to keep something secret, and it bothers him unless it's taking place where quiet is normal, such as a library or classroom while the teacher is talking. Whispering puts an odd strain on Citron's throat so he doesn't really ever whisper, he mumbles loudly instead, trying to make it almost un-understandable.
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❝likes and dislikes❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:36 am

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Likes
- Reading
- Sewing
- Coding
- Stars
- English Class
- Science
- Being Alone
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Dislikes
- Loud Environments
- Failing
- People Who Slack Off
- Tank Tops
- Cotton, very itchy against his skin
- CHALK!
- Pencils, he prefers to write in pen.
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❝favourites❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:38 am

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FAVOURITES

Animal
Any Bird - He loves how birds can soar free in the sky, he wishes he could sometimes do this.

Book
Although Citron often finds himself wrapped up in so many books, it's surprising he only has one favourite out of the bunch, and that favourite would be the Diary of Anne Frank. Although not exactly a "story" story, he admires how specific it is and he feels as if it demonstrates a very good feeling of what it would be like to live like that at the time.

Color
Pink or anything Pastel -- very easy on the eyes.

Destination
Japan, everything there seems quite unique compared to his France place, although he does love both of them almost equally, they both give him a very good welcome feeling.

Flower
He absolutely admires the rose, since it is one of the most basic but elegant flowers in the world.

Food
Although not healthy, he loves chocolate! But if you mean real food, he loves to bite into a salad.

God
He doesn't know much about gods, but he is personally fond of Abu, a lesser known god of plants. He thanks him for all of the plants he has left on the world for him to look at and admire.

Instrument
Piano

Language
Latin! He admires how elegant it is and how everything flows together in a weird but amazing way.

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❝occupation❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:50 am

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J O B? A L R E A D Y?

Job at 12
It's surprising someone as young as Citron already has a "job". He is currently an apprentice of coding in a small classroom that codes websites and other things for businesses around the world, for a little money that is. He is the one that will typically only announce ideas that he has and then sketch them out to give the others idea of what to code, but that is a big part.

Job in the Future
Eventually after Citron gets out of high school, he decides to go into astronomy, since it's been one of the things he's always loved. He becomes a rather successful one after discovering a couple of massive stars in the galaxy. When he isn't studying the stars, he is coding programs to help him study the stars even better
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❝companion❞

Postby saka. » Sun Mar 13, 2016 2:20 pm

[img]artw/frog[/img]
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Background
Bull is a frog that Citron found on one of his many journeys to the outside world. He soon became curious by some lily pads floating in the water, and decided to go investigate. After losing interest, he started walking away back home. While walking along this river towards his home, a tree started to fall and this frogs croaking nearby made Citron walk away, essentially saving his life. He felt the need to thank the frog, since he was the one that drove him away from the falling tree.
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"Once upon a Time . . ."
"Bye, mom!" Citron exclaimed as he put his back pack on his back. He waved and exited through the front door, closing it behind him silently. He walked onto the side walk and headed down the hill, heading into the crowded streets towards a river he had previously found at the back of the city. When he finally reached his destination, he padded along the rivers edge, looking at his reflection with a shy smile. "This water is beautiful, I love how peaceful it is here too..." He smelled the air and let out a long sigh of relief before continuing with his journey. He stopped when he saw something green, tilting his head in curiosity as he examined it from afar. He took off his back pack and placed it against a tree nearby, diving into the water. He went over to one of these things and poked it. "Oh.. it's one of those.. uh.. what are they called.." He tapped his tongue against the roof of his mouth, making a pop sound until it came into mind. "Oh, yeah! Lily pads.. they look cool." A sudden snap echoed around the river, silencing Citron. He got out of the river and shook his fur off, soon dismissing the snap. His ears perked when he heard a long and loud croak straight ahead.

"Eh?" Citron looked around and started forward, where he had heard the croak. As he walked forward, a tree fell down, where he had previously just been standing. He whirled around, looking in horror. He thought about it for a moment before gasping. "That sound.. it saved me!?" Citron went around the tree and grabbed his back pack before going back around the tree. He looked around anxiously before charging forward towards the sound. He eventually stopped when the croaking was really loud and peered through some bushes. A frog was sitting on a lily pad, floating around in the river happily. Citron gasped and gently picked up the frog, looking at it happily. "You.. you saved me! Thank you Froggy! Wait, no. You need a name.. How about.. Bull? Yeah, bull. It's a weird name considering you're green, but aye, it works." He giggled and put Bull the Frog on his head before starting back home.

When he got home, he approached his mom with the frog still on his head. "Hey, mom! Look at what I found!" Pomme looked at Citron and gasped. "Woah! That's cool, are you going to keep it..? I mean, I don't mind." She smiled awkwardly, and Citron eagerly nodded. "Yes, I'd love to! His name is Bull."
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❝posts❞

Postby saka. » Mon Mar 14, 2016 11:25 am

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lost contest - create a poster comp

post 2;;
lost contest - why the dream catcher comp

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lost contest - where they want to travel

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fanclub post - tons of replies and art dump

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fanclub post - replies,
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❝bye❞

Postby saka. » Tue Mar 15, 2016 2:12 pm

art
Before I redirect you to the post where you can proceed on with judging, I would like to give a huge thank you to the judges who have read through my form. I had an absolute blast writing for this character and developing piece by piece over the past month. And a big thank you to everyone who offered relationships so I could develop this plumerian with friends, enemies, and more. And a HUGE thank you to everyone who made me art for this competition.

Now, so you don't have to spam the back button twenty times or go to my posts and find the competition, I am going to leave a simple button down there for you to click to get back to the forum. Thank you for reading, and good luck judging!

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