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Postby SchnaDin » Mon Dec 28, 2015 12:33 am

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Crystals on the right site, crystalshards, headshot, chibi-/normal shadow and ice water diving were drawn by myself

Aquamarine crytsal: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/295619163010546857/
rainbow crystal: http://www.beliefnet.com/~/media/292371 ... 2FD08.ashx

Quote is from Balto 2
Songtext from "Rescue me- Kerrie Roberts"


Sorry for writting so much text ^^' I hope you had a little bit fun reading it c:

If i don't win i won't gift my art because this time it's very special for me and i will use the personality and text for another character!

Thanks a lot for everyone, who read that amount of text! :)
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Postby SchnaDin » Fri Jan 01, 2016 9:09 am

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Wishing for a ray of light - Tryout for Doll #103

Postby SchnaDin » Fri Jan 01, 2016 9:25 am

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Here will be my next form for the angelic angel demon ;)


username: SchnaDin
name: Leovan thinking about it [normal Leo - van) in short Leo
gender: Male
personality:
shadows name: He is called Munin, like one of the two ravens of Odin (This one is the symbol of "the memory")
reason why theyre listed as demonic: In short: After returning to his homeland for many years, demons conquered it and killed almost every descedant of the king. The King himself sacreficed himself for his citizens but without success. Leovans 'mother' survived and is now on the run with other angelic dolls. A great war between angels and demons started and will last hundreds of years. Leovan tried to find his 'mother' but got captured from the selfdeclaired demon king Nero and his followers. After month of imprisonment and torture, where he got the fatal damages on his hands and memory, he was able to run away and hide in the human world to recover. Later he had learned again about all that and that the demons implanted a dark seed of demonical power in him. They hoped it would crush him from inside but somehow his body was now able to control and transform some of those demonical technics.
In the shadows of the wood he helped the royal angel guard fighting the demons and trying to reclaim the throne to bring peace and freedom again. After the war stopped his 'mother' returned to him and told him, that the day she saw him, the doll maker first made him an demon but then decided to change his look into an angel. He never changed the inside of him, so he always was a demon in the inside and an angel on the outside.


To do:
- Pretty up section with fonts and gifs
- Main story and extras have to be done! rainbow opal; gifs; shadow Lion
- Editing the profile pics of the main adoption site for the doll house registry
- Don't forget the introduction of yourself etc. (first post!)
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Charcter Profiles

Postby SchnaDin » Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:45 am

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Leovan is a young angel like doll and has sixwings on his back. He always wears hoobies because they are the most comfortable for him. His beloved shadow is a bird like creature called Munin.
*The Doll House Registry Center will public more facts about Leovan later - please scroll down!


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Arthuros age is unknown and he is a male doll. He has a tall and well build body and his hair is orange. The part, that grows over his forehead contains some red highlights. His skin is a tiny bit darker than the other dolls have because of his constant desert traveling and his origins. Arthuro wears his upper clothes always open on the front. He is more of a relaxed guy and doesn't like serious and uncomfortable outfits.
His beloved shadow looks like a lion with a white mane and is called Kivuli (Suaheli for shadow)


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Nothing much is know about the demon king himself. He barely is in his original demonic form and he always sends his servants if something shall be fullfilled. The only thing know is, that he has long back hair and meciless and glowing eyes, which resemble those from a cat. He always wears a black long coat, which is open at the front.


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A female Doll, who also was created by the Master (Dolls call them by that because it is the creator of a dolls life and looks). She has long blonde hair and a beautymark below her left eye. She's always worried about other dolls, that are very close to her. She isn't really a mother but she got to know Leovan and the King for a very long time and wouldn't hesistate to fight for them just like a mother would do for her children.


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A group of two winged angels. Their armore is white with golden ornaments and reflects the sun extremly to weaken the opponent. No one knows who's fighting in them...


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Kivuli - Lion-like shadow with a white mane. Never leaves Arthuros side but likes to sleep a lot what took him in some trouble here and then. He was created from a leather armband, which has unknown origin atm

Munin - A bird-like shadow with white glowing feet/claws. Always on Leovans side and was born from a precious gemstone necklace, which belonged first to Leo's 'mother' and then him (got as a gift)
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Wishing for a ray of light - Story

Postby SchnaDin » Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:48 am

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Once upon a time a great king ruled over a sacred land called Awen. The king and his family weren’t normal like ordinary people but they all had angel-like wings on their backs. Just the king itself and his male descendants had more than two wings.
The citizens lived all in peace and harmony hundreds of years under the command of their king and so they never doubt any of his rules and decisions.
The castle and village is surrounded by rocky wings to protect them from any harm outside of their world. If they ever break the time of the dark king Nero will approach and everything will fall in darkness and despair.
But as long as the king and his royal guard fights for their citizens, life will be as peaceful as ever!
Fin



Leovans eyes widened as he heard those words from a class room right next to him. “Awen… he said…“surprised he took a peek through the window into the room without being noticed but I seemed like the teacher already changed the topic. Slowly he let himself back down the wall and turned his back against it. „Awen…“again he let those words echo in his ears. „You’re still remember too, do you Munin? “Munin was Leovans beloved bird-like shadow, which follows him wherever he goes and never leaving his side no matter what!
„One day we will go back home… i promise! “ Leovan looked at Munin and forced a decent smile on his face but deep inside he knew, that i may be nearly impossible to go back.
He took a deep breath „Well… let’s go back to the doll house! Maybe the others got any clues new clues for us, right? “Munin screamed in an eagle like tone and flapped excited with his wings.
A few hours later they finally arrived at the doll house. It literally is just a doll house on the outside but on the inside huge rooms give space to many of dolls of every sort! All dolls, that has its own will is allowed to get a room in there. But they are not normal rooms if you thought that! If the owner of the room wants to travel somewhere else they can simply go. Other dimension, places on earth or a land, which you couldn’t reach just by flying, running, swimming. It offers many opportunities for those in search of something special. And if you don’t want to search alone, there are hundreds of other dolls willing to helping you!
Everytime Leovan enters the house a weird feeling overcomes him… Not because of those many dolls but something completely different he can’t explain… “Let’s see if Arthuro already came back from his trip through the deserts of thousand sands.” Munin flew to the front door and got in through some kind of cat flap. Those are especially made for shadows, that haven’t the ability to walk through objects. Also Leovan got through the door, now standing in the middle of a big foyer, passed by a lot of dolls. He walked to the nice looking girl sitting behind a counter, fixing her glasses. “May I help you?” she asked with a bright smile on her face. “I just wanted to know if Arthuro is already back from his trip. He is a bit larger than me, has black hair tied together in a ponytail, skin is brown and he likes to wear yellow clothing… just if you need some more details. ” “Wait a second! I will search for his arrival data on the computer.” Leovan looked nearly not noticeable around him “They doing it again…” he whispered to himself and sighed. “What’s the matter with those guys?” “Here we have him! He and his lion-like shadow ‘Kivuli’ arrived yesterday noon with a lots of sand in his shoes… He must be here somewhere but unfortunately I can’t say you where…” “It’s ok! Thank you for you information! I might know where he is right now.” Leovan bows gratefully and aimed for the Lobby, where dolls can talk with each other, play videogames together or many other things they want to do. There, Arthuro was sitting on a couch with other male dolls, pressing buttons of a controller until they may start to smoke any second. “if he loves one thing beneath his Kivuli I would say gaming!” Munin looked irritated and didn’t understand what makes playing unreal things like that enjoyable. With a crow-like sound he flew to Arthuros shoulder and picked his ear. “What the…?!Don’t do that!” Arthuro tried to remove the annoying bird from his shoulder but then the tv already told him, that he as lost the game. “Look what you have done! Tsk…!”He turned around to his opponent and thanked him for taking a match with him. “Leo what is it? Your friend here is always so direct… could you say him not to annoy dolls like that If there are in a match of Life and Death…” “Come on Arthuro! You know better than me that you never won a game against this guy!” Leovan laughed and crossed his arms right before his stomach. “Well… you got me but don’t tell anyone, ok? So… what is it? Why did you search for me?” “I thought looking for you after your trip would be appreciated! And I wanted to ask you if you already found something out, that could lead me to my hometown…” His expression got worried and his arms tightened. Arthuro stood up from the couch and stretched himself. In the same moment Kivuli also stood up from his place, where he was laying, yawned and stretched his paws. “Let’s go to another place… some guys stare too much for my taste…” He grabbed Leovan on his arm and pulled him. Kivuli and Munin, riding on his shoulder, followed them slowly behind.
“Where are we going Arthuro? Don’t pull my hoodie so much! It will tear if you don’t stop!” “Sorry Leo but those guys pissing me off! Always starring so penetrant on my best friend without reason… if it would be just that but they also ignoring and bully you… and you “ Arthuro stopped and turned around to him “… you always just let it happen to you… is this the burden of being an angel?...”
Leovan stayed quiet and looked to the ground downhearted. “I don’t know either… I think it hasn’t to do anything with the fact of being an angel… it’s just…. It’s just me I think…” Munin came flying and sat on his shoulder. Softly he pressed his head against Leovans cheek. “I’m fine! Thank you Munin.” His bandaged fingers touched and stroked Munins chin lovingly.
“Well… to the topic from before! Indeed I have found something out but I’m not sure if it’s safe for you at all… you want to go to a land, that never belonged here in this world… be careful whatever your decision is!” Leovan looked at Arthuro and couldn’t believe what he heard! “You really found a way how I can go back home? To Awen?!” His eyes sparkled as he heard Arthuros Words. “Take this!” “What is it?” “It’s a shard of a special gemstone! They rare and will lead you to your homeland! I’m sure it does!” “But how do you know? I mean… there are so many stones out there… why this one?” “Earlier on my travels, someone told me about this stone and his characteristics to show angels the way back home where they belong, he said.” “Who was he and how did he know…” “It doesn’t matter now Leo! You searched for it for so long and now, when you have the key in your hands, you’re going to doubt your only hope?” “No! I mean… but how do we know…?” Arthuro laid one hand behind his head and looked at Leovan quite annoyed. “if you don’t want it, give it back!” Leovan hold onto the stone tight and protected it behind his back. “That’s the way I know my best friend! The only thing you have to do know is walking through the rate dimension gate! The stone will open it for you.But be careful! It will open it just once every century… ” “really? Does this mean, once I’m there I have to decide if I want come back or stay… for so long? It feels like almost forever!” “Don’t worry Leo! Whatever happens in your world I will always be waiting for you in this one! As your best friend!” A big smile could be seen on Arthuros face and Kivuli cuddles around Leovans feet. “Arthuro I…” “You don’t have to say anything! Just go already! I will wait until you come back! Then you can tell me everything about your home!”

Going back home… The sacred land of angels, living under the rules of a six winged king in peace and harmony – Arwen

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Extra 2 - A time of prison and torture

Postby SchnaDin » Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:51 am

If you're senstive in some ways for blood or slightly descibed torture or something in that way please feel free to skip ^^
Here will be the story of why he wears bandages and why Munin has white shiny claws (what the owner desires/treasures the most)

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Welcome to the Dollhouse Registry Center!

Postby SchnaDin » Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:55 am

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"So...Your name was Leovan right?"

Basic information about Leovan and Munin! And while they wair for a room to get Leo talks with some other dolls about his interests, likings, hatings and favourites c:

Name
Origin
Shadow
Name meaning
Necklace
Friends
Music Leo War - Poets of the fall
Munin Little drops of heaven - pretty maids
Likes to do Gemstones, hoodies, listen to music, drawing, spending time with Arthuro
fears/ hates to do Being left aone, losing someone, sometimes closeness, changes
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Postby SchnaDin » Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:56 am

And at least the copyright section!

Please remind that it could be that some contents contain material inappropriat for children ^-^
just click if you areaware of that! (i didn't see anything bad but maybe some are sensitiv to specific stuff)


Leading to form gif:
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Universe drawn by me
Wings drawn by me
Leovans face part section drawn by me

Sketch like sad Leo drawing drawn by Koneko-chan on FB
(If someone would be interested in her art and has FB = https://www.facebook.com/Koneko-chan-730910460290647/?pnref=story)

Picture rainbow opal: Internet... can't find the right link anymore

Black lion pic: copyright goes to the creators of Dmmd! I just used it as reference and changed the mane a bit! I didn't draw it
All gifs in the main story from here: http://images.google.de/imgres?imgurl=http%3A%2F%2Fi1374.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fag410%2FDynamitegoesboom%2FSmoke%2Fgif_499x172_2f3db8_zps40724519.gif%253Ft%253D1410146057&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.roleplaygateway.com%2Froleplay%2Fvampire-knight-smoke-and-mirrors%2Fcharacters%2Fsacrilegious%3Fstart%3D220&h=172&w=499&tbnid=xLKSMjOyppzCrM%3A&docid=XEmRmblRddsAWM&ei=Tl6NVtf6NsG_OtKjrfgL&tbm=isch&iact=rc&uact=3&dur=316&page=1&start=0&ndsp=28&ved=0ahUKEwjX2Z3i6ZXKAhXBnw4KHdJRC78QrQMIZTAV
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