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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ~Draconic_Vixen~ » Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:15 pm

I actually love the thought of this character myself and don't see anything wrong with her myself. n_n

When I have time I'll try to draw her. <3
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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:18 pm

Heh, thanks! This is what happens when you work on a character for two months XD Although I am trying to add on more little details to her, for instance, I forgot to mention that she is highly allergic to eggs. I find that I like it when I add on info that might as well be considered useless.

Anyways, care to put one up yourself? Also, I think I'll put this place in my siggy. I have a little room left XD So much Teen Titans stuff.
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Hello! I'm ShadowBird12, but
I'm typically called Shadow
or Bird. I'm just a homesch-
ooled bi girl with way too
much free time on her hands
and anxiety issues. I'm an
avid roleplayer and writer,
as well as anime and cartoon
fan, and when I get into so-
mething I fully obsess over
it. Please keep in mind that
I tend to take things at face
value, and can have trouble
understanding sarcasm unless
it's blatantly obvious; but I
don't bite, so feel free to
talk to me!

●INTJ●Hufflepuff●Introvert●
●Aspie●She/Her●Leo●

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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ~Draconic_Vixen~ » Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:56 pm

Yeah I'll post my main OCs forms soon.

Teen titans is pretty cool. n_n
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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Sat Jun 13, 2015 12:27 am

I'm flat-out obsessed with Teen Titans, in case my signature didn't give it away by now.
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Hello! I'm ShadowBird12, but
I'm typically called Shadow
or Bird. I'm just a homesch-
ooled bi girl with way too
much free time on her hands
and anxiety issues. I'm an
avid roleplayer and writer,
as well as anime and cartoon
fan, and when I get into so-
mething I fully obsess over
it. Please keep in mind that
I tend to take things at face
value, and can have trouble
understanding sarcasm unless
it's blatantly obvious; but I
don't bite, so feel free to
talk to me!

●INTJ●Hufflepuff●Introvert●
●Aspie●She/Her●Leo●

©
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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ~Draconic_Vixen~ » Sat Jun 13, 2015 10:55 am

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Characters Full Name: Akari Rose Taylor
Characters Nicknames: Aki and Little Red Riding Hood
Characters Gender: Female
Characters Age: 15
Characters Species: 1/2 Fox and 1/2 Dragon Anthro/Furry
Fandom Character is from if its a fandom OC: Furry Fandom. She is my fursona.

Characters Appearance detailed description (2-3 paragraphs please!): She stands about 5 feet and 3 inches tall, weighing 110 pounds. She isnt muscular, but skinny. Her long hair is lime green and wavy/curly. Her left eye is blue-green and her right eye is green. Her eye stripes, tiger stripes down her back and her tail tip are lime green, while her ear tips, wing webbing, stomach, chest, and tail ring are turquoise. Her fur is black otherwise and her nose is dark gray. She has a large wingspan which allows her to fly. When she is angered she grows dragon horns, facial spikes, sharper teeth, and back spikes. Her turquoise and lime green markings glow in the dark.

Characters Personality, Hobbies, Fears, Dislikes, Morals, ect.(at least two paragraphs please): Akari is energetic, naturally flirty, and optimistic, being a very bubbly person who loves to talk and make friends. Though she can be a little shy at first she quickly comes out of her shell. She is very loyal, kind, and caring towards her friends and family. She has a fiery temper and can be irritable at times, especially towards people she doesn't like. When others do wrong to her she usually becomes very angry and seeks revenge. Though she usually forgives pretty quickly it's not always easy for her. She is impulsive and almost never thinks ahead. She likes to play video games, her favorites being Pokemon Y, Skyrim, Dragon Age, Smash bros., and Legends of Zelda. She also likes to read, write, draw, cook, bake, shop, watch tv, play magic the gathering, and surf the Internet. She likes to be with her friends but heavily values her alone time. She values justice and only hurts others who hurt her or those she loves. She likes to make jokes and make others laugh. She likes supernatural. She fears large crowds, wasps, and certain heights.

Characters History. (At least two paragraphs please): She grew up like a normal child. Went to school and had issues with bullying until she started high school and gained the courage to stand up for herself. She has a mother, father, a brother, and sister. She has always lived in the country.

Other information: She has fire powers and can see in the dark as well as fly.
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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Sat Jun 13, 2015 12:25 pm

I like it, I really do. I honestly like the idea of mixing something like a fox with a dragon, and the color scheming fits well and kind of represents her personality on all reflections. I must say the same, so far I can't think of anything to really improve her much, she's already got everything she needs.
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Hello! I'm ShadowBird12, but
I'm typically called Shadow
or Bird. I'm just a homesch-
ooled bi girl with way too
much free time on her hands
and anxiety issues. I'm an
avid roleplayer and writer,
as well as anime and cartoon
fan, and when I get into so-
mething I fully obsess over
it. Please keep in mind that
I tend to take things at face
value, and can have trouble
understanding sarcasm unless
it's blatantly obvious; but I
don't bite, so feel free to
talk to me!

●INTJ●Hufflepuff●Introvert●
●Aspie●She/Her●Leo●

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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ~Draconic_Vixen~ » Sat Jun 13, 2015 2:47 pm

Aww thank you. n_n
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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ~Draconic_Vixen~ » Sun Jun 14, 2015 9:56 am

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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Sun Jun 14, 2015 9:59 am

Hmm....
There has to be another way to advertise...
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Hello! I'm ShadowBird12, but
I'm typically called Shadow
or Bird. I'm just a homesch-
ooled bi girl with way too
much free time on her hands
and anxiety issues. I'm an
avid roleplayer and writer,
as well as anime and cartoon
fan, and when I get into so-
mething I fully obsess over
it. Please keep in mind that
I tend to take things at face
value, and can have trouble
understanding sarcasm unless
it's blatantly obvious; but I
don't bite, so feel free to
talk to me!

●INTJ●Hufflepuff●Introvert●
●Aspie●She/Her●Leo●

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Re: Character Critique Center!

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Mon Jun 15, 2015 3:35 pm

Bump, bump, bump!
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Hello! I'm ShadowBird12, but
I'm typically called Shadow
or Bird. I'm just a homesch-
ooled bi girl with way too
much free time on her hands
and anxiety issues. I'm an
avid roleplayer and writer,
as well as anime and cartoon
fan, and when I get into so-
mething I fully obsess over
it. Please keep in mind that
I tend to take things at face
value, and can have trouble
understanding sarcasm unless
it's blatantly obvious; but I
don't bite, so feel free to
talk to me!

●INTJ●Hufflepuff●Introvert●
●Aspie●She/Her●Leo●

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