~Soldier In The Mist ◘ Collaboration/Community Story

[Piefan]

Done! Sorry it sucks so bad. ;-;

[watermelon.]

Hey, that wa interesting!
I liked it
I need really thought about her meeting a new friend so soon....
Hm . But I do like it

Now I'm going to wait until I can reserve a chapter cause there's something I REAlly wanna write about..

[Piefan]

Wait a minute - trucks in this kingdom? Alongside the cavalry and medieval castle? o.o That's... certainly strange. Apparently trucks were created in around 1800, while the Middle Ages and Renaissance (the description mentioned a 'medieval' world so I'm assuming this takes place in something resembling Europe) were like a century before that. I mean no offense, of course, but it's kinda strange.

(in reference to adorkable's chapter. idk, it might not have been finished and just a mock post.)

[Woogwoo Wren]

Yeah, um, I also saw that you put a gunshot in your chapter Piefan.... Lol, it was a good chapter, I just thought it was strange for a gun in the Medieval times. Hehe...

[Piefan]

Whoops, I'll edit it. I just needed a placeholder for a really loud sound lol.

/probably sounds like a huge hypocrite right now

[i quit.]

I feel really bad
literally I thought my chapter was good ;-;
off to cry now

[Piefan]

No, no, it was great! Just the one line. ^^

[i quit.]

she was from somewhere else, that's why she had a truck

[watermelon.]

I did like your chapter, but I wold have to agree that the truck doesn't fit the setting of the story.
Nobody is trying to say you did bad, we're just giving advice to make it better.

I'm also curious as to why exactly she was appointed to the war? Because like I said, he is a woman, and isn't old enough. I personally think it might need more explniation.

[watermelon.]

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I shall reserve this
and I will type my story right here
right in this spot.
and I won't change this form,
because I know that it's bad
to change it. Got it
yep got it

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