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Do you like this draft better than the first one so far?

I didn't think it could get better but then it DID
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77%
hmm... dunno yet
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8%
why. why did you change it. WHY -sobs-
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4%
... I... didn't... there's another one...?
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Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 9:35 pm

      - fangirls around -
      swindle forever
      you really should search a publisher for this
      I mean
      this
      is
      just
      awesome
      go
      publish it
      I will buy it
      all of it
      everything
      You get me with your characters every.single.time.
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sat May 09, 2015 9:42 pm

    Oh I definitely plan on publishing this
    it's actually going to be a trilogy -cough-
    That's why it must be perfect
    My biggest fear is publishing something and then deciding I hate it and not being able to change anything -twitch-

    but thank you! <3333
    Character development is definitely something I'll focus on more this time around...
    Now that I actually have them figured out...
    and I'm not just wingin' it like last time...
    YAY PLANNED OUT CHARACTERS
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Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 9:48 pm

      oh yeah a trilogy sounds awesome
      (I really want a signed one if you publish it xD)
      oh this is already just too close to perfection
      I am not sure what I would change
      this is so emotional
      but my advise is - set yourself a point where you will stop changing something, because otherwise you will never stop....and the world really needs this story
      and if here on the board is someone talented enough to publish a book (successfully) it is you
      what you already wrote and build up is just amazing

      haha xD character development my old friend xD
      - looks over to my characters -
      jup - still fail at that point xD
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sat May 09, 2015 9:55 pm

    Yessss a trilogy for them
    and then a trilogy for their son, Erren
    and then a trilogy for his kids
    All with different plots
    But this is the pirate trilogy >:D
    Erren and Rose will be more of an... assassin-y spy type thing idk yet
    but Constance will be a witch and it will be fanTASTIC
    I have so many ideas for that one ahh
    I'll stop talking now

    jk one more thing
    I'd sign the crap out of your copies
    actually
    I have a plan to just waltz into bookstores and randomly sign some of my books like
    "YOU FOUND THE GOLDEN TICKET"
    and
    "you must be as bored as I am"
    and
    "THIS BOOK IS ON FIYA- wait wrong story"
    I will, don't even test me
    I'd be that author
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Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 10:07 pm

      gosh
      I already see my bookshelf exploding because all of the books that will stand there once
      and they will
      don't you dare not to publish them
      wow you have so many ideas
      this is really amazing
      I somehow feel so....tiny with my little Sun&Moon that will never be a book xD


      oh yes please do this
      this is such a funny idea
      and I guess the lucky once buying such a book
      will be the happiest people ever
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sat May 09, 2015 10:15 pm

    Pfff you could publish something, I'm sure c:
    it just takes time
    I'm just... an extremely fast learner
    like only this last year or two I really started trying to progress my writing and drawing
    I mean just compare this with the fist chapter on the first draft -shudders-
    or my first deviantart with oekaki ohmygodno
    I tend to be the kind of person thats like
    STUDY ALL THE THINGS
    -reads all the books way above my level and studies tutorials for days-
    ... I usually get really upset if I don't get something right the first time
    So I make sure I get it right :DD
    and there you have my progression process

    ...
    ok I'm getting yelled at I have to go to bed now
    why are people awake at 3 am no idea
    I say as I sit here awake at 3 am

    ok bye for today xD
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Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 10:23 pm

      You are a really impressing person...
      just sayin'

      haha xD It was 2am for me yesterday too (or for you still today...or already tomorrow...aaah don't know)
      good night
      you devil-writer xD
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sun May 10, 2015 8:46 am

    -warden voice-
    ExcUSE mE
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Sun May 10, 2015 9:02 am

Yay! Definitely agree this should be published! hi again
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sun May 10, 2015 10:09 am

    Lol hi there!
    Yay more people on board!
    get it more pirate puns

    I was thinking of adding a fan list
    Idk just thought it would be fun
    Like a list on one of the posts of all the peeps that like this story
    It would be interesting to keep track I think but idk xD
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