emotions. { a treasury of writings }

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Re: emotions. { a treasury of writings }

Postby aurora. » Thu May 07, 2015 9:03 am

wicked mabel. wrote:
    this is pretty cool so far ^^
    just a little grammar tip-
    "it's" is the conjunction of "it is".
    "its" the possessive of an object. just pointing that out, you made that mistake twice in "loneliness" ^^


thank you for pointing that out c: all my life i've seemed to forget that particular conjunction.
      just a female student with an addiction to iced coffee,
      and little to no time on her hands.
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Re: emotions. { a treasury of writings }

Postby star star. » Thu May 07, 2015 9:06 am

    haha, no problem ^^ i forget about that conjunction as well.
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