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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Fri Jul 03, 2015 6:13 pm

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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Fri Jul 03, 2015 7:05 pm

Finally, Daisy left, she is so annoying. She says that she checks every room and make them recite from Rule 1 to Rule 1,000,000,000,000... Oops, I forgot how many 0s were there, maybe 500? or was it 1 million zeroes. Anyways, who cares :roll:,
I saw this new girl stroll in to the school.
Daisy: Hi, Name and interests?
???: Hi, my name is Ali, LilySwirl
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Daisy(Interrupts): Uh, Ali what? That's like the weirdest last name I have ever heard!
Ali: Who cares, well...I love shopping, oh yeah, how could I forget clothes, they're like awesome!
Daisy: :/ , at least you are enough to be a popular. Want to join my club? Oh yeah, let me tell you the rules...There are 1,000,000,000,000,000,000 of them.
Oh yeah, how could I forget about how many zeroes it had, let me write it down just in case, 1,000,000,000,000,000,000... So anyways...
Ali: Maybe, uh... I better change my best outfit.(Strolls away)
Daisy: Grr...
I'd better catch up with her...
Oh I see another 1, wait... How many are there? Let's see...
Daisy: Hi... You look cool...
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Zavier: ...
Daisy: And kinda cute...
Zavier: Sigh... That's what everybody says :roll:
Daisy: Can you respect a populars choice! :x I'm the Queen Bee and you seriously don't have a lack of respect! I say Outcast! And don't try argue with the Queen Bee, it says clearly that on Rule 584, No arguing with the Queen Bee! Also on Rule 3718, No talking back, respect the Queen Bee's choice!
Let me repeat them all...
Rule 1: Blah blah blah
...
Rule 9,000: ...
...
Rule 1,000,000,000,000,000,000: Please remember all these rules or you will regret!
Zavier: Um... Sorry, I didn't get all of that, Please repeat from Rule 10
Daisy: I had enough, go away outcast!
LOL :lol: , here comes the hyper one! Seems to have a disabilty with ADHD thingy...
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???: My name is Eleanor and I like archery and swordfig-
Daisy: You always need to let Queen Bees talk first, it's says it clearly in Rule 59. You are clearly a outcast.
Eleanor: Whatever wierd Queen Bee.
Daisy: What's up with the running, and no calling Queen Bee wierd. It says clearly in Rule 81!
Eleanor: I have ADHD! OMG! Anyways, bye!
Daisy: ...
Here comes another one, I think with another disabilty.
Daisy: Name and Intrests?
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???: My name is Flash Cloud, I lick reading.
Daisy: What?! Probably you have dyslexic, but good job trying, I will let this polite dog in jocks then!
Flash Cloud: Yay!? By!
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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby emitree » Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:35 am

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Name: Bree Leafbrooke (just call me Bree)
Gender: Female
Group: Outcasts
Personality: Fun loving at times and nervous with guys she meets.
Likes: friends and people in other groups that aren't that rude to her
Dislikes: the queen bee and anyone in the populars
Crush:*Riptide
Others: has light powers, when she is at her limit she shoots light from her paws or mouth at the people she dislikes and blinds them for the rest of the day.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Tue Jul 07, 2015 4:12 pm

I accept but For the light powers I'm very sorry that you can't have it, you could have this device but you can't really have light powers. Sorry! :(


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby emitree » Wed Jul 08, 2015 2:24 pm

laikn1 wrote:I accept but For the light powers I'm very sorry that you can't have it, you could have this device but you can't really have light powers. Sorry! :(

sure :)

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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Sat Jul 11, 2015 11:24 pm

Dear Neutron, this is starting to get a bit weird, 4 in 1 day and here comes another 2 . Ugh...
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Here's the first one, looks kinda cute, I kind of like her but I'm never gonna flirt with her.
???: Hi dude!
Daisy: I'm not a dude! And you aren't supposed to talk before a Queen Bee it says in the rule book!
???: Well my name is Silver and I love music and football.
Daisy: What a weird girl...
Silver: I'm not weird!
Daisy: Oh, did you forget Rule 1023: No shouting at the Queen Bee, go away pesky outcats
Silver: (shrugs and strolls away).
Here's the other 1,
???: Ugh...
Daisy: Again, you aren't supposed to talk before me!
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???: My...name is...Bree...And I like...Well my friends and polite people.
Daisy: Cmon, don't be shy little one...
Bree: I'M NOT SHY YOU DUMB QUEEN BEE!
Daisy: No shouting to a Queen Bee, Don't argue with me! You earned the name Outcast!
Bree: Whatever, :roll: I hate Queen Bees.
I gotta find a time to talk to the newcomers, Oh... I see Ali, I take this chance to talk to her.
Ali: Hi, ugh... Who are you?
Me: I'm Riptide Cometpaw and-
Solar: Hey Riptide, I just... Well... Kinda crushed on Daisy you see...
Me: What!? Why do you have to do it today, you know what day it is!
Solar: But...
Me: No buts!
Solar: Gang, get him!
Bunch of jocks runs out
Me: Ahh!!
Runs to safety with Ali, hides underneath bush.
Ali: What day is it today Riptide?
Me: It's my birthday, and why does every single birthday others always to do something kinda disobeying me.
Ali: Oh...
Well, Now I made my gang, I have 100% protection. Well not exactly but we have them outnumbered and they dont bother us anymore.
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Riptide917: Solar doesn't bother me, now I'm in my dorm. Too bad, I beat him twice in Karate Class in Grade 5, he's too scared to fight me! LOL :lol:
Zavier010: Guys, do you have the game The Sword of Infinity?
Riptide917: This is serious stuff Zavier!
Zavier010: Well, you know I just uncovered the base of Snowy's base, it's underneath the stairs.
Riptide917: Good job! Spy Zavier.
Zavier010: Thx!
Silver593: Report to dorm 953 now, it's a huge maniac
Riptide917: Got it, comin.
We arrived there, Solar and his gang was raiding the dorm just as I pulled Solar aside
Me: Solar...
Solar: Ugh...Sorry, Guys, retreat!
Me: LOL dealt with.
Ali: Thanks Riptide.
Me: No problemo.
I returned to my dorm, I had a few Birthday Pancakes to celebrate my birthday. It was boring, cause it was Saturday, I went to sleep. I was woken up by this weird feeling.
Me: What's happening...
I slowly started to transform, I had transformed into a fire dragon!
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[/img] I couldn't control myself and I rushed into the washroom. Luckily, it was night time. I let out a few breaths of flames, kinda burning up the toilets. I was transforming back, phew! I suddenly let out a blast of flames, it started a fire. I was back into my normal form, the teachers rushed in and the firefighters moved in. Blasting water, I was pulled out of the scene and I didn't know what happened.


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby emitree » Sun Oct 11, 2015 11:45 am

can you update this? O.O
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to Harry Potter, Godric Grffindor, Rowena Ravenclaw, Helga Hufflepuff and J.K Rowling.
LONG LIVE HARRY POTTER, THE BOY WHO LIVED.


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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Sun Oct 11, 2015 1:50 pm

Yeah...
I was thinking of making a new diary, maybe later


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby werewolfisms » Mon Apr 18, 2016 10:51 pm

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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Apr 19, 2016 11:43 am

@Whitestorm9
He's probably not going to continue this, and instead made a new diary rather recently. You can check it out (the LOVE, I think?).
He's also sick right now don't tell him I said that
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