Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

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Chapter four.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:06 pm

Chaper four.

"Stumpfoot! My kits are coming!" Trushcall cried. Stumpfoot stuck his head out of the medicine cat den.
"I've never heard of a tom having kits before," he said, while he gathered he herbs he needed.
"No, not me, Fangheart!" the white tom said.
"All right, all right, don't cough up a fur ball," Stumpfoot said, limping to the nursery. Maybe there'll be an apprentice for me in this litter. he thought. Entering the nursery, he saw Fangheart lying in her nest, gasping. Stumpfoot sat beside her, and soon three mewling kits lay at her side. Thrushcall hovered near them.
"Well? What are we going to call them?" he asked his mate. She looked down at the kits.
"Mousekit," she said, indicating he brown Tom, "Snakekit," the white and ginger tom, "and Icekit," the white she cat.
"They're beautiful," Thrushcall whispered.

"We have decided," Tallstar said, looking at the gathered Starclan cats. He lay be the pool, Onestar beside him. A cat's face appared in the water. "This cat will be the Windclan cat in the prophesy." The other cats nodded.
"But, all the cats are...different," Feathertail said, "except for the Thunderclan cats."
"They will want to show their loyalty, so they will work harder at the task at paw," Firestar explained. Then the stary cats dispersed.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:46 pm

Added more cats, feel free to suggest names and cats.
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Chapter five, Windclan.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Mon Mar 30, 2015 6:57 pm

Chapter five.

Icekit stumbled after her older sibling. They were both larger then her, and she was struggling to keep up. She also didn't have much stamina.
"Guys, wait up!" she called, stumbling over her feet. Why am I so clumsy? I'm a Windclan cat, I should be fast, and agile, not slow and clumsy! she thought. Mousekit, the largest in the litter, turned.
"Hurry up! Soon Fangheart will wake up and see we're gone!" he snapped, bounding ahead.
"It's not my fault I'm so little!" Icekit snapped back. Snakekit, unnoticed by her was hiding in the long grass. He suddenly jumped out at her.
"Thunderclan! Attack!" he shouted.
"EKK!" Icekit squealed. Snakekit and Mousekit burst out laughing.
"Hurry up, mouse heart!" the brown tom said, through his laughter.
"Huh, that's rich coming from a kit called 'Mousekit'!" Icekit said, still shaking from her fright. Mousekit glared at her, and bounded away.
The three kits were looking for a fox that had settled in Windclan territory. They wanted to chase it off, like many kits had in the past. So they had sneaked out.
Soon, they came to the place where the fox was. Icekit suddenly wished she hadn't come, and was about to suggest they leave, when they saw the fox. It was coming back to it's den, carrying a rabbit.
"It's stealing out prey, that peace of fox dung!" Snakekit cried, about to run after it.
"What are you kits doing!" Icekit turned guiltily and saw Windheart, with Bumbletail, Thrushcall and Voletail.
"We were going to find the fox!" Mousekit cried, standing up to them. "It's in its den, with our prey!"
"Fangheart as been worried sick because of you! Bumbletail, take them back to camp, and bring reinforcements, we're going to send this fox away from the lake!" Windhear commanded. Bumbletail nodded, and was about to grab Icekit by her scruff, when a blur of red hit Mousekit full on. He let out a cry, and was silent. Thrushcall rushed to the fox, and leapt onto its back.
"NO! Mousekit!" he cried, digging his claws deep into the fox's back. The fox yelped, and through him off. He fell to the ground with a thud. Voletail and Windheart attacked the fox on either side, and where soon joined by Bumbletail. The fox was soon driven off, and ran towards Thunderclan territory. The two kits crept close to Mousekit, but it was too late, he was dead. Thrushcall stood shakily, and walked to his kit.
"We need to take him back to Stumpfoot," he whispered. Voletail brushed her tail along his flank.
"Stumpfoot can't help him now, he hunts with Starclan," she said quietly. Thrushcall let out a loud wail. Then, he picked up his kit and wordlessly walked back to camp. Icekit felt herself being picked up by the scruff of her neck, but didn't care, her brother was dead.
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Chapter six, Thunderclan.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Tue Mar 31, 2015 3:58 pm

Chapter six.

"Ivystar." Amberkit looked up from her game at the call. Two Windclan cats were entering to camp, one older and the other young, and looking around nervously. Darkmoon, Rockclaw, Mudwhiskers and Ranpaw accompanied them. Ivystar walked out of her den.
"What is it, Sandleap?" she asked. Sandleap bowed his head.
"There may be a fox in your terrotory," he said. Amberkit walked up to the apprentice.
"Hi, I'm Amberkit, who are you?" she asked. Emberkit and Shadekit walked up to them and introduced themselves. Amberkit was aware of Sandleap telling Ivystar of what had happened, but paid no attention.
"I'm Acornpaw," the cat answered. "Sandleap's my mentor, and Thornstar thought is was a good idea for me to vist Thunderclan." he explained.
"So you can spy on us!" Shadekit said, hissing.
"Be nice," Amberkit said, flicking his ear with her tail. They were interupted by Sandleap called to Acornpaw. The two Windclan cats left the camp.
"We are sorry for you loss, and will watch out for the fox," Ivystar said, as Darkmoon and the others escorted them out. "Rockclaw, stay here. Tigerfang and I will lead a patrol to remove this fox. Otterfoot, Rainpaw and Stormpaw can come too. Rainpaw and Strormpaw grinned.
"Ivystar, stay here, we need you," Tigerfang, her mate, said. Ivystar shook her head,
"I have nine lives, I am in less danger then the rest of you," she said. Then she raised her tail, and the patrol headed out.
"Be careful, Rockclaw!" Snowleaf called after he mate.
"Don't worry, I'll be back soon," Rockclaw replied.
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Chapter seven, Thunderclan.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Tue Mar 31, 2015 7:11 pm

Chapter seven.

When the patrol had gone, Shadekit looked at Amberkit, Birchkit and Emberkit.
"Let's sneak out after them, I wanna see a fox!" he said. Birchkit frowned.
"I dunno, we could get hurt. I listened to what Sandleap told Ivystar, and the fox killed a kit!" she said. Shadekit gasped.
"Really? You mean it go into the camp?" he asked, astonished. Birchkit shook her head.
"No, the kits had sneaked out, and the foxed attacked them,' she explained.
"Maybe we should stay in the camp," Emberkit said.
"Yes you should!" The kits turned and saw Blackfire and Snowleaf behind them.
"You shouldn't go out of the camp-"
"Yeah, I know, until I'm an apprentice," Shadekit said. His head dropped, and he walked back to the nursery. The other kits followed.

Shadekit was woken by a loud wailing. He looked out of the nursery, and saw the patrol return, carrying a limp body. He couldn't see who it was, but Snowleaf recognized the sent.
"NO!" she cried, running to the dead cat. "You said you'd come back!" She buried her face in Rockclaw's still body. Amberkit and Emberkit sat beside her. Ivystar leapt onto the high-rock. She didn't have to summon the clan.
"A great tragedy has come upon us, Rockclaw was killed by the fox. We chased it out of the lake territories, but not with out a cost. Stormpaw, his apprentice and his sister, Rainpaw, fought well, and are ready to become full warriors of Thunderclan," she announced. The two cats looked up from Rockclaw's body.
"I can not ask Stormpaw's mentor if he did well, but I am sure he has. Stormpaw, do you promise to up-hold the warrior code, and defend the clan with your life?" The young tom nodded.
"I do," he said clearly, his voice broke with grief.
"Then by the power of Starclan, I name you, Stormfall. Starclan honors your courage and bravery," Ivystar said, as Stormfall licked her shoulder. "Otterfoot, has Rainpaw learned the warrior code and all you have to teach her?" Otterfoot nodded.
"She has."
"Rainpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and defend your clan with your life?"
"I do," the she cat said.
"Then by the power of Starlan, I name you Rainfur. Starclan honors your iniquity and bravery." Rainfur licked her shoulder, and the clan cheered.
"Rainfur, Stormfall, Rainfur, Stormfall!"
"Tonight we will morn Rockclaw, then get ready for the gathering tomorrow night." Ivystar said, and jumped down from the high-rock. She walked over to the new warriors.
"Well done my kits," she said, smoothing a tuft of fur on Stormfall's head.
Amberkit watched with a heavy heart, turning back to her dead father. She pressed close to Snowleaf, trying to give and receive comfort. She licked her father one last time.
"Good bye, Rockclaw," she whispered.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Apr 01, 2015 11:15 am

Sure. I'm glad you like it!
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Interlude

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Apr 01, 2015 11:46 am

Interlude

The fox ran from Thunderclan territory, its muzzle and claws still red from Rockclaw's blood, its flank covered in cuts and scratches. Passing close to the Twogetplace, it headed into a small wooded area.
'I'll come back! I will live there! That place will be my territory!" he hissed glaring back the way it had come.
"Big brave fox go scared away?" a voice mocked. The fox turned, and there, in the tree sat a small cat, barely a kit.
"Who are you?" the fox snapped.
"My name is Midnight. Why are you running?" the kitten asked.
"The cats back there, they attacked me. But they regretted it," the fox said with a smirk.
"So did you, it seems," Midnight said.
"Don't think that being in the tree will keep you safe, kitten!" the fox hissed.
"I am no kitten! I am the deputy of new Bloodclan!" The kit stood in the tree, his fur puffed out and hissing. "But, I think we have something in common, we both want revenge on those cats. They cased my mother and I out of our den on their territory. That killed my mother. Since then, I found a two-leg to take me in, and fought up the ranks of Bloodclan. I may be young, but that just means my enemies underestimate me,"
"I don't need your whole life story, Kitten! How can you help me?"
"Simple, gather up any foxes, and attack Thunderclan. My clan will help you. Once Thunderclan is destroyed, we will take over the rest of the clans. You can have Thunderclan's territory, and we will have the rest of the lake."
The fox nodded slowly.
"Very well, but it may take some moons to gather up enough foxes. I will meet you here in five moons. And, if you even decided to call the plan off, find a crow and tell him your message, tell him to go to Redd," the fox said, slipping into the shadows.
"Very well," Midnight called after him. "Thunderclan's doom nears!"
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Chapter eight, gathering.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:49 pm

Chapter eight.

"Hurry up, Streampaw!" Mistypaw called over the log bridge. "All the other clans are here!" Streampaw took a deep breath, and stepped onto the log. He nearly fell of as Flametail pushed him from behind.
"Hey!" he cried, gripping the branch with his claws.
"Hurry up, you're holding us up!" his sister's mentor snaped. Gripping the branch with his claws, Streampaw slowly walked across.
"Don't fall off, don't fall off, don't fall off," he muttered, and finally made it across. He walked into the clearing with Mistypaw.
"Woah! There are so many cats here!" Mistypaw cried. Streampaw just nodded. The two of them sat near a Thunderclan apprentice.
"Hey there, I'm Nettlepaw," she said, smiling.
"I'm Mistypaw, and that's Streampaw," Mistypaw said. They were interupted by Ivystar called for the meeting to begin. Deathstar of Shadowclan started.
"Shadowclan has been faring well, Willowfur has taken on an apprentice, and is training Tinypaw in the ways of a medicine cat." He paused as the clans cheered for Tinypaw. "Prey has been running well, and Hollyfur has moves into the nursary." Stormstar was next.
"As usual in green-leaf, two-legs are more common, but that doesn't bother us. We have two new apprentices, Mistypaw and Streampaw." Streampaw puffed out his cheat as the clans called his name. Nettlepaw grinned at him. "Prey is running well." Stormstar stepped back, and Thornstar took his place.
"Fangheart has had her kits, Icekit, and Snakekit. A fox settled in our territory, and killed the other in the litter. We chased it off into Thunderclan territory. That is all." Ivystar stepped up.
"Thornstar warned us of the fox, and we chased it off, but not without a cost. Rockclaw is dead." There were gasps and cries from the clans. "We have two new warriors, Stormfall and Rainfur." The clan called their names, and the two young warriors smiled at the clans, Stormfall a little sadly. "That is all."
The four leaders jumped down off the rock, and the clans spoke for a while.
"Did you know Rockclaw well?" Mistypaw asked Nettlepaw.
"Well, I knew him as well as you know any warrior in your clan, but Stormfall was his apprentice," she replied.
After the clans had spoken, they left the gathering. Streampaw yawned hugely as he walked along beside his sister. He stumbled over a twig and only just saved himself from falling into the lake.
"Careful," Flametail sneared. Streampaw sighed. Why did Flametail have to pick on him?
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