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Re: tagged: critique desired

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Jan 04, 2015 3:49 pm

This is a great story! Please, keep writing it! But please don't put as many swear words in, I know they're stared but it's obvius what the mean. I'm loving the story!
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