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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Thu Sep 18, 2014 8:49 am

I hate grammar i hate math
gonna dump them in the bath
They'll never survive my greatest wrath
never again will these fiendish subjects
destroy a child's life
never again will they cause such strife
no more will they plague me
Why do I need diagram or anagram?
Why do I need roman numerals?
who divides fractions for a living?
Or multiplies below zero numbers?
Yet they haunt me in my slumbers
I'd rather rant and rave
But I'm still a slave

I got really mad a few weeks ago and this is the result :lol:
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Fri Sep 19, 2014 7:20 pm

Thanks TheSongOfTheStars, well structured and I am sure many may relate!
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Fri Sep 19, 2014 7:20 pm

The sounds of the lake
Seem so fake
But when I'm with you
I know one thing is true
The love from you that shines like gold
Is a story waiting to be told
A story waiting to be sung
A guitar waiting to be strum
A bird waiting to sing
A mighty and powerful king
Somehting something something
I can't think of any more rhymes ;D
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Truly inspirational SubZero, especially the end ;) ! Seriously, really well thought :clap: :thumbup: :D !
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Fri Sep 19, 2014 7:48 pm

Hols are here
Throw your books away,
time for a holiday!
No more skating on teacher's thin ice,
now for some time that will be nice.
Holidays are here,
time to cheer,
let's pack our bags and get out of here!
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Happy holidays NSW (and other states in Australia that are on hols!)!
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby panfou » Fri Sep 19, 2014 7:48 pm

Yay! Holidays!
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Sat Sep 20, 2014 7:53 pm

Great time of year, isn't it?!?!
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Mon Oct 27, 2014 6:14 pm

Bump, don't be afraid to post comments or poems!
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:11 pm

When the stars shine
I believe the sky is mine.
For when I'm alone
I feel like I own the throne.
Staying strong like a rock
I do not feel shock.
I feel strong like steel
And fast like an eel.
Who am I?
The one that roams the night sky?
I grant wishes, I travel far
For I am a shooting star.
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby Horsey girl7777 » Sat Nov 01, 2014 8:30 am

When the world keeps spinning, i don't let go.
When people that don't deserve to be in my life are near, i go.
When times are hard, i push through.
When i need help, i go to you.
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Re: Poets paradise (post now)

Postby CheeseUnicorn » Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:43 am

Time

Minutes. Hours. Days. Years.
What's the point?
Every rose will wilt.
Every day will end.
Every fire will die out.
Time. Time alone.
The life and death.
Nothing but time.
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