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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby pinkdepths » Sat May 10, 2014 2:15 pm

For @luckythecat! None of my characters, only lucky's. Still in progress, by the way.


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The night’s luminous light blew through the opened window that lay to the right of the gray she-cat. A soft breeze drifted upon her face, her fur blowing slightly in the way of the cold air that filtered through the clear glass. Rain. The gray cat’s name was Rain. Born in the frenzy of the blue droplet’s falling, the noise of cold, heavy, spirals of water hitting the tin roof of the home in which she lived. Of course, she hadn’t gotten wet, due to the fact that she was born within the safety of her parent’s home. She was fed regularly by the sweet owner that she’d known all her life, which still wasn’t very long.

Her ears perked from the squeal of the heavy wooden door moving against the linoleum of the bedroom’s floor. Ginger fur flashed through the doorway, green eyes illuminating in the moon’s twinkling rays. Rose. Her mother. The orange fur, blazing like a fire that streaked through the forest. Eyes like the leaves that fell from the trees, that happened to have morning rays gleaming against the green figure, light green glows showing on the ground, casting green shadows upon the forest at night and during the day. The luminous glow of the night’s ivory light brought her attention to the illusive gleam of mischievous blue eyes. Grey fur crept from behind Rose. His pelt was gray as ash, the same place his name came from.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby areadbhar » Sat May 10, 2014 2:31 pm

Darkshadow and Greykit's Death

For those of you who don't know, Darkshadow is Seedpaw's father, Greykit's father, and Suntree's mate. But he died, along with Greykit. They were never in the story, but I mention them and sometimes do them in the Starclan RP.

Darkshadow was watching Greykit and Seedkit. He was playing with Greykit and Seedkit in the river. He made sure both of the kits stayed in the shallow area. "Hey what's that?" Seedkit said. She started paddling towards where the river was deep, and Greykit followed. Darkshadow didn't want to know what they were after. He just wanted to save the kits. Darkshadow quickly swam out and grabbed Greykit, but a strong, unusual current sucked them down. Darkshadow let go of Greykit, hoping he would bob back up. But he didn't. Seedkit was taken in the weaker part of the current. Darkshadow bumped Seedkit back up to the surface. He couldn't reach Greykit. Darkshadow bobbed back up, but the last thing he saw was Seedkit limping out. "Cedarpaw! Remedysong! It's an emer-" Darkshadow yowled weakly before he was washed to the surface, but it was too late. He saw black.

Now, I'm going to write Greykit and Seedkit's point of view just for fun and to make up for the short story.

Greykit splashed around in the river with Seedkit and Darkshadow. "Hey, what's that?" Seedkit said, and started swimming towards something. Greykit followed, and so did Darkshadow. Suddenly, Greykit was sucked down while Darkshadow was just grabbing him. Darkshadow let go. Greykit let out of mewl of protest, but water filled his mouth. Darkshadow bumped Seedkit to the surface. He felt dizzy. Darkshadow bobbed back up. Why me? Greykit thought. He was sucked down. A sharp rock hit his leg in a sensitive spot. He saw a red pool and red bubbles, but then he saw a starry, white cat.

Seedkit


(I'm going to skip some parts.) "Hey, what's that?" Seedkit said. She swam towards it. Darkshadow and Greykit followed. Darkshadow grabbed Greykit, but then everyone was sucked down. Darkshadow let go of Greykit, who didn't bob back up. Her father bumped Seedkit on her belly. "Ouch!" She tried to say, but water rushed in. She washed onto the land. "Cedarpaw! Remedysong! It's an emer-" Darkshadow yowled weakly, but was cut off. Seedkit saw her father wash up too. His flank rose and fell for the last time, making a rasping sound. Seedkit felt too sick to cry. Cedarpaw and Remedysong came. "What is it? You'll scare all the pray from- Darkshadow! Where's Greykit? Darkshadow? Seedkit?" Remedysong said. Suntree ran over. "What is so important to make such a ruckus that- Darkshadow!" Suntree burst into tears. "I'll go look for Greykit in the river. I'll leave you to help Seedkit, since your more experienced." Cedarpaw said. Red water? Oh no. Cedarpaw thought. Then she saw Greykit's body, motionless at the bottom with a sharp rock dug deep into his leg. Cedarpaw picked up the body. "Greykit's dead!" Cedarpaw said. Suntree cried even more. "Good news. Seedkit will probably survive. But she has fainted and won't be able to talk for some time." Remedysong said, then went to Greykit's body. Suntree hissed, still in tears, making it seem as if she had silver stripes on her face. Then Suntree carefully took the rock out of his leg and licked where the rock used to be. Suntree still griefs for her son and mate and lays down at where they was buried.
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The untold Story of Speckledpaw/Tawnylef

Postby Henry is Bae » Sun May 11, 2014 3:07 am

To be finished

Tawnylegs story

I was born to Snowspots and Nightfur and my siblings

When I was a apprentice I went to live with two-legs
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby <sandfeather> » Sun May 11, 2014 4:02 am

Pearlkits story and unknown death (other then ivy and cocoa and her of course!)

Prealkit grew up in spikeclan for 2 moons but one day she figured out there was more out there so one day she went to the forest to exslore it was wonderful! The leaves the smell the everything! Other then the clan cats she dint know about.. Then a warrior found her exspecting to find freash kill but found a little kit instead.He sented her spikeclan sent and took her as prisoner.Pearlkit was terrified thinking that spirtstar might hurt her but she soon warmed up to blackdawn smallflames and spirtstar and bluekits and ect mother. One day cocoa was just going out to murder a cat and found her dather she took her to spikeclan for a while but saw that she was waek and shy she killed her own dather and throw her body in the food pile her own mother. No one found out (that I know of) But pearlkit went to a happy plase with blackdawn and is now happy :D
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby ailurophile. » Tue May 13, 2014 9:34 am

(Okay, my turn!!)

Leafpelt and Arcticstorm's past.

About 23 moons ago in the Nightclan camp, there were two kits born. The kits were from Hawkblaze and Moonsoul, two greatest warriors of all. They named their cream and flame tabby she-cat Arctickit and the black cat with amber eyes Leafkit. They were close to each other, the clan said that they were meant to be siblings. But things changed when they were apprentices. Arctickit becames Arcticpaw and Leafkit becomes Leafpelt. And soon, the mentors took them to hunt. Leafpaw caught a tiny mouse but Arcticpaw got a squirrel and got praised by her mentor and the whole clan. Their clanmates thought Arcticpaw was better than Leafpaw and started to praise Arcticpaw, too.

And soon it comes to battle training, the clan discovered that Arcticpaw learnt faster then Leafpaw and she had untold skills which came from nowhere. Her clanmates thought that she was from the Dark Forest, but Hawkblaze denied. Hawkblaze told the clan, "my daughter will never go to Dark forest! If one of them is, I will be ashame on her and disappointed that she chose the dark side." And so, her clanmates thought her abilities were given fr Starclan. And Leafpaw got very jealous. She wanted to kill Arcticpaw when they became a warrior.

One night, Spookystar and Brokenstar visited Leafpaw and got in for the Dark Forest by training her and treating her nice. They told Leafpaw that she was a well apprentice that was suitable for the Dark Forest. Now she kept going there, testing new methods about how to kill her sister. Poor Hawkblaze and Moonsoul, Leafpaw drowned her father and exiled her mother. She believed that she should revenge on her sister, just to be fair.



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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby Tainted~Wings » Tue May 13, 2014 2:51 pm

Bonepaw's redemption
before bonepaw joined nightclan he was a rouge named murder. Figure out what made murder join and change his name to bonepaw. And learn the losses he took to become a med cat.
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Bonepaw's birth
A young she cat named Bird lived near the clans. She always felt forgiveness to the clans for sometimes she stole prey. She couldnt help it she had to feed herself too. She was hunting one day and ran into a handsome tom from the clan named Thundercloud. She and thundercloud began meeting in secret because of their affection did she not realize her best friend knew. Fire hated the choice his best friend was choosing. One day Bird told her secreted mate abkut their kits.
He was excited for their kits to be born. One stormy day when thundercloud was ment to visit she gave birth to 4 kits all were white. But one. Fire became jelous and got his friend groff to hold Bird still. Then he killed the white kits and named the little black kit that had white speckles murder. After he figured out how to wrench murders paw so he could tear out his claws. He checked for claws, none. Fire had been stunned. "Cursed! Cursed! Murder is cursed!" He wailed. Fire and Groff were terrified. So they took off and never returned
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby imp. » Wed May 14, 2014 11:52 am

Hollowhearts story
In a alley by the twolegplace was a deep dark alley. In the alley was a kitten named Fang. He met another kitten and they fell in love. The she-cat made him mad so when she was sleeping Fang killed her and was renamed Hollowheart. Hollowheart found nightclan and he joined. even though it was against the warrior code he fought at a gathering. Soon after he got a mate named Shadowwing, then he was later killed by Shadowstep. The end.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Thu May 15, 2014 10:18 am

ıllıllı ѕριяιтѕтαя'ѕ ¢υяѕє ıllıllı

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The dark pelted cat sat on the chipping, brown stump in the middle of the forest, the wind bristling her fur. Her shadow flickering slightly. Her green eyes darted in the direction of the opening to the clearing. There sat a large, grey cat, watching her through her glassy eyes. The dark cat bristly leaped off the stump and padded quietly over to the cat. "Spirit." She whispered, her speech slurred through her evil tongue. "Thornstar?" the grey cat asked, almost backing up. "I-i killed you." She hissed. "So you did." she smiled. "Now its time for my revenge."


Spiritstar stepped backwards. "W-what are you going to do to me?!" she demanded, both scared and nervous at the same time. Thornstar thought briefly. "I will think of your punishment, you will meet me here at this very clearing in one moon's time or you and your precious clan will all Parrish." She hissed. Turning, and fading into the darkness.


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Spiritstar looked up at the full moon, her emerald eyes glowing brightly. She quietly slipped out of her den and quickly padded through her sleepy camp. She stopped when she reached the large clearing, the large stump empty. She scanned the area for any sign of her father's killer, but she did not catch a glimpse, or let alone scent of her. Suddenly, the shady figure appeared on the large stump, her shadow cascading over her like a foggy image of death itself. Spiritstar's heart lurched at the sight of her. "Ahah, so you are here." She sneered. "What is it? What are you going to do?" Spiritstar asked, watching Thornstar dawn nearer. Thornstar smirked. "Before the day of your fall, Spiritstar, you will feel the hurt that i felt. Your kin and your kin's kin will all fall before yourself with a terrible death." She yelled, waking the forest into a ruckus of crows and growls and barks. Spirtstar flinched as the clearing was lit by a green light lighting the forest with a earthy inferno.


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Spiritstar felt a tug inside of her, she gritted her teeth and sunk her claws into the loose dirt as the green seemed to disappear, and with it, Thornstar swished away with the wind. Leaving Spiritstar crumbling to the ground.


"And thats how i cursed Spiritstar." Thornstar smirked as Russetstar's eyes grew wide. "That means that Rowan- i mean Spiritstar's kin will all die?" Russetstar asked, kicking some dirt under his paws. Thornstar nodded. "Until next time, young leader." Thornstar concluded, once again diapering into the night air.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby areadbhar » Thu May 15, 2014 2:01 pm

Dewpaw and Brother's Birth
A grey she-cat gasped as she looked at her kits. Two toms and one she-kit. Her mate licked them all. "Hmm, I'll name you Dew, Tiny, and Leaf." The she-cat said. One night, she lost her kits. The she-cat, Fluffy and her mate, Thunder, cried. They weren't ever seen again by Thunder and Fluffy, but Thunder always thought one survived.

Leaf and Tiny's death along with how Dewpaw joined
Three kits, wailing for milk. They had not drank milk for a while. Meanwhile, Toxic was walking through the woods when she heard the kits. "What are your names?" Toxic hissed. "Not telling you!" The kits wailed. "Well, then." Toxic said, and she murdered Tiny and Leaf. Dew hid while her brothers were killed. Toxic left, thinking it wasn't important enough to kill Dew. Dew cried a storm. Meanwhile, Badgerkit was chasing Seedkit. "I'm gonna catch you!" Badgerkit said. Seedkit, ahead of Badgerkit, stopped in front of Dew. Badgerkit crashed into her. "Ouch! You could at least tell me when to stop!" Badgerkit yowled. "Now, young kits, do not run out into the woods." Suntree said. Dew wailed. "Hey mom! There is a kit over here!" Seedkit said, and Dew was taken to camp and nammed Dewkit.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby #Spirit » Fri May 16, 2014 2:07 pm

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ıllıllı нαzєℓѕтяιρє'ѕ נσυяиєу ıllıllı

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Sail yawned and peered around the rocking hull of the boat with caution. Her eyes narrowed when she spotted the one thing she didn't like about life on the water, waves, Her sister. She leaped off the cushion and bounded up the rope ladder to the ship's deck. She admired her twoleg's passion for travel, but her heart lingered for freedom. She watched carefully as the ship pulled towards a dock. Peterson Port. The boat stopped, the rocks bumping against the ship, knocking it gently towards dock. She leaped carefully onto the dock, and quickly bolting away. she would no longer be sail, but what would she call herself? Was she really ready for this change? Of course she was. She began to pad along the dock, other sea-cats calling her. "Hey Hazel eyes!" or "Hey sail!" from the ones who she knew. Hazel. I will call myself Hazel.


Hazel padded across the dock, briefly peeking behind herself for any cats before bolting towards the forest. She started panting, and looking around. Her ears perked as she noticed the trickling sound of a river. One thought filled her mind, Food! She ran over to the water and watched the many fish swim by. She reached her jaw in and snatched a trout out of the water. She sat down and began to ate some of the fish, her muzzle dripping. Maybe this won't be too bad. she told herself before falling asleep.


Hazel woke suddenly to a cat that poked her with a claw gently. "Who are you!?" she yelled, it seemed to come out louder than she intended. The calico cat stood there, his face straight, his fur gleaming in the sun. "You are on Nightclan Territory Kittypet! he spat. Hazel looked at him confused. "How did you-" she asked looking down, she noticed her seafoam green tag. "Oh." she said simply, looking to her side and finding a thick stick. She grabbed this stick and placed it between her and her collar. She pulled, and pulled, and pulled until her collar snapped her free, sending her flying backwards. "I'm not a kittypet." she told him, sitting down. "I'm just a loner, looking for a clan." she lied. What is a clan? she asked herself, as he narrowed his eyes, and began to pad towards his camp. She followed quickly.


ıllıllı мαиу мσσиѕ ℓαтєя ıllıllı


"Thornblaze?" Hazelstripe called, padding trough the underbrush of the forest. She saw the muscular, calico cat siting in a clearing. He was looking off into the distant stars as if something was out there, in reach, yet so far away. Her head turned suddenly as a cracking came from the other end of the clearing. It was a small fox, slowly padding towards Thronblaze. "Thornblaze!" she yelled, turning the head of the fox, she leaped infront of him. It happened as if it was slow motion. Thornblaze turned his head, and let out a silent "No." into the air. She turned her head back to the fox. It was inching closer to her head, pinning her down, but he was confused. Hazelstripe was smiling. She was in the very same spot she had found thronblaze moons ago. She drew her last breath with a slight sigh and looked back at the fox, before he bowled his head into hers. And with a last blink she watched Thronblaze draw nearer, and the fox run in terror. And she died with a smile on her face.


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