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by Phione Mango » Mon Apr 28, 2014 7:32 am
0.0 wow this is amazing! *book marks topic*. Literally the best story on chicken smoothie I have ever seen! Your writing is unique and I love it! Normally I'm not a fan of loads of description, but I think this is so good it is worthy of publishing! Also, you coded this really well, neat and pretty but not over the top. All together; ✩✩✩✩✩ five star! c:
/////////Two birds on a wire,
//////one says "c'mon!"
//////and the
//////other says "I'm tired..."
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by ~Atlas~ » Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:01 pm
This is great! Keep up the good work! You should try and get it published!
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