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The Nightmare

Postby ~Dark Angel~ » Wed Jul 31, 2013 4:36 am

Hush little baby don't say a word,
secrets are ment to never be heard.
Sleep so deep you may be dead,
but don't you worry ill kill you insted.
hush little baby don't you cry,
mama's going to give you a nightmare tonight.

The forest was thick with fog, you put your hands out and they dissolved into the missed. You did not know what you were after, but you did not want to find out what was after you. You stumbled over roots that littered the small forest path, you let out a scream as your body hit the cold earth. But then you saw it a dark figure in the distance, it was like an ink splotch on fresh white paper. It had stiled to wait for you waving its hands for you to follow. You stood up and started your race for it, but it stayed just out of sight, just out of reach. Hot blood is oozing into you eyes from the cuts on your face were the trees scraped into your face. You race faster but you can't catch up. That's when you feel it, hot breath licking up your neck. "No, no, please no!!" Hot claws dig into your arms and begin to drag you off the path. The figure in the distance turns and watches you "HELP ME, DONT LEAVE ME ALONE PLEASE I DONT WANT TO BE ALONE!!" The claws keep hold of you and you watch as the figour in the distance turned to watch "HELP ME PLEASE!!" The figour waved to you. "Don't leave me." You whimper hot tears are spilling out your face as you are pulled away.
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Postby ~Dark Angel~ » Thu Aug 01, 2013 6:32 am

Bump please read my story's and post what you think :D
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Postby Tiger; » Fri Aug 02, 2013 1:54 pm

Great job! I loved them all! <3
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Postby ~Dark Angel~ » Sat Aug 03, 2013 9:14 am

The smoke from the fire made it impossible to breath without gaging, and see one foot in front of the other. It smelled of burning hair and roting flesh and there were so many flies the air seemed to buzz. under your feet blood and gore was making the ground slick, screams of pain and sorrow echoed. 'WELCOM!" the voice was a deep hiss that made your blood turn to ice.





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