The Little Girl in the Big City { Comments welcomed! }

[mouse?]

Oh, i just love it. More please!!!

[Roux-]

A/N: Thanks for your comments! I probably won't be updating as fast, since I'm not on much during school days, and today's Mother's Day.

Previously on The Little Girl in the Big City...
"Uhm.. Her name is Ari Blue, she's so pretty, and yes, she does have a sister who is off limits!" I said, when Axle smiled at the end, then frowned. "Come on, bro, let's go get her number. She obviously was on the same plane!" Axle said, and we power walked to the baggage claim, his backpack slapping his back the whole way.

Chapter 5
Logan

We. Made. It-finally. We had to run from the plane to baggage claim, and guess what? The plane is the VERY BACK, and baggage claim is at the front. Have you ever had to run across LAX? Ari better feel special, after two breaks because somehow Axle couldn't precess in his mind that his backpack could also roll. So, after a while, he finally noticed this, and rolled it, so we went faster.

I saw Ari by the conveyer belt, waiting for her suitcase. There was one beside her, a dog cage. And a very pretty one, too. Just as attractive as it's owner. Her owner! I was here to get her number, and for Axle to get his luggage. That's not important, though. Axle patted me on the back, and went off in search of his suitcases. Taking one last breath, I walked over to Ari, who was watching her sister get another suitcase. I tapped her shoulder, and she turned around.

Ari

"Logan?" I said, tilting my head. I looked calm, but on the inside, butterflies were were having a grand 'ole time. "Hey.. Uhm.. What's your number? So we can talk more." he said, his green eyes glazed with fear, and I could tell he was nervous. He handed me his phone, and I handed him mine, and we exchanged numbers. I glanced over at Madelyn, and saw some girl behind her staring at Logan. So, just to show her that Logan is mine, I stood on my toes, yes my toes, and kissed him on the cheek. Logan looked as if he were going to explode. He blushed, and hugged me goodbye and walked away with another guy whom I assume is his twin brother to catch a cab.

The first thing that caught my eye while on the drive home was Hollywood sign. I stared at it until a tall building blocked it. We drove for some time, and the limo started chugging up a hill, and appeared in front of a beautiful mansion. As we got out, I let Nadia out of her cage, and she immediately leaped into the pool. "Nadia!" I shouted, then Madelyn held me back, "It's okay. I'm not the one who cleans the pool. Come on, I wanna show you something." She led me into the house, and I got a little scared. It was huge! The living room was first, and at the edge two grand staircases loomed before me. What if I get lost? Madelyn then led me up one of staircases, covering my eyes. A door was opened, and she uncovered my eyes to reveal a beautiful large bedroom with the Hollywood sign right outside my window! I gasped, and engulfed Madelyn in a giant hug, "Thank you so much! I love you, sis!" I shouted.

My phone vibrated suddenly in my back pocket, and I yelped in surprise. Madelyn laughed softly at me, and walked out of the room to give me privacy. I read the text, and smiled.

Logan: Hey.
Me: Hey xx
Logan: Wrud?
Me: Nothing, just unpacking, u?
Logan: Nope, would u mind if i came over?
Me: sure xx my address is 2390 Hollywood Rd.
Logan: wow! you live in the Hills? on my way.

[I'm Not The Only One]

Nicceeeee Loved it!

[Roux-]

Previously on The Little Girl in the Big City..
Logan: Hey.
Me: Hey xx
Logan: Wrud?
Me: Nothing, just unpacking, u?
Logan: Nope, would u mind if i came over?
Me: sure xx my address is 2390 Hollywood Rd.
Logan: wow! you live in the Hills? on my way.

Chapter 6

Ari
Ah, he's coming over. Wait, I gotta get ready! I threw my phone onto my bed, and jogged downstairs, grabbing two of my suitcases. I lugged them up the stairs back to my room as fast as I could, and opened each of them. I quickly went through each of my best clothes. Nothing was good. I sighed, and closed them, and went downstairs where Madelyn was reading a script for a new episode. "Madelyn." I said, and she looked up.

"I kinda... invited that guy from the airport over, and I really need something better to wear." I said, hoping she wouldn't be mad that I invited pretty much a total stranger to her house. Instead, she smiled. "Awh, you're in love! I've got just the dress!" Madelyn said, and dragged me upstairs to her closet. And it. Was. Big. She sat me down on her bed, and began going through millions of expensive looking dresses, then pulled one out. It was beautiful, and then she picked out a pair of white lace flats. "Here, try this on, while I go talk to the chef about what to make." she said, then left the room and closed the door. I got up, and tried the dress on, then the shoes. It all fit perfectly. I heard a knock at the door, and said to come in. Madelyn appeared, wearing a beautiful high-low dress, with cream colored pumps. "I really hope this guy likes filet," Madelyn said, then snapped, "Your hair! Come on." she said, and ushered me into the bathroom, where she swiftly put my hair into a braid. How I came so lucky to have Madelyn as a sister, I don't know.

The doorbell went off, and Madelyn smiled gently at me, then walked downstairs to the door. She opened it, and Logan appeared. He was dressed just as formally, and gawked at me. I smiled slightly, then walked down the staircase. Madelyn smiled, then took her script and walked into the dining to help set the table.

Logan

"You look amazing." I said, hugging her. "T-Thank you, you look great, yourself." she said, and parted from the hug, though our hands remained interlocked. We just stood there staring into each other's eyes, then Ari looked down, and blushed. I blushed, also, and our hands returned to our sides. 'So.. you like filet?" she asked, and I nodded, "Yup." Ari sighed, and looked relieved, "that's what Madelyn is making... And by the looks of it, I guess it's time for 'supper." She said, looking at the dinner table. There was a grand candle in the middle, and three plates filled with juicy filet. Yumm. We walked to the dining table, and sat down. Ari was the first one to start eating, poor thing looked as if she were starving to death. After exchanging names and such, Ari's sister, Geraldine Kyle, I mean Madelyn, started eating.

[mouse?]

Omg!!!!! I love this story soooo much!!!! You do such a good job at writing! How do you make the link into the words? Sorry. I'm new to cs kinda. But i love this story! Such a clever idea!

[Roux-]

Thanks, I feel so special :D Oh, and when you put the link into words, look for the "url" option where the font sizer and stuff is. Click that, and this should show up: [url][/url] Type the link between the l and the ] and it should look like this: [url=link]link[/url] then [url=link]words[/url]

I'll be updating in a few, pizza's almost here

[mouse?]

Thanks, I feel so special Oh, and when you put the link into words, look for the "url" option where the font sizer and stuff is. Click that, and this should show up: [url][/url] Type the link between the l and the ] and it should look like this: [url=link]link[/url] then [url=link]words[/url]

I'll be updating in a few, pizza's almost here

(Thank you so much!)

[I'm Not The Only One]

Beautiful as always

[Diaval]

Woohoo! Love it. Ari x Logan = so cute.

[Roux-]

Previously on The Little Girl in the Big City
There was a grand candle in the middle, and three plates filled with juicy filet. Yumm. We walked to the dining table, and sat down. Ari was the first one to start eating, poor thing looked as if she were starving to death. After exchanging names and such, Ari's sister, Geraldine Kyle, I mean Madelyn, started eating.

chapter 7

Ari
After that meal, I don't think I'll ever eat again. Just looking at the dessert made me gain 50 pounds. I laid back in my chair, enjoying the warmth of the sun on my back. "Hey, I heard the sunset was going to be real pretty tonight, and it's warm out, if y'all wanna go out on the balcony. Madelyn said, glancing at me and Logan. I looked at Logan, and he shrugged. "Fine with me, though you might have to roll me up." Logan said, laughing. I love his laugh, it's similar to Kendall's. Speaking of Kendall, I promised him I would Skype tonight. "Alright. We're southern girls, and we can do anything." I said, and Madelyn caught on, "Yup. Go get the tractor, Ari-boo." We all laughed, and once we caught our breath, Logan and I made our way to the balcony by the hall.

It was beautiful. The sun was just now setting, and it was a bright pink. The sun shone on the Hollywood sign, making it shine like a beacon in the soon darkening city. The mountains were black, outlining the sign and sky. "Hey." Logan said, making me jump. I smiled at him, and said, "So, where are from?" "Santa Maria. It's a couple hours from here. My brother, Axle, lives in New York." Santa Maria. I've hear of that. I nodded, and said, "I'm from Maxine. It's a real small town in Alabama." Logan nodded, and told me about how his brother went there to help on a farm.

The sky started to get a little darker, and the stars made their way out. Logan wrapped his arm around my waist, and said,

Logan

"See that really bright star?" I said, pointing to the star, right above the Hollywood sign. She nodded, and I said, "That's Venus. Do you know what the goddess Venus represented?" Ari looked at me, and nodded no. Good, I was hoping not. Or else my cheesy pick-up line would've failed. "Venus represented love." I said, and kissed her. I don't care that I met her yesterday, I knew she was the one the minute our eyes met. 'Will you be my girlfriend?" I whispered, taking her hand. "Yes!" she said, and hugged me.

A/N: I just wanna thank you guys again, y'all keep me motivated to keep writing Anyways, ArixLogan moment! I should ship them. Or.. do you think ArixKendall still have a chance? Vote/Message/PM me!