The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:07 am

New entry! So sorry for the wait! :)















If you try anything, you're dead.
Yeah, yeah, yeah, I got it.
You better.
I couldn't believe it. Jenette was untying DQ. Jenette had said that DQ changed, but I didn't believe it.
She's fine, Amy.
She's a demon! How can she be fine?!
I can tell, Amy. I can see her heart. She's at least a little bit good now.
But there's still a bunch of evil in her!
Yes, but everybody has evil in them. Well, except for God.
But DQ has more evil in her than anybody else!
Not true. Satan has more, actually.
Fine. You're second to most evil!
That's more accurate.
See?! Even she agrees she's evil!
I am evil, but I do wish to change.
But how can we believe you?
Was I the only one being cautious?
We can at least give her a chance, Amy.
I turned around and looked at Suzi.
That's easy for you to say! You were her once, remember?!
Exactly. I know how she thinks, and I know how she acts. She's trying to be good.
C'mon, Amy. Give DQ a chance.
Am I the only one who thinks this is a bad idea?
Silence.
Guess so.
It's not that bad, Amy. DQ will change, and then we can save the world together.
If she changes, you mean.
Silence. Great, my own friends didn't believe me!
Quit being so hard-headed, it's not like we're making her save the world on her own.
yeah but it's still a bad idea.
What was that?
LE NOTHING!
...
...
...
...
...
What?
You said "le".
'Cause I'm awesome.
You're a lot of things, Amy, but awesome isn't one of them.
HEY!
Jenette's right, you know.
I wasn't asking you!
Fine, be that way.
Oohhhh no. No you don't!
I don't what?
Don't you start arguing with me!
Well then, I suggest you shut up.
That's it!
I charged at DQ and knocked her to the ground.
GET OFF ME YOU BUTTHEAD!
DID YOU JUST CALL ME HEAD A BUTT?!
NO I CALLED YOU A BUTTHEAD!
QUIT CALLING MY HEAD A BUTT!
YOU'RE SO HELPLESS!!
GOOD! I DON'T LIKE BEING HELPED!!!
THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT!
I'M SO FLUFFFYYYY!!!
DQ punched me, making me fall back... and squashing Flower.
GHIEO;AHGEIO;AHGDKJA;GNEILA;HFTEIO;AGHEIOA;HFGKDL;A CAN'T BREATH OH MY GOSH I'M DYING YOU SMELL SO BAD AMY GET OFFF GHEIOA;GHEIOA;GHEIO;AGHEIA
I jumped off of Flower (who was now officially a pancake) and charged at DQ again- but instead ran straight into Jenette.
Would you two stop it?! Save the fighting for the war!
BUTIHATEHERSOMUCHSHE'SSOSTUPIDANDANNOYINGAND-
You're starting to sound like Flower.
THAT'S NOT A BAD THING!
I looked over at Flower (who was still part-pancake) and she was wobbly walking over and behind Gish.
IF YOU TRY SQUASHING ME AGAIN GISH WILL GO DOWN WITH ME!
Sorry, but I'm staying out of this.
Gish inched away from Flower.
NOOOOOOO! COME BAAAAAACK!
Flower ran after Gish.
No. Hey, I said no. Get away!
Flower caught up to Gish and started hugging her.
IMMA NEVER LETTIN' GO!
Get off me!
I LOVE YOU! YOU ARE NOW MY MOMMY!
WHAT?!
This turned very weird in a short amount of time.
What the heck is going on?
I have no clue.
YOU WILL BE MY MOMMA AND I WILL HUG YOU FOREVER!
Help.
Sorry; you're on your own.
Great. So me and DQ were mad at each other, DQ was free to do whatever evil she wanted, and Flower thought Gish was her mother. This was turning out to be a wonderful day (note the sarcasm).

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:12 am

AMAZING!!!
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:17 am

Rockfire wrote:AMAZING!!!

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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:57 am

Haha, that made me laugh. :3
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Thu Apr 11, 2013 9:59 am

.... Flower turned mad.
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Apr 12, 2013 5:07 am

So sorry I haven't been on! My step-dad switched computers on me, and... well, I didn't like it :p And don't worry Amy, I think you're awesome!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Forgotten Love » Sat Apr 13, 2013 4:48 am

I've been following you books for awhile now and i absolutely LOVE TIAJNAD!!! Keep up the good work! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Apr 13, 2013 7:48 am

Rockfire wrote:AMAZING!!!

Night Emerald wrote:xD

Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
Haha, that made me laugh. :3

Thanks you guys! ^.^
Mento. wrote:.... Flower turned mad.

lol, yes she did. XD
.:Invisi:. wrote:So sorry I haven't been on! My step-dad switched computers on me, and... well, I didn't like it :p And don't worry Amy, I think you're awesome!

lol, that's okay.
Annette Williams wrote:I've been following you books for awhile now and i absolutely LOVE TIAJNAD!!! Keep up the good work! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

Oh wow, thank you so much! It's always nice to hear that there's still some fans out there. ^.^

Will try and write an entry later. Have to get off now...

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby TPDebate » Sat Apr 13, 2013 4:32 pm

Poor gish. Poor poor gish. Wow, I can't believe that I'm counted as an old fan. It makes me feel so... old! I've been stalking this since the middle of book two, granted I missed book four after the amy-pete thing at the end of book three.
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Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Apr 14, 2013 1:55 pm

whoa gal1 wrote:Poor gish. Poor poor gish. Wow, I can't believe that I'm counted as an old fan. It makes me feel so... old! I've been stalking this since the middle of book two, granted I missed book four after the amy-pete thing at the end of book three.

Yup, you've been stalking this for quite some time! :)

I'm so, so sorry guys! You won't believe how busy I've been! I would really, REALLY appreciate it if you'd send me some ideas through PM. I haven't had time to think about the book and I've just been really busy, and I'm so, so sorry! And now I have to get off and eat dinner. I'm sorry!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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