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[Abissh]

No, I don't mind at all! :3

[LadyGalleth]

Woo!!! Ok. Awesome!!!! I will get them to you as soon as I have time.

[LadyGalleth]

Maybe you will be able to suggest to me where to go next?

[Mrs. Blue Sky]

Can you critique this for me? You can be as harsh as needed.

Many people have given a negative outcry to Mockingjays ending.However, I have a few thoerys why this is.
1. They find that this ending is unsatisfying. To recap, Prim dies, both presidents die, Gale lives in District 2 and never sees her, Haymitch eventually dies, and she probably never sees her mother again. She does end up living next to haymitch, and has 2 kids with Peeta. I believe her reasoning for this is because she thought people wouldn't think the ending was realistic.
2. Lots of people die. Some more meaningful deaths are: the Avox girl, Finnick, Snow, Peeta's Family, Madge's Family, and , the bigggest shocker of all, Prim. Killing Prim off made people REALLY mad.
3. She chose Peeta over Gale. This is a matter of opinion, but some people wanted Gale to marry Katniss.

Those are the major ones. Let me know if you have any other reasons.
Personally, I enjoyed it.

[Abissh]

If you'd like me to hit on grammar, 'thoerys' should be 'theories', you forgot to capitalize Haymitch the second time, italicize 'really' instead of capitalizing every letter.

Those are good points, haha. Is this for school? :3

[Mrs. Blue Sky]

Nope. Just writing. I actually posted it earlier

[Abissh]

I see! Well, it's nice. ^^

[angel.]

Can I PM you my song lyrics? They're a little personal.

[LadyGalleth]

Thank you for doing this! <3

[Abissh]

Savvy2725- Yes, and I see you already have. ^^ I don't mind pms.

LadyGalleth- It's no problem. ^^