Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Amy
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22%
Jenette
5
16%
Suzi
2
6%
Gish
3
9%
DQ
5
16%
Ginger
0
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Rhubarb
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Misty
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3%
Jessy
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6%
Brent
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Mar 19, 2013 7:16 am

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I, believe it or not, actually figured out how to work the time machine.
Jenette! I got it!
You know how to work it?
Yup! :D
How?
You just have to turn the knob!
... That's all?
YUP! :D
... How come we didn't figure that out before?
I dunno. But we got it now! Let's go get Rhubarb!
Wait, how do you know that you have to turn the knob if you haven't tried going back in time yet?
I already went back in time.
WHAT?!
I turned the knob and went back a few minutes to where DQ laughed. I turned the knob again and came back here to present time. I think that was going back in time...
Yeah, it was. We should probably get going now. DQ! PETE! WE'VE GOT IT FIGURED OUT!
YOU DO?!
YEAH! NOW COME OVER HERE SO I CAN QUIT SHOUTING AT YOU!
So Jenette explained the plan to Pete and DQ (as soon as they'd come toward us, that is).
Now... how do we make multiple people go at a time?
I don't know. Maybe we should hold hands?
Sounds good.
We held hands and formed a circle.
Wait... if we're holding hands, how do I turn the knob?
Use your feet.
What?
Your feet. Use them.
Uh... erm.... okay?
I held down the time machine with one foot and started turning the knob with the other foot.
You all ready?
Yup.
I don't even know why I'm doing this. It doesn't benefit me at all.
And then we went back in time. It felt as if I was thrown against a wall 10 times. And then we were there. We were back in time. We had all lost each other's grips from the time travel, but we were all still there.... on the ground rolling in pain, but we were all still there.
Alright. Let's find Clyff..... as soon as I can stand up.
Jenette wheezed and coughed out dirt, as did DQ, Pete, and I. After a few minutes of laying there we could stand up.
Now, if I know Clyff then he would first go to where he messed up; where he "died".
Alright. Where is that?
Right over there.
I looked to where Jenette was pointing and that's when it got really creepy. There was another Jenette standing in the middle of the road and an angel was walking and talking with her. Jenette (the real Jenette) stopped dead in her tracks as she locked eyes on the angel.
Clyff.
Wait, that's Rhubarb?
They looked completely different.
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... he was such a pretty angel. And now he's such a-
Stupid, ugly, lying, filthy rat.
... I was gonna say creepy dog. But that works too.
The past Jenette laughed at something that Clyff, the angel, said. The real Jenette fumed.
I'm gonna go over there and whoop him 'til there's no tomorrow.
Jenette stormed over to where Clyff and past Jenette were. DQ quickly grabbed Jenette to stop her.
You're an idiot, you know that, right?
What?! I've got to go stop Clyff!
Yeah, but first you need to stop yourself from doing an idiot move like you almost did! You almost walked up to past Jenette looking like Jenette. Meaning, you look exactly like each other. Don't you think the past you will sort of freak out by seeing herself again?
... I don't know.
Let me handle this.
DQ started to walk forward.
But won't they be a bit creeped out by a demon dog?
DQ stopped dead in her tracks.
You make a good point for once, Amy. Alright then, you go.
Me?
Yeah.
I gulped and started to walk forward. At least angels weren't scary. I walked up to Clyff and smiled.
Hello! I need to talk to you for a minute Rhubarb.
Who's Rhubarb?
Dang.
I said Clyff.
Nope, you said Rhubarb.
I meant Clyff.
I'm right here. What do you want?
I could tell by Clyff's expression that he remembered me but didn't want to say it in front of past Jenette.
My friend needs to talk to you.
Then why doesn't she come over here and talk to me face to face?
I never said it was a girl.
Clyff blinked then looked over at past Jenette, who had an annoyed look on her face.
Oh, just go, Clyff... just as long as it's fast.
I'll be back shortly, Jen.
Rhubarb smiled and kissed past Jenette on the cheek, and then turned toward me. I led him over to where Jenette and DQ were standing.
Alright, I see you figured out how to work the second time machine. What do you want?
We need to take you back, Clyff. You're going to destroy the world if you try and change our fate.
I have to change the outcome, though. I miss you too much.
If you do this then you'll still end up losing me in the end.
Well at least when we die you'll love me.
And with that Clyff turned around and walked back to past Jenette. The real Jenette muttered something and had fury in her eyes.
He is so stubborn!
Just like you.
Jenette whipped her head around and looked at DQ.
Oh, shut up.
Oohh, someone's in a bad mood.
I hate Clyff. I hate him so much.
I don't think you do.
What's that supposed to mean?
This isn't anger; it's love.
If you think that I still love Clyff then you're badly mistaken.
You do still love him, and you're the one that's mistaken. You missed him so much when he died that your heart broke into a thousand little pieces. And those pieces tried to form back into your heart too soon, making your heart jagged and unsure of what it was doing. Now one of the sharp pieces of your heart has been put in the correct place but it is surrounded by the other million uneven pieces, making it feel wrong.
What the heck are you saying?!
The pieces of your heart symbolize everything or one that you care about. Once Clyff died, all that you cared about didn't matter, but you wanted to be strong so you rushed everything and pushed away Clyff from your memory, making all the jagged pieces form back incorrectly. You were forcing yourself to care, which isn't real love. When Clyff came back, however, that one thing that you cared about came back with a slam and it's making you think that you're mad because of the shock. You're really happy and grateful to see him.
And how do you know all this?! How can you know what I'm thinking and not thinking?!
I'm the Demon Queen. I see everyone's happiest memories and make them bad. I know your happy memories, though I didn't need to make the Clyff one bad. You already had.
Jenette looked down and didn't reply.
You gotta give Clyff another chance. If not for the world, then for yourself. This hatred toward him you think you feel is tearing you apart.
I don't want to love him.
It's too late; you already do.
And then Jenette did something I hadn't seen her do in a long time: she sobbed. Her shoulders sagged and moved up and down with great force as she cried. Just seeing it made me cry. DQ then did something surprising; she hugged the crying and heaving Jenette.
It's okay. It's okay.
Love..... love is.... is stupid!
I know. I know it is. I've been through love too.
I looked over at Pete and my eyes grew large. I crept over to him and whispered in his ear.
We won't have to go through this, right?
He smiled slightly and shook his head no.
Good. This is sort of creepy seeing Jenette cry...
Jenette finally stopped crying after awhile and breathed slowly. She slowly pulled away from DQ.
You okay?
Yeah. I think so.
Jenette wiped her nose with her paw and smiled slightly.
Where's.... where's Clyff? I need to talk to him...
DQ smiled and pointed to where Clyff and past Jenette were talking.
Get the past me away so I can talk to him.
Sure.
DQ walked toward them and suddenly disappeared. She reappeared behind past Jenette and grabbed her from behind, then disappeared with past Jenette. Clyff stood there just staring.
JEN!
I'm right here.
Clyff turned his head and stared into the real Jenette's eyes.
I have to talk to you.
I know you hate me, Jen, which is why I have to do this. I can't live without you.
I can't live without you.
Clyff stared at Jenette.
What?
I'm sorry about everything I said to you. I was just... happy.
So you were yelling at me because you were happy? Try being happy less often.
No, no. Well, yes. I mean, I don't know! It's all so confusing! What I'm trying to say is I love you, Clyff!
Clyff stared... and stared... and stared.
Really?
I do. I missed you more then I could bear when you died. And now that you're back I don't want to lose you ever again. Promise me that you'll never leave me again.
I.... I promise, Jen. I mean, Jenette.
No.
Jenette hugged Clyff and and Clyff hugged her back.
Call me Jen.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby TPDebate » Tue Mar 19, 2013 7:50 am

hmm. Jenette crying. I am sensing a global catastrophe soon.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:28 am

SOMETHING IS VERY VERY VERY WRONG FIRST DQ LAUGHED NOW JENNETTE IS CRYING!!!!!!!! WHAT IS HAPPING HERE???????? Love the entry
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby star star. » Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:15 am

well... a stop-Rhubarb/Clyff-misson gakes a weird turn...
awesome entry. too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Mar 19, 2013 2:16 pm

whoa gal1 wrote:hmm. Jenette crying. I am sensing a global catastrophe soon.

lol
Rockfire wrote:SOMETHING IS VERY VERY VERY WRONG FIRST DQ LAUGHED NOW JENNETTE IS CRYING!!!!!!!! WHAT IS HAPPING HERE???????? Love the entry

lol, craziness is what's happening, my Stalkerwan.
/epic.fail/ wrote:well... a stop-Rhubarb/Clyff-misson gakes a weird turn...
awesome entry. too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, thank you!

Meh, what the heck. NEW ENTRY!















Well. That took a turn of events.
Jenette looked over at me and I expected her to scowl. But instead she smiled. I expected Clyff to look happy that she was smiling, but instead he looked worried.
Jen? What happens to the future now? I've changed it a lot...
No, we've changed it a lot. It's all of our faults.
Clyff smiled slightly.
I'm not sure where DQ took past me.
Where is DQ?
We looked around but she was nowhere in sight.
Great. We just lost past me and DQ. Who knows what will happen to the future now...
Don't worry, I took care of her.
We all whirled around to stare at a smiling DQ.
What do you mean you took care of her?
DQ smiled even bigger.
I killed the past you.
All was silent.
...
...
...
WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU KILLED ME?!
I didn't kill you, I killed past you!
DQ smiled hesitantly, as if Jenette wasn't getting the good thing she'd done. I didn't even understand why Jenette was so angry.
Do you know what you've done?!
DQ's smile faded.
Calm down, Jen.
Clyff, you don't understand! She killed the past me! What do you think that will do to the me now?!
And then it all sunk in. A look of horror crossed Clyff's face and DQ looked taken aback. As for me, I just stared.
No. No! You won't die!
My mouth dropped open as I stared at Jenette's hand. It was as if it was sand and wind was blowing it away. Little pieces of it floated into the air and started to crawl up to her elbow.
Jenette! What's happening?!
I've died in the past so now I no longer have a future! I no longer exist!
I.... I'm sorry! I didn't know!
Jenette's arms were gone and her feet started to go into the wind. Jenette collapsed into Clyff's arms, what with having no feet, and he held her up.
Don't go! Stay with me!
I can't control it, Clyff!
Her legs were gone and it was going up her stomach.
I won't lose you again!
There's only one way to stop this! You have to go back in time again from before you used the time machine and stop yourself from using it!
But you won't remember anything... you'll still be mad at me! You won't love me if I go back!
Clyff.
Jen stared into Clyff's eyes with pleading.
I will always love you. No matter what you decide, I will never forget you. Do what you think you should do.
I... I can't lose you.
A tear slid down Jenette's cheek. She was almost completely sand. I couldn't say anything, couldn't do anything, but watch. My mouth was dry and my eyes were large.
You never will. You never have.
And then her head turned to sand. The wind blew her away and she was no longer there. Clyff stood there in the same position. And then he let out a scream like nothing I'd ever heard.
JEN! COME BACK!
I realized that DQ was looking at me and I looked over at her.
This is all my fault.
DQ took a step back and then started running.
Wait! Come back, DQ!
But she didn't. She ran and then disappeared. I looked back over at Clyff, who was throwing whatever he could lift.
Come back! Please, come back!
A tear slid down his cheek and he collapsed on the ground. I slowly walked over to him and held out the time machine. He looked up and took it slowly.
I don't know what to do. If I go back in time to stop her from dying she'll still be angry with me. but if I don't, she'll still be dead...
It's up to you. I can't decide for you. Whatever you choose, though, I'll go with you.
He thought about it a moment and then got to his feet.
Alright. I've decided.
What are we going to do?
Clyff looked at me with a stern look in his face.
We're going to bring her back.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby star star. » Tue Mar 19, 2013 6:01 pm

Clyff. Oh, clyff.
Man, I hope I dint go this crazed if I ever get a boyfriend. O.O
Let's just say it wouldn't be good... Maybe... Heck I don't know





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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:56 pm

*Slaps Clyff or is it Rhubarb?* confussing moment YOU LET HER DIE 2 TIMES IN ONE ENTRY JEGUS DO YOU LIKE DEATHS? OR JUST JENETT DIEING?
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby brambletalon98 » Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:59 pm

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NOOOOOooooooo
Jenette, dont fade to sand and just go poof D:
Sooo...
what happened to Suzi?
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Mar 20, 2013 5:52 am

/epic.fail/ wrote:Clyff. Oh, clyff.
Man, I hope I dint go this crazed if I ever get a boyfriend. O.O
Let's just say it wouldn't be good... Maybe... Heck I don't know

lol, I hope I don't either.
Rockfire wrote:*Slaps Clyff or is it Rhubarb?* confussing moment YOU LET HER DIE 2 TIMES IN ONE ENTRY JEGUS DO YOU LIKE DEATHS? OR JUST JENETT DIEING?

lol, I had to figure out what to do with Past Jenette. Then I realized that if she died then future Jenette died. :p
brambletalon98 wrote:AGFHJGNNGJEFNAGRJNadjsgnjgnafdlgAFDGAFHasg

NOOOOOooooooo
Jenette, dont fade to sand and just go poof D:
Sooo...
what happened to Suzi?

Suzi, Ginger, and Gish so far have not been heard of. Jenette and DQ were the only ones that came to save Amy when Ariadne was in Amy. You haven't heard of the others yet (but I know where they are... :twisted: ).

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Wed Mar 20, 2013 7:00 am

Did they die? (I think they might have or not)
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