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[Meredare]

I made this a while ago and yes I am VERY, VERY, VERY, sorry for not updating sooner. My siggy currently states my excuse.

A thick pink blanket was passed around the room to all who had clean hands. It wasn't just a blanket though. It was a new source of life.
I was soon one of those people to hold the bundle. "Hello," I whispered. "I'm you're older sister, Bridget." I cradled the young one a little. "And you are Crystal. My little sister, Crystal." I passed her on to another family member with a big sister smile on my face.
I felt successful; successful of my role as an older sister. I watched everyone give their greetings to the bundle.
For one reason or another, Crystal ended up back in my arms after everyone had a turn to hold her. I stood politely, cradling her softly, as a nurse came to check in on mom.
While the nurse was discussing who knows what, I lightly gasped as Crystal began to open her eyes that stopped halfway. A sound came out her mouth as a yawn and she grabbed a hold of the thing closest to me: my thumb with both of her soft little hands. I watched her but everyone else was caught up in their own conversations and excitement.
A half-smile fell on her lips before her eyes shut into a deep sleep while my careful cradle helped lure her. With nothing more to be able to do, I hummed to the sweet little girl wrapped in her warm, protective blanket; a sweet, gentle hum made to protect the innocent child from all the worries of the world.
I then whispered to her once again, "Goodnight, Crystal..."

[Weeping_Angel }Y{]

I like the first story you posted here: Why the Moon Disappears

Its genius

[Meredare]

Sorry, can't update today and didn't get today's... or well it's after 12, so yesterday's story done because I had a project I had to work on. Sorry again. I'll have to make two soon.
And Spring Break is coming REAL soon, so I might update more on some days (or none on some days because I might go somewhere).
And reply to DolphinGirl4Ever: Really? I made that for a school assignment and I think it's a complete fail xD Glad you like it though.

The fresh smell of breakfast awakened me from my slumber, and pulled me out of bed. I stumbled out of my room, through the hall, and into the bright kitchen.
"Hey, Hon." My mom greeted me, "You're sure up early." Her red hair fell into delicate but lazy curls.
I smiled back and then said, with added emphasize, "The bacon was calling me~"
This caused her to laugh.

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I just died at softball, so there is no way for me to update today. Sorry, a softball (hit by my couch's bat) hit me directly on the center of my nail. And that was at the beginning of practice, so I then had to deal with the rest of practice doing my best and pleasing my mother (which my mom got mad at the end for me not putting my stuff up; I am currently mad at my mother for not getting me out of practice but she says "I wasn't going to get you out over a FINGER injury." So goodnight and hope Spring Break gets better tomorrow: horrible day today... I have the worst luck)

"So... this is hell." The man who spoke didn't sound scared as he spoke like saying a fact.
"Well..." Another man that was tall and slender responded, "This definitely isn't heaven."
Just a handful walked into the worst place on earth. Magma rolled down the cavern walls, and fires flicked from the low ceilings. This small group came for a strong purpose though and there was no way they were backing down. They wouldn't leave even if the temperature raised into the 200s. They wouldn't leave... unless they died.
A man stood in front of them all as the leader watched the horde of beasts stand their ground before shouting a battle cry that they all ran with, "Give us our friend back!" They were going to defy logic for one friend, a single person out of the thousands...

So... if you guys wanted to know: This MIGHT HAVE been based off the anime, One Piece, a little... First man: Zoro. Second man: Sanji. 3rd man: Luffy (obviously). This was conjured before the "thing" that happened at Saobody Archipelago but either appearance will work.

[Meredare]

I feel like the worst writer in the world >.> Sorry, can't update again today... And I haven't written anything today either: I feel horrible D:
But if you want the honest answer: I woke up at 2PM today and had to get dressed right away to go to a friend's house. Got home at 11PM So that's my excuse today. I'll now have to make up 2 days now... Super sorry! (P.s. My finger still hurts...)

Will type story here...

[Weeping_Angel }Y{]

History of Pixies:

There were originally four elemental pixies. Fire, water, earth, and air. From those original pixies came light, garden, snow and wind pixies. Now, there are many types of pixies, all descended from the four different pixies that originally existed. Each has special powers that usually involves something in nature.

Back in the time of the four elemental pixies, there was great conflict. They all wanted to be the leader. Each went their separate ways to opposite sides of a place called Neverland. These are the elements' stories.

Water watched over the Winter Woods. The air was too cold for her to make dew drops, so she made snowflakes instead. This is how snow was created, and snow pixies were instructed. Every once and a while, a water pixie would be sent to the winter woods to learn how to make frost and snow.

Fire went to Summer Glade. He made it very warm, but there was not a specific source for the warmth to come from, so he made a ball of fire and threw it into the sky. It became the sun, and from its rays came small particles of dust that formed into pixies. They had the ability to move light from the sun and create warmth in the coldest of places.

Earth found her way to Springtime Orchard. There were many amazing plants growing from the soil. Seeds fell from these plants and lay all over the ground. They were all being eaten by animals and not growing into more flowers. Earth saw this and was devastated. She dug holes in the soil and placed a single seed in each. From these seeds grew garden pixies. They repeated Earth's process until the Orchard was filled with beautiful flowers once again.

Air somehow found a place called Autumn Forest. It was very quiet, and Air liked noise. He used his abilities to bend the air so it rustled the leaves of all the trees. A few leaves fell down and turned into wind pixies. They used currents of air to create wind and sound among the leaves, which pleased Air.

Each element wanted to boast to the others about their accomplishments, so they met at a great tree in the middle of Neverland. It produced a bright dust that helped them fly faster, so they called it Pixie Dust, and, respectively, the tree was called the Pixie Dust Tree. When all the pixies got together and saw what the others had 'created', they wanted to see what they could do if they worked together.

Fire and Earth created collier pixies by an amazing process. When Fire heated the soil, it hardened into metal. Earth then formed figures out of this metal when it was softened slightly by Fire. The figures turned into pixies, and started to heat the soil with fire and formed many useful things with the metal they created.

Water and Air made theater and literature pixies by weaving grass into sheets, then marking it with berry juice. Their markings were strange and resembled themselves in an abstract way. These drawings turned into the first literature and theater pixies. The literature pixie would write a story, and the theater pixie acted it out.

But they still needed a pixie to watch over the animals. All the pixies gathered at the Pixie Dust Tree, and discussed this issue. They pondered what to do about the animals. Since they could not figure out what to do, they flew to Springtime Orchard to observe the animals' behavior. Some animals lost a bit of fur to brambles, and some young birds' downy feathers floated from nests in the trees.. This fur and these feathers were collected and used to build a sculpture out of twigs and berries that some pixies were building for fun. When they were added, a pixie appeared. This pixie flew over to a baby bird that was trying to fly, and taught it how in an instant. Then she gathered a couple acorns from the high branches of a tree and gave them to a baby squirrel waking up from a nap.

They had done it! They had created pixies to watch over plants, animals and weather. With this, the elements flew back to the Pixie Dust Tree and divided their duties among the seasons. Air went back to Autumn Forest to watch the wind pixies. Earth went to Springtime Orchard to help the garden pixies with the flowers. Fire went back to Summer Glade to help the light fairies monitor the heat the sun was producing. And finally, Water went back to the Winter Woods to train the snow fairies.

This is a small portion of a Tinkerbell fan fic I am working on. Follow the Life as Pixies link in my siggy for the rest of what is written.

[Meredare]

Okay, again it's late, but I read it anyway and I have a few questions and comments:
1. In the first Tinkerbell movie, Tinkerbell was made by a baby's first laugh which wasn't mentioned at all in the history. In fact, you just said they appeared after creating things/doing things.
2. Tinkerbell was a tinker and that didn't get "created", so I was wondering about that...
3. About the 'animal' pixie, I believe that there should be more instead of just a tuff of fur like maybe adding a bird's feather, a tooth of a dog, etc. would probably make more sense because she "taught [the baby bird] how in an instant" and the animal was a BIRD and she was created due to FUR. I don't know it was just my inner sense speaking.
4. I just might check out your story ^^
5. In your link, I noticed you have the link next to it and the title next to it. This is how to make the words the link (like in my siggy)
View this example below:
[url=http://www.chickensmoothie.com/pound.php]The Pound[/url]
I disabled the normal view on this post, but if you did this on a post/siggy with the normal view on then all that would show would be "The Pound" in a light blue color like the color in my siggy and have the URL on it.

Thanks for your time I will critique tomorrow.

[Weeping_Angel }Y{]

Like I said, this is a fan fic, so some ideas and places are the same, but some things have been changed. Tinkers are colliers in this case. I probably will change the animal pixie, but I was writing late at night and needed a quick way to finish the history and it could use some editing. About the baby's first laugh, I thought I should have my own idea for how the pixies were created, so they are like tiny humans really. If you read my story you might understand it a little more.

Yeah, I know about the links, but I was in a rush to get them there and wanted to write more.

[Meredare]

It's easier to read in your siggy now. Thanks and I just might go look at your story.
The writing piece today will come later in the afternoon. On this post.

The man stood, proud and sure. The gold medal for bravery on his neck said all. The crowd of people stared at the golden star with the words, "Hero to the people!" engraved in the center.
Marissa, a girl a few feet away from the man, trapped in the pushing crowd, would not let herself be fooled. Sure, he may be a hunk on the outside, but pretty smiles and pretty hearts are very different. This sixteen-year-old knew better.
Her own father had the greatest heart on the planet maybe even the universe, but he wouldn't say that. He never even once thought about himself since she knew him. Yeah, he was as strict as any other parent maybe even worse, and when he got mad, everyone ran for cover, but he was strict because he wanted to protect her and was only angry because he didn't want her to make the same mistakes he had. She knew it too.
But now her father was gone. Forever. And it was all because of a twisted, evil man and his golden medal. Abner Drake.
She could see through guys like him. "What's your name, "hero"!?" Marissa practically ordered.
"J...Jonathon. Jonathon Wray, mam." The man replied earnestly, even though he tripped a little while doing so.
Clumsy fool, Marissa thought. His age appeared to be only a little older than herself; at max eighteen. He was tall with more of lanky build. He most likely even had muscles under his long-sleeved uniform shirt. "Marissa Fray." She grabbed his shirt collar. "I've got my eye on you, Wray!" Marissa released him just as fast and spun off, leaving one confused Jonathon and a crowd apologi8zing and giving excuses behind her.

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Saved for today's entry. I've been busy... Sorry!

The temperature was on the cooler of being "nice" out. It was still pretty dark out because the sun hadn't yet arisen. The sky was a light grayish, and was just enough to see clearly. Walking down my usual path, I had to stop and gaze at the beautiful sight. Tiny raindrops, otherwise unnoticeable, sparkled a silvery color on each blade of grass and every leaf on the tree. I didn't want to move but I realized I must, or I would be late, so I took a step forward expecting the spectacle to disappear, but it didn't. Instead the raindrops glinted in a new ray of light. Each step was the same until my eyes could not see it that far.

True story!!! It was really cool!