Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby arabmorgan » Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:19 am

        sure, just PM me once you're done editing it ^^
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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby Azalaya » Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:20 am

Will do.It will probally be later today.As of now I am on my cell phone.

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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby Allegaint » Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:44 pm

(I really liked it, I'd love to read more!)
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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby Azalaya » Sat Mar 09, 2013 1:25 pm

Thank you.I am currently writing more and fixing it when I have time.ince I have writer's block for this story..I am working on a second story which I wanna try to "cross" with this story called The Curse

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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby Allegaint » Sat Mar 09, 2013 1:27 pm

(Oh okay, well I'll be looking forward to seeing more)
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Re: Breathing the fresh air{story in need of Clitique}

Postby Azalaya » Sat Mar 09, 2013 1:34 pm

of course
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