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[shiki,]

Okaaayyy, so I'm not really sure if you're allowing posting, and apologize in advance if it isn't allowed. But I feel the need to post because really, this is amazing.

The characters (and their names) are very interesting so far, and I especially like Alaska, because she totally kicks -ss. cx

I particularly like how there's the werewolf theme/thing/whatever-it's-called, while not making the story all cheesy and unprofessional, or overly-exaggerated with the characters constantly changing to wolf because changing is oh-so-cool (sarcasm, sarcasm) and then changing back or something.
You keep it straight, professional, and vivid, with exciting action scenes, vibrant words and language, and a wry sense of humor that cracks me up.

In short, this is PURE EPIC.

You have now become one of my favorite chicken smoothie authors~

[thaliana,]

It's fine to post, I'm glad you did (you've given me an extra spur to keep writing ;p).

Hahah, thank you. Alaska's one of my favourite characters to write about and I might end up doing a little piece from her point of view, rather than third-person.
Thanks. I've tried really hard to get the werewolf-thing across without them constantly changing and running around as wolves. Usually I only have them do it if it is a last-chance scenario or the characters themselves would just find it easier to be a wolf at the moment XD.

I'm really glad you find it professional and you are enjoying it so much. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. ^^

[thaliana,]

being redone

[thaliana,]

being redone