Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

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Should I try making this a novel and publishing it?

OMG YES. I would so buy this!
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Yeah, go for it. Why not? :)
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Um... I guess, maybe... *shrug* I dunno...
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Perhaps not publishing, but it's pretty good.
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Yeah, well... It's kind of awkwardly worded and not very professional.
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Oh, gosh. You think this is publishable? Oh my, what the world is coming to...
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:56 am

Aw, thanks! It means so much to have someone interested in this! [I added some to the last paragraph that was up here, so start at the 6th paragraph. ;) ] And I don't mean for it to seem to end in random spots all the time; my muse just sparks and fades at the most random times. :roll:
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby Joypaw » Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:06 pm

Ah,I love how you hinted about what the newcomer is,instead of giving away crucial facts that would easily give it all up.And I understand that,I often take multiple breaks,adding on to my stories as I go.Don't worry about that,it won't look out of place aslong as you keep the same basic intrests your character has,like you did with the newcomer.This is very,very intresting so far. :clap:
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:19 pm

Thanks, I'm glad you think that was done well. :) I added more. [This is the most fun I've had in a long time! :mrgreen: ]
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:37 am

Alrighty, just added some of chapter 2!
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby Joypaw » Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:24 pm

I just got through reading your newest progress,and it's truly astounding! :D I would certainly be willing to buy this as it is for atleast ten dollars.You could have a career ahead of you,if you so desire to walk down the path of an author. :thumbup:
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:28 pm

Wow, I'm speechless! I can't tell you how much that means! <3 [OMG!]

BTW: There's a guy at my school who looks like Jason (I kind of based it off of him... I'm really hoping that's not too weird :what: ), except that his hair is very stylized/long in a specific way in certain places/scene-ish (but the same color as Jason's), and he has braces. But yeah.
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby Joypaw » Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:53 pm

No problem,and truthfully,I have many characters based off people I know. :lol: I'm sure they won't mind,because it is just a character,not them.If they have a problem with it,though,you can always go back and edit out anything he doesn't like. :)
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:57 am

I don't really know him, so he'd probably never read this anyway. I just thought that his eye and hair colors looked interesting together. (PS: It's probably going to take longer than before to keep writing more. I need some time to better come up with a plot/what happens next.)
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby wolves+horses » Sat Feb 09, 2013 11:24 am

I got in only 2 more paragraphs tonight. Sorry, I'm just having a tiny ounce of writer's block with what's going to immediately happen. Also, I changed her name to Vanessa (Vena for short), and Brenden to Brandon.
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Re: Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

Postby Joypaw » Sat Feb 09, 2013 5:15 pm

That's okay,I'm still a fan of this story,whether or not you type quickly. :)
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