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by b l u e s k i e s » Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:42 am
jellybeans, jordans, jocks.
→ → → → avalon eliza mcketo ← ← ← ←
the nitty-gritty; ; ;
about the names ;
"
My name is Avalon Eliza McKeto, but just call me Ava.
There are many different ways to interpret somebody's name. There's different cultures and each individual on this Earth has a slightly different way of life. Avalon can mean a lot of things, ranging from an island to a place that some historical guy was persecuted. Ava herself chooses to interpret her name as an island. She's an exotic person, with a unique way of life. She's "off the shore" -- different -- than other girls.
Despite Avalon's interpretation, her mother and father also had thoughts on it. They are a unique couple; very prestigious and... particular. They plan out every living second of their lives. They try to plan out other people's lives. They planned out Ava's live. Sometimes, their obsession with order is almost compulsive; it's like a disorder.
Anyways, the certain plan that was in store for Avalon's life was not to be forgotten, and her parents made it so no one could forget. Her life is her name.
'A'. Avalon will always remember the option to take advantage of people. Sometimes when she does it, she gets a funny feeling inside, telling her it's wrong. Her parents have trained her to replace the guilt with anger. 'V'. Avalon is intelligent. She, like her parents, always has a plan. It's different from her parents, though. In her mind, she sees her next move. After the first piece slides across the board in chess, she knows how to win already. This skill partially plays a part of her sports career. 'A'. Absolute. Nothing will change her mind. 'L'. Life, for Ava is to leave her mark. Her name should never be forgotten. 'O'. Everybody thinks Ava is perfect and innocent. Her outlook is pleasing to all. 'N'. Despite being a puppet of her parents, Avalon will remain natural and genuine. age ;
"
I'm sixteen.
Ava is sixteen years and 10.3 months old. 879.6 weeks. 6,157 days.
She was actually born on a pretty unique day. She's a leeper, born on Febuary 29,1996.
The birth was complicated. Her mother was in labor, but passed out before Ava got to see the world. The hospital staff rushed her to a special room with more complicated machines and more beeping noises. She'd been hooked up to all of the breathing machines, but still wasn't responding. The doctors thankfully reacted quickly, and a c-section was performed to save Ava's life.
Ava's mom wasn't as lucky. She went into a coma and stayed there. One month, two weeks, and three days later, she opened her drowsy eyes, and another week after that, she was released. She doesn't remember much, just the things before she was eighteen.
appearance ; ; ;
clothing style ;
"
Laid back? Sporty? I don't know how you'd describe it.
Ava's style is anything that has their school mascot under it.
You will usually find Avalon in a hoodie with the name "McKeto" pressed on the back. The front will probably have the school mascot or the logo of a competition she competed on. Under the hoodie, you'll see a t-shirt with the same graphics covering a messy tie dyed shirt.
Covering her bottom, you'll find Nike, Champion, or some other sporty brand of shorts under a pair of slouchy sweat pants with the waist rolled over once or twice.
Here shoes are the only things that she's picky about. She collect shoes... Adidas, Jordan's, Nike, you name it, she has it. In school, she always wears her plain black and white Adidas sandals with a bright, colorful, unique pair of socks under them. looks ;
"
I don't want to talk about it.
Avalon is insecure about her looks, but she shouldn't be. She's honestly gorgeous, and a lot of people know it.
Avalon has long, deep brown locks that travel past her bust. Her shiny hair is always perfectly straight, but usually thrown up into a pony tail. She has blunt bangs that pass her eyebrows and stop just above her eyelids. Her large, dark brown eyes are usually bare, but sometimes for school she lines them with a dark brown color. Her eyelashes are gorgeous. They're naturally curled out then up, and already a dark color. Ava's face is very slim, which makes her high cheekbones very noticeable. She has a narrow nose leading to her plump lips. Her smooth lips are a natural light pink color, and are usually curled into a cunning smile.
Her bust is rather large for her age, as well as her hips. Her tummy is flat, reflecting all of the sports that she plays. Her torso is short compared to her legs. She's rather short; 5 feet, 3 inches. Most of her height is her legs. Her legs and arms are toned with muscle. Her skin is always tan due to her Italian roots. She's gorgeous. guts and glory ; ; ;
history ;
"
It wasn't really complicated, you might as well not ask.
The first month or so of Avalon's life was tough. Her father was distraught over her mother. After a month of being unconscious, the little, glimmering speck of hope is gone for the patient. Avalon had met a lot of other young couples. She was a newborn; she had no idea what was going on. And she doesn't to this day.
Avalon was meeting parents. Her possible parents. Thankfully, her father was apprehensive of the couples, and picky. He finally decided on a couple about a month after Ava's birth. Two weeks and three days later, the lawyers met to confirm the adoption. Ava's father's signature, shaky from the stinging tears, was halfway done when his emergency ringtone sounded. He stopped, in the middle of the signature, to hear the news that his wife was alive.
He left the agency without another word.
After that, Avalon has been nothing but spoiled. She gets everything she wants, but for a price. She's always been pressured to be the perfect child. She's pressured to get all of the 1st's, all of the trophies, all of the ribbons, everything. She may not know the reason, but she knows that she's her parents' pride and joy. And, wanting to please, she does what she's been trained to do.personality ;
"
Well, competitive.
Ava's life is sports. They're the only thing that she wants to do. They're the things that she devotes all of her time to. So, of course she's going to be competitive. She usually wins; she's been trained in her sports since she could walk. When she doesn't win, she gets angry. She screams, she shouts, she plays dirty.
Avalon is also ambitious. She sets goals, and said goals are to be achieved. Avalon gets this mainly from her parents. It's not a natural trait, it's a forced trait. Although it may not be natural, Ava has mastered being ambitious and will embrace it until the day she dies.
She's organized. Her room doesn't have a cluttered spot in it. Yes, she loves to organize objects, but she organizes her life, too. It started with her sporting events schedule. Now it's made it's way up to her after high school life. She will be on the USA Women's Gymnastics team until the age of 30. She will then become a coach until retirement. She will find the love of her life at age 20, and be married when she's 23. She will become pregnant with her first child, a boy, at age 26. She will add four more children; three girls and one boy.
Ava is insecure. She care's what people think. It drives her to do her best at sporting events. She cares what her popularity status, and will do close to anything to make sure that she's not deemed a 'nerd'.
Avalon's personality goes on. She's sensitive, impatient, caring, dedicated, an fun to hang around with as long as you're not an enemy.likes ;
"
Well, competitive.
→ Gymnastics
→ Tennis
→ Basketball
→ Volleyball
→ Soccer
→ Powder Puff
→ Chess
→ Animals
→ Track & Field
→ Cross Country
→ Gyms
→ Energy Drinks
→ Footballlikes ;
"
Well, competitive.
→ Board Games
→ Losing
→ Games of Luck
→ Lebron James
→ Pressure
→ Nerds
→ Being Left Out
→ Unfairness
→ Cheating
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by b l u e s k i e s » Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:44 am
young, wild, & free.
→ → → → avalon eliza mcketo ← ← ← ←
the nitty-gritty; ; ;
about the names ;
"
My name is Avalon Eliza McKeto, but just call me Ava.
There are many different ways to interpret somebody's name. There's different cultures and each individual on this Earth has a slightly different way of life. Avalon can mean a lot of things, ranging from an island to a place that some historical guy was persecuted. Ava herself chooses to interpret her name as an island. She's an exotic person, with a unique way of life. She's "off the shore" -- different -- than other girls.
Despite Avalon's interpretation, her mother and father also had thoughts on it. They are a unique couple; very prestigious and... particular. They plan out every living second of their lives. They try to plan out other people's lives. They planned out Ava's live. Sometimes, their obsession with order is almost compulsive; it's like a disorder.
Anyways, the certain plan that was in store for Avalon's life was not to be forgotten, and her parents made it so no one could forget. Her life is her name.
'A'. Avalon will always remember the option to take advantage of people. Sometimes when she does it, she gets a funny feeling inside, telling her it's wrong. Her parents have trained her to replace the guilt with anger. 'V'. Avalon is intelligent. She, like her parents, always has a plan. It's different from her parents, though. In her mind, she sees her next move. After the first piece slides across the board in chess, she knows how to win already. This skill partially plays a part of her sports career. 'A'. Absolute. Nothing will change her mind. 'L'. Life, for Ava is to leave her mark. Her name should never be forgotten. 'O'. Everybody thinks Ava is perfect and innocent. Her outlook is pleasing to all. 'N'. Despite being a puppet of her parents, Avalon will remain natural and genuine. age ;
"
I'm seventeen.
Ava is seventeen years and 2.4 months old. 897.4 weeks. 6282 days.
She was born on a pretty normal day. She's a Scorpio, born on October 28,1995.
The birth was complicated. Her mother was in labor, but passed out before Ava got to see the world. The hospital staff rushed her to a special room with more complicated machines and more beeping noises. She'd been hooked up to all of the breathing machines, but still wasn't responding. The doctors thankfully reacted quickly, and a c-section was performed to save Ava's life.
Ava's mom wasn't as lucky. She went into a coma and stayed there. One month, two weeks, and three days later, she opened her drowsy eyes, and another week after that, she was released. She doesn't remember much, just the things before she was eighteen.
appearance ; ; ;
clothing style ;
"
Vintage? Sporty? I don't know how you'd describe it.
Ava's style is anything that has their school mascot under it, but that's only when she's alone or with her family.
You will usually find Avalon in a hoodie with the name "McKeto" pressed on the back. The front will probably have the school mascot or the logo of a competition she competed on. Under the hoodie, you'll see a t-shirt with the same graphics covering a messy tie dyed shirt.
Covering her bottom, you'll find Nike, Champion, or some other sporty brand of shorts under a pair of slouchy sweat pants with the waist rolled over once or twice.
When she's in public, Ava changes her style completely. Her style could be described as girly, or vintage. She wears a floral print quite often. When she's not wearing floral tops, she goes for pastel colors -- usually a dull pink color or a vivid pastel turquoise. Her tops are flowy and make her overall look very subtle and sweet looking. She also wears anything with lace patterns, including blazers and fitted tops. She looks approachable.
On the bottoms, you'll usually find jeans or skirts. Skirts and dresses are a passion of Ava's. There are rows beyond rows beyond rows of them in Ava's large, walk in closed. Her jeans are usually a light wash. Her skinny jeans are tight and well tailored, while her other jeans are ripped and rugged looking.
Another passion of Ava is her shoes. She wears shoes from Vans to Toms to Uggs to Jordan's to any other style. You name it, she wears it.
x c
looks ;
"
I don't want to talk about it.
Avalon is insecure about her looks, but she shouldn't be. She's honestly gorgeous, and a lot of people know it.
Avalon has long, deep brown locks that travel past her bust. Her shiny hair is always perfectly straight, but usually thrown up into a pony tail. She has blunt bangs that pass her eyebrows and stop just above her eyelids. Her large, dark brown eyes are usually bare, but sometimes for school she lines them with a dark brown color. Her eyelashes are gorgeous. They're naturally curled out then up, and already a dark color. Ava's face is very slim, which makes her high cheekbones very noticeable. She has a narrow nose leading to her plump lips. Her smooth lips are a natural light pink color, and are usually curled into a cunning smile.
Her bust is rather large for her age, as well as her hips. Her tummy is flat, reflecting all of the sports that she plays. Her torso is short compared to her legs. She's rather short; 5 feet, 3 inches. Most of her height is her legs. Her legs and arms are toned with muscle. Her skin is always tan due to her Italian roots. She's gorgeous.
She does have a few modifications. It's one thing that she just let's loose on. She has two tattoos currently, but plans to add more. She's not into large tattoos on herself, but can't resist them on guys. Her first tattoo was on the left side of her body. It's a small flock of birds on her collar bone. People don't notice the little birds often; they're tiny. They could be freckles. Her other tattoo is behind her right ear. It's a small feather.
Ava also has a few piercing. She has her ear lobe double pierced. She also got her cartilage pierced, but she rarely wears and earring there and if she does, it's a small diamond stud. Avalon is most proud of her belly button piercing. She feels like she can express herself with the more vivid rings. Also, it shows her wild side.
guts and glory ; ; ;
history ;
"
It wasn't really complicated, you might as well not ask.
The first month or so of Avalon's life was tough. Her father was distraught over her mother. After a month of being unconscious, the little, glimmering speck of hope is gone for the patient. Avalon had met a lot of other young couples. She was a newborn; she had no idea what was going on. And she doesn't to this day.
Avalon was meeting parents. Her possible parents. Thankfully, her father was apprehensive of the couples, and picky. He finally decided on a couple about a month after Ava's birth. Two weeks and three days later, the lawyers met to confirm the adoption. Ava's father's signature, shaky from the stinging tears, was halfway done when his emergency ringtone sounded. He stopped, in the middle of the signature, to hear the news that his wife was alive.
He left the agency without another word.
After that, Avalon has been nothing but spoiled. She gets everything she wants, but for a price. She's always been pressured to be the perfect child. She's pressured to get all of the 1st's, all of the trophies, all of the ribbons, everything. She may not know the reason, but she knows that she's her parents' pride and joy. And, wanting to please, she does what she's been trained to do.personality ;
"
Well, competitive but sweet.
Ava is truly a sweet person. She's the kind of girl that would do anything for her family and friends. They have always been number one in her eyes. If they'd do anything for her, why shouldn't she do everything for them?
Then, there's the part of Avalon where her true Scorpio traits show through. She's loyal and passionate. Any guy that get's her should feel lucky that he has her. She wouldn't cheat for anything. She's never understood the point of cheating... if you don't like the person you're dating, just don't date him. Avalon is intense. She goes to extremes. She focuses on what she does and she does it the best that her abilities allow her to. When she's doing academics or sports? Great. When she's partying? Well it depends. She has fun, and that's the only thing to say about it.
Ava's life is sports. They're the only thing that she wants to do. They're the things that she devotes all of her time to. So, of course she's going to be competitive. She usually wins; she's been trained in her sports since she could walk. When she doesn't win, she gets angry. She screams, she shouts, she plays dirty.
Avalon is also ambitious. She sets goals, and said goals are to be achieved. Avalon gets this mainly from her parents. It's not a natural trait, it's a forced trait. Although it may not be natural, Ava has mastered being ambitious and will embrace it until the day she dies.
She's organized. Her room doesn't have a cluttered spot in it. Yes, she loves to organize objects, but she organizes her life, too. It started with her sporting events schedule. Now it's made it's way up to her after high school life. She will be on the USA Women's Gymnastics team until the age of 30. She will then become a coach until retirement. She will find the love of her life at age 20, and be married when she's 23. She will become pregnant with her first child, a boy, at age 26. She will add four more children; three girls and one boy.
Ava is insecure. She care's what people think. It drives her to do her best at sporting events. She cares what her popularity status, and will do close to anything to make sure that she's not deemed a 'nerd'.
Avalon's personality goes on. She's sensitive, impatient, caring, dedicated, an fun to hang around with as long as you're not an enemy.likes ;
"
Well, competitive.
→ Gymnastics
→ Clothes
→ Parties
→ Tattoos
→ Tennis
→ Basketball
→ Volleyball
→ Soccer
→ Powder Puff
→ Chess
→ Animals
→ Track & Field
→ Cross Country
→ Gyms
→ Energy Drinksldislikes ;
"
Well, competitive.
→ Losing
→ Games of Luck
→ Pressure
→ Being Left Out
→ Unfairness
→ Cheating
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by b l u e s k i e s » Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:45 am
ellison avalon martin

element: Ellison will be water.
full name: Ellison Avalon Martin. Ellison's parents couldn't agree on a name. Many ideas ran through their minds, but still no agreement. After Ellison was born, they were forced to agree on a name. Taking the easy way out, they just combined their names, Ella and Harrison, to get Ellison.
nickname: Everybody calls her Ellie. She never asked for a nickname; it's just what people automatically call her.
age: Ellie is seventeen. She just graduated high school.
hair color: Her hair is a medium shade of brown with caramel and dirty blonde highlights.
eye color: Ellie's eyes are hazel, shifting from green to blue but usually staying at a neutral, light brown color.likes: She likes sports. Her favorites are swimming, volleyball, and tennis. She was on the varsity team for all of those in high school. She likes to be at the beach, hanging out with her friends, or spending time with her special someone.
dislikes: She doesn't get along with people who die their hair, get fake tans, or regularly visit the plastic surgeon to go under the knife for no reason. She doesn't like to be doing nothing. She hates people without a sense of humor.
history: Ellie has always lived in an upper class area of California. She has a close knit family, which she loves, but sometimes they get in her business. She has had quite a few boyfriends in her high school career, but never one whom she contemplated marriage with. She's friends with all five of the elements and loves to hang out with them. Nothing really traumatic has happened to her directly, which is why she remains with the same, rather bubbly, personality she's had since she was toddling around. Ellison had an amazing childhood that she'd never wish to change.
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by b l u e s k i e s » Sun Jan 13, 2013 8:27 am
Oh, hello. My name's Ethan Mitchell Jones, but, please, just call me Mitch. I love the name Ethan, but it gets confusing if people call me Ethan because it's my dad's name, too. So technically, my real name is Ethan Mitchell Jones, Jr. The interesting thing about my name is that my parents asked my grandma to name me. She obviously picked the same name as she picked for my father. My parents told me that they would have picked that name, too. Anyways, I'm seventeen years old. I was born in the year 1995. I'm a winter baby, born on the seventeenth of December. They say that people born in winter have clear skin, and that proved true on me. I specifically blow out the candles at 10:10 in the evening. I save the cake for then because I think that being born on that time is an honor. 
Well, I'm a man. I'm pretty sure I'm a man. By that, I mean the last time I checked, I was a male. And I still am. That's the simplest way to put it. But, if you still need clarification, then I am a male. My hair is a dusty, light brown color. I keep it just long enough so I can sweep it to the side. My eyebrows are thick, and, well, manly looking. My eyes are dark hazel. Some people just automatically assume that they're brown, but they eventually realize that they're hazel when the more green side of them show. My skin is clear and pale. In the summer, I tan really well, but my tan fades my the middle of fall. My lips are a naturally nude pink color. My teeth are perfectly straight now. I had to get braces when I was younger, but it all paid off. My teeth are very bright, and when I smile, a lot of people notice. My clothing style is just like every other average guy. Hoodies, jeans, the basics, you know? I also love to wear hats. Snapbacks, preferably. I'm rather athletic and I'm involved in a lot of sports, so I wear Nike's most of the time. I also wear the Nike socks that go just past my ankles. Sometimes, when I'm being lazy, I wear Adidas sandals instead of my signature Nike tennis shoes. I'm the average height and weight of a sixteen year old boy. I have a lean but muscular build. I don't have any tattoos, but I have one of my ears pierced. I usually just wear a cubic zirconium stud.
I'm Polish and German. Half and half. I don't think I could be considered a mutt. I mean, a Labrador and a Poodle mixed together isn't a mutt. It's a Labradoodle. People who don't know me consider my personality as shy. To an extent, that's true. I get nervous when I talk to girls, so I just try to avoid it altogether. Therefore, I'm shy. I'd also be considered a very intelligent person, but only my immediate family and I know that. I don't show my intelligence because as soon as someone sees you as smart, they automatically assume that your a 'nerd' or a 'teacher's pet', and I'm neither of those. I don't want people to think that I'm something, when I'm honestly not. My immediate family and my best friend, who is a girl, consider me as sweet and caring. That's what I thrive to be. I want people to trust me, and to like me. I don't want to be judged. I also have the typical boy part of my personality, though. I can say stuff before I think, I can be a pig, I can be lazy, I can think things about a girl that are rude, but I try not to. And I regret when things slip out of my mouth that aren't supposed to. I like sports. I mainly just play four; football, baseball, soccer, and basketball. My favorite sport is football, because it's what I'm best at. I also like to eat things. I'll eat anything if you ask me to, and I end up enjoying most of it. I love to have fun, most of all. I don't like people who judge others. Everyone's is who they are for a reason, so don't pick on them for it. I also don't like mean girls. My best friend isn't the most popular, and let's just say that she's had her share of rumors spread. I'm as straight as straight can be. I like girls. I've always been attracted to them. Some people judge me as gay just because I have a hard time talking to girls. I'm not gay. I have nothing against gay people.. it's just not for me. I don't have a crush. I can't. It's illegal. And I don't have a girlfriend, either. That's even more illegal than having a crush. I guess I'll find out who I'm going to be with soon enough, anyways. I don't have any siblings. It's just me and my parents. I've had a pretty boring past. Nothing 'amazing' happens to me. I guess I should feel blessed, though. Nothing horrible ever happens to me either. I have a dog. He's a Siberian Husky. I named him Eskimo. I just thought that it fit with his breed. He's nine years old, though. I don't think he has much longer on this Earth. That's my life. Not much excitement.
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by b l u e s k i e s » Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:52 am
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elijah "eli" mitchell jennings
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"Eli's input here.
Detailed description about first name goes here. אֱלִיָּהוּ
Add what each letter stands for here.
Basic description of last name included.
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