The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by kiodi » Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:19 pm
You're a sweetheart for taking it so well. With intentions to change those words and the beautiful writing I'm seeing, I think I'll have to be bookmarking this one.
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by nivans.piers » Mon Jan 07, 2013 1:08 pm
ah thanks! i'm naturally really easy going and laid back. I am glad you like it! 
" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
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"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
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Not like b a c k h o m e "
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" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
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" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
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v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by OrangeNeon » Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:02 pm
This is really good, I enjoyed reading. But I did notice you don't captitalize your I's?
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by nivans.piers » Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:04 pm
yeah, that happens when i start getting lazy. So then i type really fast. Ugh, i didn't capitalize it again! i keep forgetting! now it's slightly bothering me.... I'll start trying to capitalize them more from now on! *nods!*
" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by OrangeNeon » Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:06 pm
Haha, that's alright. It happens to me too :p
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by nivans.piers » Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:08 pm
yes, I'm not the only one! I just realized I'm naturally comical, slightly insane, yet really calm. I'm pretty awesome like that.
" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by inactive20000009 » Sun Jan 27, 2013 2:59 pm
Oh my goodness <333 Such lovely writing. I love this! Keep it up ^u^
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by nivans.piers » Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:00 pm
yep!^^ thank you! i will continue this on tomorrow.
" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
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PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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Re: The Pianist~ critics wanted!^^
by nivans.piers » Sun Mar 10, 2013 5:00 pm
bump
" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
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