TJOG: The First War

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Do you think this series went well?

§ Yes!
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§ Duh yeah! It was awesomer that PIE!
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§ No. Not at all.
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§ Series? What's a series? Oh well. Still a good-ish book
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:39 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:Cant wait for it * goes back to previous books to figure out mistery dog*

Check the first book. xD





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:44 am

Oooh I think I got it XD

I should be quiet now... Before This takes up several pages o.o my bad....
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:45 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:Oooh I think I got it XD

I should be quiet now... Before This takes up several pages o.o my bad....

LOL, PM me your answer. xD





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:18 am

GET OFF GINGER!
I shoved Lillian off me. Zaylen?! Dawn Lily?!
Hi Ginger! she said, smiling. We heard commotion and came to see what was going on and help. She glanced at Zaylen, as if saying, Hey! Don't say why this really happened!
She rolled her eyes, then nodded. She jumped on Lillian, pulling her off. Then, she changed,to that CREEPY dogs in one of Alex's entries in HER journal. I shrieked, then backed up, along with the Others. Dawn Lily narrowed her eyes, then made light come from her paw, and Zaylen made a candy light appear. Alex stepped forward to join them. She sighed, then looked at them
You two go first, she growled. If she doesn't bend, I'll take care of her. I blinked, looking at Them. I knew Alex had anger issues, but, honestly? Dawn Lily nodded, and Zaylen smiled. Dawn Lily made light go towards my frenemy, and it became rose-red when it was near her. It hit her, and she stumbled backwards.
Zaylen smirked, and then joined in with Dawn. Soon, she was backing up, howling in pain. We (Hazel, Wind and Windsong, Forest, and I) all used our powers, too. She howled, growing larger. That's when Alex did her power.
She shut her eyes, then the blood came back on the floor. Lillian's paws skidded on it, and she tripped, skidding across it. She made the blood vanish, and soon Lillian was getting back to her feet, but then it changed.
Um.... what's going on? Hazel breathed.
They're trying to defeat an enemy that can't be defeated.
We.... we have to stop them!
Windsong jumped forward, but Wind grabbed her, pulling her back. No.
She growled under her breath, but then Alex, Zaylen, and Dawn all blasted their powers at her. She vanished, and then Alex sealed the gateway. Wait, there's a GATEWAY here?!?!
Yeah know, I forgot about that, Wind muttered.
And then, we go back downstairs, shaken, scared, and a little nervous, we clambered back downstairs, all getting in each others' way, and then a dog appeared in front of us.
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Oh, the nerve of him.
Hello, he said, glancing at us. I think you're late for class.
We shoved him aside and ran to class. I just barely sat down when the teacher arrived. I hit my head against the desk.
Why him? I mumbled. The dog spoke.
I am your new teacher, Shock Wave, but I'll be called by Shock. I winced. He reminded me of Flower of Moonwater.
What are you're names?
We answered him. Not like we had a choice, anyways.
He reached us Ten. We all told him, then he smiled. You ten, he murmured to us. See me after class. He walked off with a twinkle in his eye. I think I'm gonna go and tell you what happened after class, TJOG.
Goodbye!!!!


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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:00 pm

Your welcome Dawn! I love the personality you gave him XD
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:14 pm

WhiteKitsune wrote:Your welcome Dawn! I love the personality you gave him XD

Thanks!!!!





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby daz » Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:22 pm

I seriously LOVE this!!!
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:24 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:I seriously LOVE this!!!

Meep...! Yayz





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Mon Nov 26, 2012 9:04 am

'Ello. I changed my username. AGAIN. I may stick with this for a while, I like it ^.^
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Dec 01, 2012 11:34 am

Shock Wave, new teacher, must you teach such confusing and annoying way to fight? He showed us a way we'd probably never use.
Class? Boring. As usual.
Hey-o, Hazel said to me. I turned and smiled at her.
'Ello.
Hi, guys, Forest said.
Do you guys want to see something?
What?
Just follow us!
Um... ok...?
Wind and Windsong darted ahead of us, back up the stairs. I followed, along with Hazel and Forest. Wind burst up the stairs first, then Windsong, then us.
Are we being followed?
I heard Hazel glance over the railing, then back to us. No, why?
Windsong nodded. Good.
We ran a few more feet, then heard soft paws in front of us. Windsong and Wind stopped, and we bumped into them, but Hazel jumped over us, and continued running forward. We all scrambled up and followed.
I heard voices as we burst through another corridor. We jumped up another flight of stairs, then this time, we all stopped at the same time.
I blinked. "What's going on?!"
I heard a scream. Dawn Lily?!
Alex darted out, then Zaylen and Amy followed her.
Get her to stop!
Ho boy. We darted in, and saw the prettiest place in the world. It had flowers, vines, and LOTS of space. But the most breath-taking thing was the-
The Fountain....
DAWN LILY NO!!
She whirled around, and stared at us. She dropped what she was writing in, and ran off. I blinked, then saw something written on the Fountain that wasn't there before.
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'I promise I'll find you Jaded Emerald'.... Who's that?
Me, a voice whispered. We all glanced in the Fountain, and a ghost appeared. It smiled at us.
Wind, Windsong, and Zaylen jumped. Alex shuttered.
What did she mean?!
She meant that she'll find the real me, and let me live again. She barley just finished that, and was writing it in her journal, when y'all spooked her.
Ooooohhhhhh..... Huh?
He sighed sadly and looked behind us. Go. You aren't supposed to be here. And Alex, Jade said, glancing at her. Give this to her, please. He tapped it on an empty page and handed it to her. She took it gingerly (hey, my name!!) and nodded.
Come on, Hazel said. We scrambled up the hill. I glanced back. Bye, Jaded Emerald, I whispered. He looked up and smiled at me. I sighed, turned around, and followed my friends back inside.
.....
Alex gave it back to Dawn Lily, and then it was already night. We went to bed, exhausted.
Well, goodnight, TJOG.





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