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Who's your favorite EVIL character (thank you katnisshungergames10 for the idea of this poll)?

The Demon Queen
9
26%
Andrea
1
3%
Alexa
1
3%
Aurauria
1
3%
Rhubarb
15
44%
Fuego
1
3%
Leonardo
0
No votes
Anger
3
9%
Tallon
0
No votes
Santa
3
9%
 
Total votes : 34

Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:47 pm

whoa gal1 wrote:second series!! I can't believe it! yay! and no you don't. do you have any more epic awesome sauce books to share? I'm not saying that TIAJNAD isn't epic awesome sauce, it's just you have a lot of talent, and I know you are using it on more books than TIAJNAD. and the books you have already written are all epic awesome sauce.

Thanks! :) And I understand what you're trying to say. I have ideas for like thirty books to write at the moment. XD Usually the ideas just stay in my head, though, and I never get them out on paper (or in this case, the computer [I write on the computer]). But there's one book (which I will be publishing next year) called Wings (I'll tell you more about it later), and I just got a new idea today... but I'm not sure how my new idea will turn out. It's sort of going to be about vampires, but not like most stories. I don't know if it will turn out well, though, because I've never really written (or read) books about vampires or wearwolves or anything like that. But the idea I have in my head is different then most vampire stories I've heard about. Anyway, I'm thinking about writing that vampire story too.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:33 pm

Ohmiawsomesauceeicnesspieinacan!

I looove this! Moooooorrrrreeeee
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Oct 20, 2012 5:23 am

Rebel Faery wrote:Ohmiawsomesauceeicnesspieinacan!

I looove this! Moooooorrrrreeeee

Yay! New fan! And I'm afraid I'll have to write more later. I have to clean the house. -.-

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:41 am

More, 'cuz you guys have waited so patiently. :)















It was the next day. We all sat down in the grass at recess.
So, what do you guys got to talk about?
My birthday is tomorrow.
I'm thinking about cutting my hair.
I found out that there's a doughnut shop opening up downtown.
I wanna ask how come you seem to be making all the decisions, Jenette.
We all stared at Suzi.
What do you mean?
Oh come on, Jen. You-
Don't. Call. Me. That.
You don't order me around, Jen.
If I were you I'd watch what I say.
Yes, but you're not me so I suggest being quiet.
My eyes got big. Why were they fighting?
That's funny. You said that I couldn't order you around, and yet you order me around.
Yes, but you don't count because you're ugly.
How does my looks have anything to do with this?
Because if you're ugly enough then you can destroy yourself.
Jenette growled.
That's a complete and total lie.
No. In fact, you'd know. Because you're dear Clyff probably died from ugliness.
Jenette suddenly sprung up and jumped onto Suzi. They rolled down the hill, fighting each other. Everybody else sprung to their feet and ran down the hill.
Suzi, stop it!
But Suzi didn't stop.
Jenette! You know better than this!
Jenette didn't stop either. They scratched and punched each other.
Don't you ever mention his name again!
Clyff was killed, Clyff was killed!
Suzi was saying it in a sing-song voice. I remembered who Clyff was. It was Jenette's love.
Clyff was killed by me!
Shut up!
Jenette sprung up into the air and came down, her fist crashing hard into Suzi's stomach. Suzi lost her breath and wheezed. Jenette saw her chance. She picked up Suzi and flung her across the grass. Suzi crashed against a tree and crumpled to the ground.
SUZI!
We all ran to the tree, except for Jenette. She just stood there, staring at the tree in awe. Suzi got to her feet quickly when we reached the tree.
Get away! This is our fight!
Suzi ran up to Jenette and they resumed their fight. I looked over at Gish.
Why are they doing this?
For once, I have no idea.
We all stared at Jenette and Suzi, fighting harder and harder as the minutes passed by.
If somebody doesn't stop them they're going to kill each other!
I looked over at Ginger and Gish. They didn't budge. Guess I was going to be that someone that stopped them.
Wish me luck.
I took a deep breath and ran into the fight. I grabbed Jenette by her arms and pulled her away from Suzi. But Suzi lashed at both Jenette and I.
Let her go! We're not finished!
Suzi was suddenly pulled back. I looked behind her and saw that Ginger was pulling her away from us. Ginger pulled Suzi in the complete opposite direction that I was pulling Jenette, which was a good thing. We had to get them as far away from each other as possible.
Meet me back here in an hour! Gish, make sure Suzi stays down!
Gish nodded and followed Ginger while I pulled Jenette over to a tree. I shoved her to the ground, but she got to her feet quickly and started running toward Suzi. But I grabbed Jenette and shoved her to the ground again.
JENETTE!
Jenette looked up at me, a strange look in her eye. Her eyes locked on mine and her eyes changed. She was back to normal.
I'm sorry, Amy. I don't know what happened. I just... when she mentioned Clyff I just lost control.
Why?
She killed Clyff, Amy. He died in front of me.
Pete.
Jenette looked up at me.
Jenette, you know that I loved Pete. But then he betrayed me, which is worse than him dying. He nearly killed me. I didn't even know what to think when he did actually die, and I still don't know!
I'm sorry, Amy. I totally forgot about Pete.
Yeah, well I remember him every night. I can never let him go. He was the only one I ever loved. The only one I ever kissed. You're not the only one who lost a loved one.
I'm sorry. I forgot.
It's alright. I know that you loved Clyff a lot, and I'm sorry about him too.
We were quiet for a moment.
It's sort of strange how both of our boyfriends died.
It's even stranger how they both died by Suzi.
Jenette suddenly stood to her feat.
Wait a minute.
What? What is it?
Suzi killed both of our boyfriends.
Yeah. That's what we just said.
I know, but...
Jenette's eyes got even bigger.
Amy? Where's Gish and Ginger?
They're trying to calm down Suzi.
We have to get to them immediately!
Jenette started running.
Why?!
I ran and caught up with her (amazingly. She can run faster than me, so I don't know how I caught up).
Suzi's still evil!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby daz » Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:55 am

WHAT THE FUDGE CICLES!?!?!!/ (Christa moment) WOW!!!! MOOOORE!!
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Postby TPDebate » Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:51 am

AGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHES STILL EVIL!! how can she keep that under wraps for so long?! and, gishy!
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Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
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One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
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Postby star star. » Sat Oct 20, 2012 1:29 pm

DO WHA?!?!??!?!





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Postby VesVes » Sat Oct 20, 2012 2:08 pm

What? I thought Suzi had turned good! D8 I liked her better good!

But great story, nonetheless!
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Oct 20, 2012 6:19 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:WHAT THE FUDGE CICLES!?!?!!/ (Christa moment) WOW!!!! MOOOORE!!

lol
whoa gal1 wrote:AGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHES STILL EVIL!! how can she keep that under wraps for so long?! and, gishy!

You shall see! MWAHAHA!
katnisshungergames10 wrote:DO WHA?!?!??!?!

*dun dun dun*
Nyota Hyena wrote:What? I thought Suzi had turned good! D8 I liked her better good!

But great story, nonetheless!

You shall see what happens... and thank you! :)

MORRRRE!




















Wait- what- who- Suzi- HUH?!
WHAT?!
Come on!
We quickly ran and I immediately spotted Suzi.... who had somehow turned back into the Demon Queen! She had cornered Ginger and Gish against a wall, and she held a gun in her hand. Jenette ran to Suzi (I mean the Demon Queen) like a ninja and jumped onto her. Jenette toppled Suzi to the ground, but Suzi suddenly disappeared and reappeared next to me. She grabbed me and put the gun to my throat.
Nobody move or I shoot!
Yeah, nobody shoot 'cause I don't want to die!
Quiet!
Well fine, miss huffy.
Suzi tried to hold me back, but she can't hold back me. She can never hold back me! I'm- Suzi! I'm Suzi! Get away, Demon Queen! No, you get out of here, Suzi! I own you now! No, I'm taking back me!
Wow. This was really weird. Apparently Suzi was two peopl; Suzi and the Demon Queen.
THE DEMON QUEEN RULES!!! SUZI IS AND ALWAYS WILL BE HERE!
Suzi screamed and collapsed to the ground. She then abruptly stood to her feet and shook her head. Then she looked at me and the gun that had fallen to the ground when it had fallen from her hand.
I'm sorry! I- I didn't mean it!
And with that she ran away. I started to run after her, but Jenette stopped me.
Let her go, Amy. She needs some time alone.
I nodded. I don't know what had just happened, but I knew that Suzi was back for now. But how had the Demon Queen come back? And why?

((sorry for short entry. Gotta get to bed.))

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:05 pm

Suzi v Demon Queen... Intresting...
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
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