~-Suzi: Broken - A TIAJNAD Backstory

[VesVes]

I really like this story, and even though Suzi is supposed to be a villain, I really feel sorry for her. I mean, what kind of parent sells their kid?

But anyway, this is a great story! I shall be stalking this.

[• DEFY THE CAPITOL •]

I really like this story, and even though Suzi is supposed to be a villain, I really feel sorry for her. I mean, what kind of parent sells their kid?

But anyway, this is a great story! I shall be stalking this.

Yay! New stalker! And yeah, I sort of feel sorry for her, too. I also know other stuff that others don't know about her ('cause I created her), some pretty sad stuff.

[• DEFY THE CAPITOL •]

((Sorry for double posting)), a little secret I've been keeping for those of you that have read the other 10 books in the Amy Series.... click this link: http://i1311.photobucket.com/albums/s68 ... 7983fc.jpg
What do ya think?

[Rebel Faery]

Oh my StarClan JF! We get more Amyness... More Bobyness! Or is dhe going to call it Fred this time?

[• DEFY THE CAPITOL •]

Oh my StarClan JF! We get more Amyness... More Bobyness! Or is dhe going to call it Fred this time?

lol! And it's still gonna be Bob. I just love the name Bob, so I can't evah get rid of it!! Anyways, I will start writing the second series probably after I finished this book.

[daz]

YAAY!!! TIAJNAD TWO!!!!!! I IZ HAPPEH!!! more...?

[• DEFY THE CAPITOL •]

YAAY!!! TIAJNAD TWO!!!!!! I IZ HAPPEH!!! more...?

lol, and of course!























I opened my eyes slowly. Where was I? What was going on? I tried to move and that's when I realized that I was chained. My ankles, wrists, and neck were chained to the wall. Wherever I was, whoever took me, didn't want me to get out. I heard a door slowly opened, and light flooded the dark room. But the light didn't burn. Nothing could hurt me anymore. A dog in a white coat walked in. Now with the light I could see that I was in a cage, and there were multiple guns on the ceiling pointed in my direction. Next to the guns were multiple cameras. On the floor were lasers, and I could hear the bars of my cage buzzing, meaning that it was an electric cage. The dog looked up at me and put his hands on the bars. Then he spoke (his words will be in tangerine).
None of these weapons hurt me. We took some of your blood and put it into all of this equipment, so it only works on you and you alone. That is why I am not hurt even though I am standing on lasers and touching an electric fence.
Well that explained a few things.
But if you somehow break out of those chains and touch this cage, you will get electrocuted. If you somehow get out of the cage without touching the bars then you will be standing on lasers and be blown to bits. If you somehow escape that, then we will see you on the video cameras and we will shoot you down. And if you somehow disable our video cameras and reach the door, as soon as you touch it fire will come out and consume you within five seconds.
They just thought of everything, didn't they?
So I might as well not waste my time trying to escape is what you're saying, right?
Correct.
I nodded as best as I could with the chain around my neck.
So, now that I'm done with that, we'll begin.
He turned to a camera on the wall.
Go ahead!
The electricity on the bars of my cage stopped buzzing and the door to the cage swung open. The man in the white coat stepped in. The bars around my neck, wrists, and ankles opened and I fell to the ground. Two other men walked, each grabbing one of my arms. They dragged me out of the cage. I could see that the lasers were no longer on the floor. Then they opened the front door (which apparently had it's fire disabled) and pulled me out of there. I didn't fight, them though. I was curious. There was also the fact that there were about five men behind me each with some sort of large gun pointed at me, and I assumed that if I even moved that they would fire at me. The men dragged me into a large room, then, with multiple tables. They chained me to one and then doused me with cold water.
So that if you happen to use your electricity you will get shocked as well.
Right, because electricity travels faster in water. And I was wet. Made sense.
Once the other doctors come in, we will begin.
I looked over at the other tables. There were at least a few hundred tables, each with dogs strapped to them. Double doors on the left side of the room suddenly swung open, and many doctors walked in, each dragging a cart with wheels behind them. Each doctor stopped in front of a table with a doc strapped to it. Soon every table had a doctor, including mine. All was quiet for a moment.
Begin!
My doctor immediately got to work. He turned to his cart (which had multiple objects on it) and pulled out a needle. He stuck my arm with it, and I grimaced. It didn't hurt too bad, at least. After he was done poking me a few times he took my blood. And then he was done. He left, and the guards unchained me from the table and dragged me back to my cage. They chained me to the wall again, closed my cage, and shut the door. The electric bars came on again and the laser beams appeared again. I couldn't believe it. What had happened to me back there wasn't nearly as bad as when the Magician had given me all those needles. Sure, they were needles all the same, but at least these people didn't put me on display for others to gawk at.

I awoke to the sound of a door opening. I opened my eyes and looked around. Guards came in again, and opened my cage. Everything shut off and they unchained me and took me to the room with the tables I had been to the day before. They chained me to the same table I had been in, and I saw the same dogs I had seen the day before. Then the double doors opened and the doctors came in with their carts and stopped in front of each table like they had the day before.
Begin!
And my doctor gave me needles again. This'll probably happen everyday, I thought. And I was right.... yet completely wrong. The doctor kept on poking me. This time I counted how many needles he gave me. In total there were about ten needles he gave me. And then he took my blood. So about 11, counting the blood one. He turned around, and I thought he was going to leave, but he didn't. He turned to his cart and took out a knife. He sliced a chunk of my skin off (making me yelp), then put it in a plastic bag. Then he left me and I was taken back to my cage and chained up again.

The next morning I awoke the same. They took me to the tables and chained me up. The doctors came in.
Begin!
Man, was that all the dude said? My doctor poked me another ten times, took my blood. Yada, yada. Same old, same old. But then he did something different. He called an assistant over. The assistant wrenched open my mouth and the doctor took out a long, skinny tube-like thing. He put the end of the tube-like thing in my mouth and started to slide it down my throat. I gagged as it went down. I looked over at what looked like a computer screen and nearly hurled. As the long tube was going down my throat I could see the inside of my throat on the screen. There was a camera attached on the end of the tube that was now down my throat. The doctor kept on pushing the long tube down, and it kept on going. I couldn't peel my eyes away from the screen. I realized that there must have been a light attached to the end of the chord as well, because I learned at school that your body was completely dark.
The doctor suddenly stopped putting the tube down and looked at the screen. Then he spoke (his words will be in brownish grey).
Woah.
I tried to ask what was going on, but I couldn't because there was a tube in my mouth. But luckily he told me.
There's electricity surrounding your heart.
I looked at the screen, and sure enough, there was a ball of electricity surrounding my heart. Little sparks shot out of my heart every now and then as well. After the doctor had scribbled down something on a pad of paper, he continued shoving the tube down my throat. He stopped suddenly and gasped.
You have something growing inside you!

[Rebel Faery]

Woah...

And maybe Amy could call it Bob II? Ooh, please tell me Rhubarb's in it!

[• DEFY THE CAPITOL •]

Woah...

And maybe Amy could call it Bob II? Ooh, please tell me Rhubarb's in it!

*Dun dun dun*
Perhaps. And you shall see!!

More!!






















I had something growing inside me? Okay, now tell me that didn't sound weird.
I have no idea what it is.
Many doctors came over, then, and looked at the screen, all trying to figure out what was inside me.
It looks like it's getting bigger.
I looked at the screen, and sure enough. There was a weird sluggish thing and it was getting fatter.
We need to remove it before it kills her. If it kills her, our research will be ruined!
Yeah. They didn't care about the fact that I would be dead. They just cared about their stupid research. The doctor turned to his assistant.
Get me a knife. I'm getting that thing out. Now.
The assistant handed the doctor a knife.
It looks like it's in the stomach area, heading towards her heart.
And without any warning, he shoved the knife through my stomach and began cutting. It hurt worse than the needles. Worse than the tube that was still in my mouth. But I didn't scream. I would not give them the pleasure seeing me in pain. Never. He kept on cutting on my stomach. Suddenly, he stopped.
Hand me some pliers!
His assistant handed him some pliers, and he shoved them into my stomach, and soon he took it back out. The pliers was holding that sluggish thing that had been in my body. He put the sluggish thing (which was still moving and growing) in a plastic bag. And then I thought of something. How was I not dying? I was bleeding more than I ever had, and I knew I was still losing a lot of blood. Half my stomach was wide open.
Get me a needle.
The assistant handed the doctor a needle, and he quickly sewed my stomach back up.
Well, I think we're done for today.
And they took me back to my cage, my stomach hurting like heck. But I fell asleep, nonetheless, dreaming up nightmares all night.

[winnie44]

Ahhhhhh! So amazing! I love it!
I wonder what the "thingy" is....