"Pets Afterlife" Book1

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As the year went past the puppies grew fast. Their personalities were each unique. The youngest one was much lighter than the rest, barely white. He was the most independent, instead of playing with his siblings he would rather venture off into the yard. He was also the first to realize the hole under the fence. That's why Johnny named him Columbus, such a huge name for such a small pup. The girl of the litter was called Angel, it's ironic because she is nothing close to an angel. She seems to find fun in chewing the furniture instead of the toys. But then again, who could blame her? She's the only girl in the house. Her older brother, Spud, is the laziest. When the other pups play outside he would sleep, but he would be glad to join in to eat. Lastly, is Einstein, he is the smartest and darkest of the litter. His fur is a dark cinnamon color. Johnny enjoys teaching him all the best dog tricks. In the past year, he's learned how to ride a skateboard, how to speak, how to beg, and how to stay. His patience with humans proves him to be the most obedient. Johnny isn't the only one who enjoys playing with this one, Rocky does too! Rocky usually keeps his peace with the pups but him an Einstein grew pretty close ever since Einstein taught him how to open the doors to the fridge. The humans began to think that Johnny slept walked at night and ate all the food when they kept waking up to an empty fridge.

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I decided not to continue watching over them for awhile. It became an obsession to see if they were alright. From the looks of it, they moved on and forgot about me. I gazed down at my paws. A tear dropped from my face.
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