The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

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Would this be something you would read? Should I make this "book"?

Definitely would read it and nothing needs to be changed!
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This sounds like something I would pick up though it sounds a bit off?
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A bit cliche for my taste, no need to change anything though.
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14%
Why would I read this? It's horrible!
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14%
It's ok but you should re-write or switch some stuff around.
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14%
Your all over the place! Let me know when you start making some sense.
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:05 am

hmm... darn this blockage! and just when I was getting into it! DX
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:07 am

lol ya :P i is so sorry
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:08 am

it's fine. :) I'll think of something.
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Saamura is my character so
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By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:14 am

i know you will cause you are good at that lol
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:39 am

^
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:48 am

^
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:49 am

so have you thought of anything new?
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:51 am

Might have a vague idea on how to start it now. ;)
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Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
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In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:55 am

well that's good :D
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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby scmarshtacky » Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:36 am

This seems to have a good bit of potential. :D Probably if I were you, I would make what you've written so far the prologue (since prologues generally are somewhat vague), and then as you go through all the chapters, just add tidbits of information where appropriate to fill in what you've written already. That's my suggestion. Anyway, I'll be bookmarking this. ;)
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